It just took me under an hour to clear off 3 vehicles, shovel out two walkways, and shovel off two porches!!!!! One vehicle and porch is that of my elderly neighbor. I'm now a sweaty, exhausted, thirsty mess, but at least I got that chore out of the way!!!!! 😁
Now to relax and drink some H2O.
Hot cocoa. It's the way to go.
I would've… if I had some.
If I could send things through a screen, my house has plenties of hot chocolate.
Hmmm…. Find another fruit that starts with 'o'.
It just took me under an hour to clear off 3 vehicles, shovel out two walkways, and shovel off two porches!!!!! One vehicle and porch is that of my elderly neighbor. I'm now a sweaty, exhausted, thirsty mess, but at least I got that chore out of the way!!!!! 😁
Now to relax and drink some H2O.
Hot cocoa. It's the way to go.
I would've… if I had some.
If I could send things through a screen, my house has plenties of hot chocolate.
Peppermint candy cane hot coco?
@Winter-The-Gingersnap By the way, I like your profile picture.
Oh thanks my dude wasn't expecting that.
It just took me under an hour to clear off 3 vehicles, shovel out two walkways, and shovel off two porches!!!!! One vehicle and porch is that of my elderly neighbor. I'm now a sweaty, exhausted, thirsty mess, but at least I got that chore out of the way!!!!! 😁
Now to relax and drink some H2O.
Hot cocoa. It's the way to go.
I would've… if I had some.
If I could send things through a screen, my house has plenties of hot chocolate.
Peppermint candy cane hot coco?
No, just dark chocolate and marshmallow, but we do have candy canes.
No, just dark chocolate and marshmallow, but we do have candy canes.
That works! 😁
Vortex remained sitting in the dining room, reminiscing over the past.
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Music blared out of the room next door. Oliver groaned in annoyance, placing a pillow over his ears in a vain attempt to drown out the noise. He had a test to take in the morning, and needed as much rest as he could get.
The blankets fly upwards and over as Oliver angrily climbs out of bed, and storms his way across the room. He wraps himself in his house-coat, opens the door, and goes across the hall. He pounds his fist furiously on the door. Another young man answers the door, a can of beer in his hand.
"Could you turn that down," he starts. "Some of us have to get some fucking sleep!"
"Oh, uh, sorry 'bout that dude. I'll turn it down."
Oliver relaxes upon realizing that the other guy is listening to a Fall Out Boy album, and noticing that his eyes are a bright emerald green.
Remember Sy, show not tell. Show that his eyes are green. Don't straight out tell that they're green.
That was just a little snippet from a rp that I was doing with… someone.
That was just a little snippet from a rp that I was doing with… someone.
Ahhh. I gotchu now. Well share the information then 🙃
That was just a little snippet from a rp that I was doing with… someone.
Ahhh. I gotchu now. Well share the information then 🙃
Luckily I put it on a doc! 🙂 https://docs.google.com/document/d/18RpO6znvEJJC1Wk2PSJAcJpoBatKpfEIdKoCqz4uyuM/edit?usp=drivesdk
Remember Sy, show not tell. Show that his eyes are green. Don't straight out tell that they're green.
How can you /show/ that his eyes are green?
"(name/pronoun's) emerald green eyes flicked about the room nervously."?
Is one way, at least.
That was just a little snippet from a rp that I was doing with… someone.
Ahhh. I gotchu now. Well share the information then 🙃
Luckily I put it on a doc! 🙂 https://docs.google.com/document/d/18RpO6znvEJJC1Wk2PSJAcJpoBatKpfEIdKoCqz4uyuM/edit?usp=drivesdk
Commenting is on too!
"(name/pronoun's) emerald green eyes flicked about the room nervously."?
No, that is still telling. You have to add other factors. I'll show you. 🙃
Remember Sy, show not tell. Show that his eyes are green. Don't straight out tell that they're green.
How can you /show/ that his eyes are green?
Here, I'll rewrite the entire little snippet by the showing portion.
Here's the original.
Oliver relaxes upon realizing that the other guy is listening to a Fall Out Boy album, and noticing that his eyes are a bright emerald green.
Here's the show version.
Oliver relaxed upon hearing the familiar tune of Fall Out Boy (granted you could leave it vague here, and give the readers a chance to connect to the character) and he noticed that his eyes mirrored the emeralds of the far east in the sunlight. (Thus, making the comparison that his eyes are emerald green. It shows instead of straight up saying his eyes are green)
I'm Ash, they/them, I like One Piece and drawing, I'm the site's resident memer and am currently emotionally invested in the Dream SMP, that's about it
Bruh I just got emotionally invested in the dream SMP too, cept I'm way behind and not rlly going in order lol
The parts where Tommy thought he was hallucinating Tubbo hit hard
It really did :'(
I'm on an Eret-drawing spree because dresses
They're fun to draw even though I despise wearing them and I can't stop, I'm considering turning them all into an animatic or something because Eret does streams where she reacts to our animatics and since I'm broke and can't donate or gift subs, I can still draw
Season 4 of Haven has been reached! Unfortunately Netflix will be removing it January 14th…. 😭
Fortunately I can hard-core bingewatch and should be able to watch the rest before then!
Oof
Each season, save 5, is 13 episodes long; 5 has 26. Technically the last half of 5 can be considered as season 6.
My Eret-drawing spree has come to a halt :(
My brother wants to use the computer and my Apple Pencil's dead
So me, my brother, and my nieces played “The Oregon Trail” and the funny part is that only two of us survived, me and one of my nieces. I was called “Queen Elizabeth the 3rd” while my niece was called “I died”
Remember Sy, show not tell. Show that his eyes are green. Don't straight out tell that they're green.
How can you /show/ that his eyes are green?
Here, I'll rewrite the entire little snippet by the showing portion.
Here's the original.
Oliver relaxes upon realizing that the other guy is listening to a Fall Out Boy album, and noticing that his eyes are a bright emerald green.
Here's the show version.
Oliver relaxed upon hearing the familiar tune of Fall Out Boy (granted you could leave it vague here, and give the readers a chance to connect to the character) and he noticed that his eyes mirrored the emeralds of the far east in the sunlight. (Thus, making the comparison that his eyes are emerald green. It shows instead of straight up saying his eyes are green)
I don't know, I'm not sure if it's really necessary to be that wordy just to say that someone's eyes are green. I think Sy did it fine, there's no need to paint every sentence, in my opinion. Watching paint dry is quite a mundane activity. But I suppose it's all up to a matter of opinion.
im an age regressor also:
if anyone (who supports it) join my age regression chat? I can teach you about agere or we can just chat and have a safe place. If anyone is comfortable with it, my pms are always open for caregivers and other littles to vent or just chat. Please please please sfw only, heres the link:
also i am uncomfortable around men so please know it's nothing against you if I dont answer you cuz youre male