forum Writing Is The Best! *screams and throws computer across room*

Started February 12, 2019 by @MarDeColores this is not it kids

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can we count writing research papers because ugh

I was gonna post a link to my disaster chemist but I forgot that I'd copied stuff after the link and tbh I'm too lazy to copy the link right now so here's this instead:

Gertrude: If your friends jumped off a bridge would you? Hamlet: Bold of you to assume I’m not already over the bridge.

Let's be honest though, Hamlet would have jumped before there was ever a bridge.

Yes. But we would have told his friend not to.

ehhhhhhhhh…. gestures vaguely to rosencrantz and guildenstern's dead bodies

Yes. But we would have told his friend not to.

He'd have told Horatio not to, and then handed everyone else directions to the bridge.

Yeah. Exactly.

Ophelia is questionable. Maybe he'd give her directions only to save her at the last second. Who knows? Not Hamlet.

Agreed.

I had one of those dreams again. The one where monsters made of shadow are everywhere. This time there were at least ten, which is unusual. Normally there’s only one or two. What’s even more unusual is the other person present in my dream. I only remember snippets of her. Her raven black hair, rolling like waves in a stormy ocean. Her blue eyes, like the clearest sky in a hundred different shades of blue. I can't remember her face, though, and it drives me insane.
(This is the first paragraph in my story, and I'm wondering if it looks alright)

I think it looks okay. It urges you to read more to find out what the person is talking about.

I like it. It's interesting, but not begging for attention. It would do well in the market, but it doesn't look like it was made for the market. Good job. I want more.

Awesome! Thanks for the feedback!

Once upon a time, there were two gods.

Hello!

They were opposite, one of death and darkness, and one of light and life.
(Hello!)

They were the original gods, the ones around at the start of the universe.

Over the first 100 years of the universe, they grew stronger. Humanity arose at the end of those 100 years, and the gods were worshiped as the creators.

Then, on the 100th year, two new gods rose. They also represented the light and the dark, but were more powerful than the original two gods.

The two new gods fought the old gods for their position. The old gods had more experience, but the new gods had more power.

The new gods won and pushed the old gods to the background. They were mostly forgotten and their temples were torn down.

For years, the new gods ruled. New gods came into being and joined them. The old god of life and light joined them as well, not wanting to be alone for eternity. But the old god of darkness stayed in the shadows, plotting the downfall of the new gods.

This old god of darkness had been stripped of their title of god of darkness and was now simply the god of trickery and deceit. They were not too keen on that, but they embraced it fully.

For if they were simply known as "the nuisance", then they could take the gods by surprise.

They pretended to give in and joined the gods in their home.