forum Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!
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@CopperQueen

Speaking of Charlie, what if one of the witches who's been in the organization longer and also wants to help with the savig of it knew him and talks about him. Like:
Geranium: Ha! This guy looks a bit like [Lunos]
Witch: Yeah, he was a fae even! (sigh) What a guy…
Lunos: You knew him?!
Witch: If I knew him? He was the only fae supporting the association, of course I had to check who he was.
His name was Kaar (Char), but he made us call him slime. Something was seriously messed up in that guys head.
Geranium: Messed up? How?
Witch: He had all these ideas… He thought about life and death so casually, he could end anyone's any second. Start anyone's any seconds. He just… didn't seem to care.
Silence
Witch: He was fine in the beginning, passionate, and spent almost all his time here. But now he's… He's not here anymore it feels different.
Everyone: …
Witch: He confused all of us. Right before… Intentionally skips this part, he said something I'm still conused about.
Taramy: Right before what?
Witch: (Ignores) He kept going on about this one person, if I could just remember the name…. He said I couldn't tell him any of this. It was so weird…
"He'll just blame himself, but none of this is his fault. I just want to get away…"
The witch pauses
Geranium and Teramine: Processing
Taramy: So how long was he here?
Witch: About two y- LUNOS! Lunos was the name! Right [Other involved witch]?
Other witch: Mhm, his brother I think.
Everyne turns to Lunos

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Lunos: well… Thats my brother I suppose. Did he give any reason for killing?

@CopperQueen

Speaking of Charlie, what if one of the witches who's been in the organization longer and also wants to help with the savig of it knew him and talks about him. Like:
Geranium: Ha! This guy looks a bit like [Lunos]
Witch: Yeah, he was a fae even! (sigh) What a guy…
Lunos: You knew him?!
Witch: If I knew him? He was the only fae supporting the association, of course I had to check who he was.
His name was Kaar (Char), but he made us call him slime. Something was seriously messed up in that guys head.
Geranium: Messed up? How?
Witch: He had all these ideas… He thought about life and death so casually, he could end anyone's any second. Start anyone's any seconds. He just… didn't seem to care.
Silence
Witch: He was fine in the beginning, passionate, and spent almost all his time here. But now he's… He's not here anymore it feels different.
Everyone: …
Witch: He confused all of us. Right before… Intentionally skips this part, he said something I'm still conused about.
Taramy: Right before what?
Witch: (Ignores) He kept going on about this one person, if I could just remember the name…. He said I couldn't tell him any of this. It was so weird…
"He'll just blame himself, but none of this is his fault. I just want to get away…"
The witch pauses
Geranium and Teramine: Processing
Taramy: So how long was he here?
Witch: About two y- LUNOS! Lunos was the name! Right [Other involved witch]?
Other witch: Mhm, his brother I think.
Everyne turns to Lunos

As a continuation of this, how about Lunos tries to cover it up the best he can, so:
Terimane: You have-
Lunos: Met Lunos? Yes, interesting guy, really. Didn't know he was related to Kaar tho… (Nervous af)
Geranium: (Gets the memo) I've heard about that! I like Lunos better anyway ;)
Lunos: (Glare) Kaar is way better than Lunos, at everything.
Witch: That's not what it sounded like when he said it.
Taramy: (Confused)
Teramine: But you are…
Lunos: REALLY CLOSE TO BOTH OF THEM
Geranium: (stomps on Terimanes foot) Exactly
Teerimane: OH
Witch: I think he really admired Lunos, but I don't think he ever told him.
Lunos: He did? Wh-why would he… I mean why would he look up to a younger sibling? That doesn't seem like him
Witch: (Shrugs) He seems admirable to me
Lunos: NO

@CopperQueen

Lunos: well… Thats my brother I suppose. Did he give any reason for killing?

I was thinking he's just milking her for all the information but when they're done he goes out to kind of process and she overhears the witches calling him Lunos

@CopperQueen

Good Idea!

And she rushes out like:
"I TOLD YOU EVERYTHING THIS WAS THE ONE THING I COULDN'T DO WHY DID YOU PRETEND TO BE SOMEONE ELSE WHAT HAVE YOU DONE LUNOS"
And Taramy immediatly start defending him without really having any good points

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And Lunos is just like, stone cold killer mode: "I don't know, why didn't you ask me who I was in the first place if I did have such a strong resemblance to my dead brother."

@CopperQueen

And Lunos is just like, stone cold killer mode: "I don't know, why didn't you ask me who I was in the first place if I did have such a strong resemblance to my dead brother."

"BECAUSE YOU WERE WITH GERANIUM AND I JUST ASSUMED THAT SHE WOULDN'T BRING LUNOS OF ALL PEOPLE!"

@CopperQueen

"WELL FUCK YOU TOO!" -Geranium.

"HE ISN'T ENTITLED TO THIS INFORMATON!"
"Me if anyone should have this information."
"KAAR DESERVES TO DECIDE THIS!"
"He trusted me way more than you."
"N-"
"You don't even know his real name!"
"Wh-what?"

@CopperQueen

"Yeah, you didn't know his name."
"WhAt DO yOu mEaN?!"

Basically.

So he explains the name thing and she's like… In schock.

So she tries to genuienly apologize, and he just says "I don't need your pity"
"I don't pity you, I just… "
"Just realized hiding the fact that my brother litterally jumped off a cliff might have been a bad idea?"
"His last wish was that you never found out, what was I SUPPOSED to do?!"
"Seek me out and tell me!"
Sigh "Would… Would you feel better if you knew exactly what happened?"
"I'm not feeling bad."
"If you start to, The offer still stands."
"Yes."
"Hm?"
"Tell me."

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Taramy in the background: Whispering "Tragic backstory, unlocked."