forum The Roodeness Shenanigans

Started May 27, 2020 by Deleted user

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personally it's nothing against you dude, it's just confusing for too many people to go by the same nickname

Oh okay that makes more sense i thought that you guys were just hating on me

You should just omit it all together.

I have a character (my main one, actually) who was abused by a lover and though he underwent therapy, I never explicitly wrote the scene(s) in which she did. It makes me really uncomfortable, and despite having done research on it to make sure I’m characterizing and writing him correctly, I don’t think I’ll write the scene in fear of making it distasteful. Like that entire scene was.

You want more critique, here it is:

Tbh I'd either do more research or just drop it.

You want more critique, here it is:

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'Take off your underwear,' he said. This was a first. He had called me sexual insults like slut and whore and such since I was 8, but never this.
Choppy, mechanic, and emotionless. Try harder.
I guess this was a tipping point for him. I resisted. He was angry now. He pinned me to the ground, and forcefully removed them. Then he put his… thing… inside me. I was in so much pain then.
Again, emotionless and choppy. "This would go on until I was 18 years old. It hurt so much. He kept calling me things like cunt, twat, dyke, etc while he… raped me.
Again with the "etc."? Then he… came inside of me. It was gross and weird. I hated it. Then he told me not to tell anyone or he would do it again. I didn't tell anyone, until I turned 18. It was terrible.
Congratulations, you managed to make it even more graphic and gross. Also "gross" and "weird" are pretty weak adjectives for this scenario. * "I tried to kill myself. Twice. Everytime I attempted to kill myself, he would rape me. I felt like I didnt mean anything, like I was just a toy for pervs to use and look at. I hated myself. But at last, I found help."* Comes out of nowhere.

Tbh I'd either do more research or just drop it.

yep, this is still ridiculous and uncomfortable. please consider dropping this scene. this is not how trauma works.

You want more critique, here it is:

Spoiler - click to show.

'Take off your underwear,' he said. This was a first. He had called me sexual insults like slut and whore and such since I was 8, but never this.
Choppy, mechanic, and emotionless. Try harder.
I guess this was a tipping point for him. I resisted. He was angry now. He pinned me to the ground, and forcefully removed them. Then he put his… thing… inside me. I was in so much pain then.
Again, emotionless and choppy. "This would go on until I was 18 years old. It hurt so much. He kept calling me things like cunt, twat, dyke, etc while he… raped me.
Again with the "etc."? Then he… came inside of me. It was gross and weird. I hated it. Then he told me not to tell anyone or he would do it again. I didn't tell anyone, until I turned 18. It was terrible.
Congratulations, you managed to make it even more graphic and gross. Also "gross" and "weird" are pretty weak adjectives for this scenario. * "I tried to kill myself. Twice. Everytime I attempted to kill myself, he would rape me. I felt like I didnt mean anything, like I was just a toy for pervs to use and look at. I hated myself. But at last, I found help."* Comes out of nowhere.

Tbh I'd either do more research or just drop it.

I've already dropped it

Good, good. Enough of that on this chat please.

contrary to popular belief I actually enjoy learning, even if it means correcting my own opinions and thoughts

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Last year, my geometry teacher made us watch this show called Numbers. I hated it. I think it was meant to make us more interested in math by showing how it can be used to solve crime mysteries, but if anything it made me want to drop out of school more than I already do.

I think the main reason I despise the show so much is that I felt as though I was forced to watch it against my will, and I dislike things a hundred times more when I feel forced into them.

So, I was doing my history work and we have the chance to write our own comments. My two writing things were on Abortion and the LGBTQ+ community. My sarcastic comments were Abortion: "Ah, yes, the time when men make choices about a woman's body" And LGBTQ+: "Here are the thoughts of the most powerful, straight, white men in America"

_{you know i think i'm just gonna zip it}

_{you know i think i'm just gonna zip it}

Honestly there's not really much of a point in saying anything if this is all you're gonna say

You do realize that a lot of women choose to get abortions of their own accord? And you know, the problems for LGBTQ+ people aren't just because of white men? You seem to be a very close minded person, and from what I've seen of you, you're not fifteen, which means you're not old enough to be in this chat to begin with

I—
I respond to an RP and this is what I return to.
Gods..

Before anything else. I freaking love The Mandalorian. Just finished episode three.

I—
I respond to an RP and this is what I return to.
Gods..

It be like that.

Before anything else. I freaking love The Mandalorian. Just finished episode three.

I'm angry that I can't watch it

You do realize that a lot of women choose to get abortions of their own accord?

I will point out that the majority of abortions are not wanted in themselves, but are seen as necessary. Depending on the circumstance it can be because of a dude who leaves or is otherwise an asshoe meant to say asshole but I'll leave it, though of course, I am not saying that the women have no choice in any part of the matter.

Before anything else. I freaking love The Mandalorian. Just finished episode three.

I'm angry that I can't watch it

Oh that sucks! Why not?

Before anything else. I freaking love The Mandalorian. Just finished episode three.

I'm angry that I can't watch it

Oh that sucks! Why not?

We don't have Disney+ and even if we did, my sister and I don't really get a say in what shows we watch. There's a reason my favorite shows are from when my parents were growing up/before they had us but they're great so that part's fine

You do realize that a lot of women choose to get abortions of their own accord?

I will point out that the majority of abortions are not wanted in themselves, but are seen as necessary. Depending on the circumstance it can be because of a dude who leaves or is otherwise an asshoe meant to say asshole but I'll leave it, though of course, I am not saying that the women have no choice in any part of the matter.

Asshoe is fitting. I say we adopt it

Before anything else. I freaking love The Mandalorian. Just finished episode three.

I'm angry that I can't watch it

Oh that sucks! Why not?

We don't have Disney+ and even if we did, my sister and I don't really get a say in what shows we watch. There's a reason my favorite shows are from when my parents were growing up/before they had us but they're great so that part's fine

Same though. But I'm not at home so. But Cosby Show and Boy Meets World were pretty great.

I second that
Asshoe it is

Before anything else. I freaking love The Mandalorian. Just finished episode three.

I'm angry that I can't watch it

Oh that sucks! Why not?

We don't have Disney+ and even if we did, my sister and I don't really get a say in what shows we watch. There's a reason my favorite shows are from when my parents were growing up/before they had us but they're great so that part's fine

Same though. But I'm not at home so. But Cosby Show and Boy Meets World were pretty great.

it's mostly stuff that no one talks about. Why are y'all sleeping on Growing Pains and Warehouse 13? But also Full House. Sometimes.

Yo and Diff'rent Strokes.