forum Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!

Started December 28, 2018 by @CopperQueen

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add an H to the beginning of them

A bunch of that is blocked on my computer, can you put it onto a google doc?

added the H

That looks like the most adorable, dorky-ass bird that would be common in the Northern fae area for like warm pet companions.

It's beak and legs have a wood-like texture and it's feathers can change color depending on what kind of tree it's in

Yes wood birds! So they are common pets but some people use the beak for different stuff ex. the mask?

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-I know the fins and tail look weird, I'm trying to fix them, but is this a better shirt color?

I really like it! But… if you made it a bit more red and brown, it would probably look better.

https://ibb.co/106ghvp

-I know the fins and tail look weird, I'm trying to fix them, but is this a better shirt color?

I love it! What if you added 'cracks'? Basiclly black lines on the shirt? If you dknt use it, it's already amazing just how it is!!!

Any advice for the tail? I know what to do with the fins but I have no clue what I'm doing on the tail.

I love the tail! What if for the fins, you added a little more dark? Or add spark like things?

The tail is nice, but maybe add some darker spots like on real lave/magma stone?

yes

also the birds are like the size of a full grown standing Husky

also the birds are like the size of a full grown standing Husky

The twins would compete about who could catch Lunos bird and ride it when they were young

Aww!

Ok unrelated but am I the only one who finds the concept of mermaids weird? Like, who thought “Let’s take an attractive woman, then merge it with the derpiest creature known to man kind, and then tell stories about it drowning and eating men?” (Before you say anything, I do know the story behind mermaids and where they came from, it’s still weird to think about though)

Same… Like… Why?

Next they’ll probably mix a hot dude with a blobfish

A awesome looking NB with a dolphin

Wait, but if the mermaids drown and eat men, then the blobbudes would most likely eat women. …What would the NB dolphin eat? More NB people? Both girls and boys?

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Ok unrelated but am I the only one who finds the concept of mermaids weird? Like, who thought “Let’s take an attractive woman, then merge it with the derpiest creature known to man kind, and then tell stories about it drowning and eating men?” (Before you say anything, I do know the story behind mermaids and where they came from, it’s still weird to think about though)

I know the story behind mermaids, but that is really funny to think about xD

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Snap, now I just imagined the world's derpiest NB dolphin gracefully flopping out of the ocean Majikarp-style to eat a butterfly. I need to stop laughing dang it