forum I'll critique your stuff!!

Started June 16, 2018 by @TryToDoItWrite

tune

And this blow killed her?

Yesh

James felt helpless because he could help her that's why he wanted to be a doctor

Where is James's mother?

Chillin in the background somewhere…

idk

Mmm-mmm

Nope

No mother is just sitting in the background, watching her children get abused and killed.

No mother is just sitting in the background, watching her children get abused and killed.

Okay, yes if she fears the father. Who's name is David btw

What if. . .

David is a dick and I honestly really fucking hate him

Pls tell me David dies

Lol, he doesn't but the FBI and police prove that he's an asshole and put him in prison

Wowie

Yes

There is a lot going on in my brain

Ok

Let's make a timeline

Of his life

Anyone?

Okay 1 sec

K 😁

(this is the start of it)
4 years old: Diagnosed with autism
5 years old: His father caused a brain injury resulting in his Savant Syndrome
7 years old: He had a cat and his father killed it. (Pets are a common treatment for autism because it teaches compassion)
11 years old: His sister’s injury/death
13 years old: Ran away from his house
14 years old:Taken in by a family who took pity on him. They sent him to school and helped him to college.