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Started by @croccin-champagne
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@Bandito

(that was awesome) (I think I'm scared)
(this one can't decide if it wants to rhyme so eh)
An angel
With wings
Can it float?
Can it levitate?
Does it have to fly
Take the dive
Work to be alive?
An angel
With a halo
Can it stay
Out of sight?
Does it always
Shed its light?
Will it always
See what's right?
An angel
With a lyre
Can it be the quiet one?
Can it just not want to sing?
Can it just listen to the other angels
Sing so beautiful and clear
So proud and happy and near
But so far away
Cause it can't hear
Them past
Its stupid fear
Blanking out its eyes
Hiding all the mirrors
Shredding its lip
Plugging its lovely ears
Does it play
With golden tears?

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It doesn't have to rhyme!!! That's good, you're so talented!!!

Deleted user

Yeeeees! Do you have Wattpad by chance?

I do but I prefer completing all my drafts before posting it upon the web.

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Okay. What's your username? Mine is @camiestrange if you want to follow me.

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(that was awesome) (I think I'm scared)
(this one can't decide if it wants to rhyme so eh)
An angel
With wings
Can it float?
Can it levitate?
Does it have to fly
Take the dive
Work to be alive?
An angel
With a halo
Can it stay
Out of sight?
Does it always
Shed its light?
Will it always
See what's right?
An angel
With a lyre
Can it be the quiet one?
Can it just not want to sing?
Can it just listen to the other angels
Sing so beautiful and clear
So proud and happy and near
But so far away
Cause it can't hear
Them past
Its stupid fear
Blanking out its eyes
Hiding all the mirrors
Shredding its lip
Plugging its lovely ears
Does it play
With golden tears?

This is beautiful holy shit.

@croccin-champagne

Call it a passing fancy
Or an unreachable dream
But I want to touch the stars
And chase things that aren't what they seem
I hear music in the world
There floating on the breeze
I see magic in emotions
A smile, a tear, a snarl
There's something so fantastical
About the world I see around me
And when I decide to pay attention
It pays attention to me

Idk what it is but here!

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See the girl?
What does she hide?
Who is she really
On the inside?
Who is that man?
What does he want?
Why doesn't he let people see him from the front?
If we all hide
Who we really are,
Then why does it matter
What we show to them?
They don't see us.
They just flee us.
The few.
The hidden.
The Strange.

@croccin-champagne

The White Man's Burden
By Rudyard Kipling1

Take up the White Man's burden—
Send forth the best ye breed—
Go, bind your sons to exile
To serve your captives' need;
To wait, in heavy harness,
On fluttered folk and wild—
Your new-caught sullen peoples,
Half devil and half child.

Take up the White Man's burden—
In patience to abide,
To veil the threat of terror
And check the show of pride;
By open speech and simple,
An hundred times made plain,
To seek another's profit
And work another's gain.

Take up the White Man's burden—
The savage wars of peace—
Fill full the mouth of Famine,
And bid the sickness cease;
And when your goal is nearest
(The end for others sought)
Watch sloth and heathen folly
Bring all your hope to nought.

Take up the White Man's burden—
No iron rule of kings,
But toil of serf and sweeper—
The tale of common things.
The ports ye shall not enter,
The roads ye shall not tread,
Go, make them with your living
And mark them with your dead.

Take up the White Man's burden,
And reap his old reward—
The blame of those ye better
The hate of those ye guard—
The cry of hosts ye humour
(Ah, slowly!) toward the light :—
"Why brought ye us from bondage,
Our loved Egyptian night?"

Take up the White Man's burden—
Ye dare not stoop to less—
Nor call too loud on Freedom
To cloke your weariness.
By all ye will or whisper,
By all ye leave or do,
The silent sullen peoples
Shall weigh your God and you.

Take up the White Man's burden!
Have done with childish days—
The lightly-proffered laurel,
The easy ungrudged praise:
Comes now, to search your manhood
Through all the thankless years,
Cold, edged with dear-bought wisdom,
The judgment of your peers.

