forum The Roodeness Shenanigans

Started May 27, 2020 by Deleted user

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This is probably the most mature respectful argument I’ve seen here-???
of course that’s not saying much considering the thread we’re in

I might be a piece of shit, but I agree with that

Dont put words into my mouth.

I didn't?

I fixed the spoiler thing,

thank you. I do mean this sincerely.

and I'm currently fixing the rest, okay?

While this is also good, I'm not sure that posting something like that, where you're still working on a lot, on a thread for mostly completed and edited scenes is the best place to go. It seems more suited to a critique thread where someone can give you feedback, rather than people expecting to be upset because something is genuinely heart wrenching, not because it's very insensitive. If you're looking for good examples of sexual assault and rape scenes, I highly recommend The Kite Runner and The Orphan Train. Also, if you're attached to the idea of 'panties' being used, you could try having the attacker say it rather than the victim, because having the victim say it is clunky and strange, especially given the context and the sexual connotation. It makes more sense that a person who believes that rape and sexual assault are okay and a good time or whatever would use a word like that.

I don't feel like getting into a fighting. This site is the one place where i dont get judged, but instead get actual good advice.

Really? Because that's not what how you're making it sound.

This is probably the most mature respectful argument I’ve seen here-???
of course that’s not saying much considering the thread we’re in

I might be a piece of shit, but I agree with that

What a mood though

Dont put words into my mouth.

I didn't?

I fixed the spoiler thing,

thank you. I do mean this sincerely.

and I'm currently fixing the rest, okay?

While this is also good, I'm not sure that posting something like that, where you're still working on a lot, on a thread for mostly completed and edited scenes is the best place to go. It seems more suited to a critique thread where someone can give you feedback, rather than people expecting to be upset because something is genuinely heart wrenching, not because it's very insensitive. If you're looking for good examples of sexual assault and rape scenes, I highly recommend The Kite Runner and The Orphan Train. Also, if you're attached to the idea of 'panties' being used, you could try having the attacker say it rather than the victim, because having the victim say it is clunky and strange, especially given the context and the sexual connotation. It makes more sense that a person who believes that rape and sexual assault are okay and a good time or whatever would use a word like that.

I don't feel like getting into a fighting. This site is the one place where i dont get judged, but instead get actual good advice.

Really? Because that's not what how you're making it sound.

You know what? Thank you. I was enlighted from all of you. I will fix that scene. Not immediately, but I will.

I'm sorry about what went down in this thread just now, but can we be cool now? Sorry for the awkward wording

I can't believe that all this went down while I was at the dentist
Also, that was not me being destructive, luv. I can be much, much worse.

notebook commune

Well I am seriously considering starting a communitarian society. Idk if I'll ever do it. But I want to.

notebook commune

Well I am seriously considering starting a communitarian society. Idk if I'll ever do it. But I want to.

I'm a bit worried, but intrigued.

I need roommates. Like, I couldn't live alone. I'd at least need a spouse to live with, but if not that then definetely friends.

Totally same.

Dom you're the kind of person that would accidentally start a cult and then have a slow descent into evil and madness. I would read a book about you doing that

Oi, @Divine-Irish-Potato, do you avoid all criticism this way?
That would certainly explain the quality of your writing.

Also @DoctorOfTheDead, I would prefer if you didn't insult people judt because of their writing skills, I'm only an amateur writer, okay?

• you described a character having a boner in a roleplay with a nine year old. She's. Fucking. Nine.
• you're annoying and rude as fuck
• your sexual assault scene was absolutely terrible, clearly you have no understanding of how any of that works, "panties" has an awful connotation and is very uncomfortable, and you refused to spoiler tag it, despite knowing it's a triggering subject and being asked to several times

And that's just off the top of my head, so yeah, people don't like you. You have to do research if you're going to write something like that, ESPECIALLY if you're going to share it. Or just use common fucking sense because it's really fucking obvious that you don't pressure a friend into talking about a traumatic experience and they certainly would not tell it like that. It's disgusting. Get off your ass and stop being a lazy, vaguely misogynistic writer and do your research about subjects you don't know shit about. You cannot bullshit your way through a sensitive subject like that, and you certainly cannot play the victim card when people say it was very uncomfortable.

