forum I'll critique your stuff!!

Started June 16, 2018 by @TryToDoItWrite

tune

Wowie

Yes

There is a lot going on in my brain

Ok

Let's make a timeline

Of his life

Anyone?

Okay 1 sec

K 😁

(this is the start of it)
4 years old: Diagnosed with autism
5 years old: His father caused a brain injury resulting in his Savant Syndrome
7 years old: He had a cat and his father killed it. (Pets are a common treatment for autism because it teaches compassion)
11 years old: His sister’s injury/death
13 years old: Ran away from his house
14 years old:Taken in by a family who took pity on him. They sent him to school and helped him to college.

12 years old: The school therapist notices his behavior and begins talking to him. He is diagnosed with depression.

I want to hug him this poor child

4 years old: Diagnosed with autism
5 years old: His father caused a brain injury resulting in his Savant Syndrome
7 years old: He had a cat and his father killed it. (Pets are a common treatment for autism because it teaches compassion)
11 years old: His sister’s injury/death
12 years old: His mother killed herself
13 years old: The school therapist notices his behavior and begins talking to him. He is diagnosed with depression.
13 years old: Ran away from his house
14 years old:Taken in by a family who took pity on him. They sent him to school and helped him to college.

18: He attempts suicide. . .?

True

13, maybe?

4 years old: Diagnosed with autism
5 years old: His father caused a brain injury resulting in his Savant Syndrome
7 years old: He had a cat and his father killed it. (Pets are a common treatment for autism because it teaches compassion)
11 years old: His sister’s injury/death
12 years old: His mother killed herself
13 years old: The school therapist notices his behavior and begins talking to him. He is diagnosed with depression.
13 years old: Attempts suicide
14 years old: Ran away from his house
15 years old:Taken in by a family who took pity on him. They sent him to school and helped him to college.

This??

It kinda feels like there's a lot going on. Autism, abuse, depression, suicidal tendencies…

But they are a result of each other

What if in the end. . . He succeeds in killing himself?

And he meets his sister and mother in Heaven

Then he can't have roommates

And for the first time ever, he is truly happy?

Roommates???

Lol… Okay so I used him in a roommate RP and him and his mates are really close and he's happy because he finally has a family that loves him

Autism, abuse, depression, suicidal tendencies…and roommates XD

. . .

Lol yes… I'm insane