I had to read it and now you do too. Have the official shittiest poem I've ever seen.

@Periwinkle_

For the first time in my life, I’m actually afraid of forgetting.

All these other times it was just fun and games
Me saying I would never want to be like the ones who forget.
Yet I’ve forgotten.
Already I’ve forgotten, even though it feels like just yesterday.
I know there are things that I’ve forgotten, but I just don’t remember them.
And I hate myself for it.
It’s bad to be sad when you should be, but it’s even worse to be sad when you should be happy.
To miss something you shouldn’t have loved in the first place.
To try to fight
To choose between nobility and nobility.
Between holding on even though it hurts, or letting go even though you’re afraid you’ll go numb.
When the beat rises, and you don’t know why
What you do know is
You’ve forgotten.

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Why is everyone SO GOOD AT POETRY its so pretty aaaaaah you are all so talented

@Periwinkle_

IKR I went through all the pages of this forum reading them and they're all so goooooood (Accept for that one about "the white man's burden", that was stupid lol.)

@kittycalyx group

The White Man's Burden
By Rudyard Kipling1

Take up the White Man's burden—
Send forth the best ye breed—
Go, bind your sons to exile
To serve your captives' need;
To wait, in heavy harness,
On fluttered folk and wild—
Your new-caught sullen peoples,
Half devil and half child.

Take up the White Man's burden—
In patience to abide,
To veil the threat of terror
And check the show of pride;
By open speech and simple,
An hundred times made plain,
To seek another's profit
And work another's gain.

Take up the White Man's burden—
The savage wars of peace—
Fill full the mouth of Famine,
And bid the sickness cease;
And when your goal is nearest
(The end for others sought)
Watch sloth and heathen folly
Bring all your hope to nought.

Take up the White Man's burden—
No iron rule of kings,
But toil of serf and sweeper—
The tale of common things.
The ports ye shall not enter,
The roads ye shall not tread,
Go, make them with your living
And mark them with your dead.

Take up the White Man's burden,
And reap his old reward—
The blame of those ye better
The hate of those ye guard—
The cry of hosts ye humour
(Ah, slowly!) toward the light :—
"Why brought ye us from bondage,
Our loved Egyptian night?"

Take up the White Man's burden—
Ye dare not stoop to less—
Nor call too loud on Freedom
To cloke your weariness.
By all ye will or whisper,
By all ye leave or do,
The silent sullen peoples
Shall weigh your God and you.

Take up the White Man's burden!
Have done with childish days—
The lightly-proffered laurel,
The easy ungrudged praise:
Comes now, to search your manhood
Through all the thankless years,
Cold, edged with dear-bought wisdom,
The judgment of your peers.

I had to read it and now you do too. Have the official shittiest poem I've ever seen.

thanks! i hate it

@Periwinkle_

Last year I had to read two different points of view on slavery (this is a prestigious mostly white southern school). One was about how slave mothers used to kill their own children so that they wouldn't have to deal with slavery, and the other said something like "there is nothing more beautiful than the relationship of a good christian slave owner and his negro" or something. I was so maaaaaaad. And then, when we had to debate about it, different students were saying how the last argument was stupid, and our teacher said "You know this is an opinion, right? We aren't talking about whether it's right or wrong."

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Here, something I haven't named.

If you would look into my eyes
what would you see?
Would you see,
the blue
the green
or the grey?

Or would you see the stars
that ignite my sight or
see my story
and who I am
and what I've been through?

If you were to look at my face
would it tell my story?
Would my appearance show
the poverty or
the tears?

Do I have a story?
Or is it merely mist,
that swirls within the cool valley,
never settling upon the land
until the sun shines it's morning glow

If you were to peak into my life
would you see
the tempest of emotions
upon the frightening storm clouds
breaking forth each new day?

You tell me,
what do you see?
Who am I to you?
For even the smallest
interaction changes lives

Someone really needs to take my computer from me.