forum poetry sharing!!

Started February 01, 2019 by @croccin-champagne

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Thank you
I have a few more I might post

please do. that one made me wish i was some fantasy/highlander queen charging into battle in defense of my kingdom i have literally never felt that emotion so strong before

Mirror Mirror that stands before me
What do you see

Monster Monster is what I see
A thing of nightmares is reflected

Why Why do you see me like this
My past is behind me

Reflection Reflection is what I offer
And I have reflected who you are

Wrong wrong I think mirror
I have done nothing wrong

Blood Blood on your hands
Murdered hundreds you have

Please Please don't remind me
I want to not think of that

Death Death you have caused
You cannot hide what you have done

Monster Monster is what I am
No longer can I contain it

ooh cool
It sounds like a nursery rhyme at first, but then you pay attention to the words and it’s just whoa

Yours are all amazing…

camie u cant hide from me. show us your poetry. i've never actually seen bad-no wait, my siblings are really bad, but thats besides the point

Fine…

!!!!!!!

Er, I have a few…
Most are based on nature.

show us show us show us

Change
People change.
This is proven.
I do not understand this –
Shouldn't you be happy with
The way that you are?
Or is your desire for more just
Too strong?
I want to tell you how much I
Hate this thing that has replaced you.
But I cannot bring myself to.
Because this monster of change –
Behind it is still
You.

u r legally required to show us now

It sucks, sorry…

camie have i ever told u how much i love u. bcs i love u and ur poetry

Shut up, that's terrible! X~X

nope

Uh, yup!

nu uh

I don't think we read the same poem.

ur the one who wrote it. I liked it. a lot

Wanna read a crappy poem I wrote in 5th grade?

yES

Selfie Poem
by: Fifth Grade Camie

My hair is like and muddy tide pool, dripping just past my shoulder banks

My eyes are like chocolate, glistening in the warm summer sun

My lips are borders, like a photograph, just framing my perfect smile

My brain is a safe for information, a safe that no one can rob

My heart holds memories that I will treasure forever

I live in books and eat WORDS

For the record, I have no idea why I thought I was so perfect… this is bad.

that last line is my favorite