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@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

Well those moments do exist and they do tend to be descriptive and I personally don’t see any other scenario other than plot relevance maybe where kissing would be descriptive

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Kissing only needs to be super descriptive is you're being spicy with it methinks

WOAH WOAH WOAH!! WOAH!! BACK UP…. WHO TOLD YOU ONLY SURING SPICY MOMENTS

If you're not being weirdly sensual about it, you can just say 'they kissed' without describing the extremely specific feelings and stuff it is about. i mean, i don't read a lotta romance, so I might be talking out of my donkey

@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

yea it just bepends on the moment if it an intense moment like this for ex you wouldn't just say:
although this may or may not have been the last moments they would have together he looked into her eyes knowing that this was the last moment that eight of them would ever see one another before death he leaned over and kissed her.
like that just makes it dry in my opinion (I had to stop there or else I would leave yall with a whole quacking story)

@Serenity88 group

I was reading writing prompts and ideas on Pinterest and then WA💥
a scene, a veryvery dramatic scene for House of Cards (the one ive been posting here) popped into my head!
I will post it soon, gotta re-write (not editing) it here cause th original draft is on paper.

also- any tips on blood loss? I guess its like blurry vision, poor senses in general, hard time thinking, things like that. but if anyone has better tips, im all ears!

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I was reading writing prompts and ideas on Pinterest and then WA💥
a scene, a veryvery dramatic scene for House of Cards (the one ive been posting here) popped into my head!
I will post it soon, gotta re-write (not editing) it here cause th original draft is on paper.

also- any tips on blood loss? I guess its like blurry vision, poor senses in general, hard time thinking, things like that. but if anyone has better tips, im all ears!

I think I remember some/can find some! love to research

how much blood is being lost?

@im-with-stoopid pets

I was reading writing prompts and ideas on Pinterest and then WA💥
a scene, a veryvery dramatic scene for House of Cards (the one ive been posting here) popped into my head!
I will post it soon, gotta re-write (not editing) it here cause th original draft is on paper.

also- any tips on blood loss? I guess its like blurry vision, poor senses in general, hard time thinking, things like that. but if anyone has better tips, im all ears!

uuhh-
feeling numb/physically cold? overall weakness? Also, some injury-specific conditions could help!
Like, if it's a deep wound, they instinctively try to cover it with a hand? And maybe then the general weakness kicks in, and they can't quite reach?

Idk, I say this as someone who (thankfully) hasn't had any major injuries (yet), so couple grains of salt-

@im-with-stoopid pets

Anyways, writing idiot best friends is SO MUCH FUN why did nobody tell me this

A sudden impact sent him staggering sideways, and the half-fledged thought was gone on the wind.

"C'mon, fish-elbows!" Tommad was beaming as always, though a playful snideness tinted his pale face. "Day's not gettin' any longer!"

Nav returned the bump, knocking an unsuspecting Tommad into a snowbank. The firm crust of the bank crunched beneath Tommad's weight, and he sank into it.

"Fish-elbows?" Nav echoed through a teasing grin. He quirked an eyebrow. "Tha's a new one, deer-ankles."

Tommad righted himself, covering his face as a fit of hysterical giggles overtook him.

"Deer-ankles?" Tommad barked. "Deers doen 'ave ankles!"

"An' fish don't got elbows, neither!"

@im-with-stoopid pets

Certified sibling conversation - stupid topic, both speakers are dumb, and it's all in good fun
Working on making my dialogue feel more natural because my speaking skills are trash-

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I always start describing too much when it's appearances, colors and light, animals, the sky for whatever reason, but solid settings are a challenge.
Fight scenes paired with dialogue in-between is my absolute favorite. Maybe a little hard to read but I like it

@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

I always start describing too much when it's appearances, colors and light, animals, the sky for whatever reason, but solid settings are a challenge.
Fight scenes paired with dialogue in-between is my absolute favorite. Maybe a little hard to read but I like it

yes! agreed

@im-with-stoopid pets

Integrating actions with descriptions is probably the hardest thing for me- how am I supposed to keep momentum going when I absolutely NEED to spend a paragraph describing how cool this mushroom is?