All this, 100%
Love you Lizzie <3

Dom you're the kind of person that would accidentally start a cult and then have a slow descent into evil and madness. I would read a book about you doing that

I'd write that

Love you most

It's a sign of how lame I am that every time I accidentally click on my profile and see Joined Notebook.ai over one year ago, I get a rush of happiness

honestly if any y'all need a roommate for college and we end up near each other,,,
I'm just saying

Same. Just bring a fraction of the rent to the table.

Anyone else get T-rex arms?
(As an eczema thing. Not in general.)

I need roommates. Like, I couldn't live alone. I'd at least need a spouse to live with, but if not that then definetely friends.

No spouse for me, but I definitely need to live with someone. I can't do shit without someone there for me to think about
Like no one comes in my room so I've developed the habit of not cleaning. I wouldn't clean anything if I lived alone
Not to mention I get scared when I'm home alone for more than an hour

I don't want to live alone. Being alone makes me uncomfortable and I like to know that there's another person there with me, otherwise I feel…off
I'm not very knowledgable with house stuff so I'd need a roommate or friend or maybe a spouse (although I don't really see myself getting married even if I do fall in love)

Marry an aro ace for tax benefits and general companionship.

Honestly being roommates with Dom would make me feel safe. Because he's Big and Male, but he's also not going to attack me or hit on me

I need roommates. Like, I couldn't live alone. I'd at least need a spouse to live with, but if not that then definetely friends.

No spouse for me, but I definitely need to live with someone. I can't do shit without someone there for me to think about
Like no one comes in my room so I've developed the habit of not cleaning. I wouldn't clean anything if I lived alone
Not to mention I get scared when I'm home alone for more than an hour

^^^ all of that

plus i tend to get really sad when i’m alone for long periods of time

In the same vein, I got so excited when I went to Walmart yesterday. There were a lot of people.

Honestly being roommates with Dom would make me feel safe. Because he's Big and Male, but he's also not going to attack me or hit on me

This is exactly why his cult commune would be so successful.

I need roommates. Like, I couldn't live alone. I'd at least need a spouse to live with, but if not that then definetely friends.

No spouse for me, but I definitely need to live with someone. I can't do shit without someone there for me to think about
Like no one comes in my room so I've developed the habit of not cleaning. I wouldn't clean anything if I lived alone
Not to mention I get scared when I'm home alone for more than an hour

I don't want to live alone. Being alone makes me uncomfortable and I like to know that there's another person there with me, otherwise I feel…off
I'm not very knowledgable with house stuff so I'd need a roommate or friend or maybe a spouse (although I don't really see myself getting married even if I do fall in love)

Marry an aro ace for tax benefits and general companionship.

I'd totally marry her for tax benefits but there's the small issue of my conservative family and us both being girls

Honestly being roommates with Dom would make me feel safe. Because he's Big and Male, but he's also not going to attack me or hit on me

I feel like Dom would be a Cool Big Brother roommate

I need roommates. Like, I couldn't live alone. I'd at least need a spouse to live with, but if not that then definetely friends.

No spouse for me, but I definitely need to live with someone. I can't do shit without someone there for me to think about
Like no one comes in my room so I've developed the habit of not cleaning. I wouldn't clean anything if I lived alone
Not to mention I get scared when I'm home alone for more than an hour

I don't want to live alone. Being alone makes me uncomfortable and I like to know that there's another person there with me, otherwise I feel…off
I'm not very knowledgable with house stuff so I'd need a roommate or friend or maybe a spouse (although I don't really see myself getting married even if I do fall in love)

Marry an aro ace for tax benefits and general companionship.

I'd totally marry her for tax benefits but there's the small issue of my conservative family and us both being girls

I'd marry you for tax benefits as well, but same with the conservative family thing lol

In my defense, if I had a bit more room I wouldn't have things on the ground

I own only a few things and I still leave crap on the floor. I plan on changing when I move out.

I go to wash my teeth and when I come back I see two missed pages wtf

Just think what I go through, like, every day.

In my defense, if I had a bit more room I wouldn't have things on the ground

I own only a few things and I still leave crap on the floor. I plan on changing when I move out.

I hate owning things. I want my whole life to fit in a backpack in case I need to pick up and go.