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Started March 01, 2019 by Deleted user

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Yaknow those 10x mirrors are great until you see every single flaw in your face

ooo. you can actually see some improvement in that one, circe, from both of us as time went on. when i go back to find something and read through it it's kinda interesting. you've improved some since we started that, tho tbh you were already great

It's our oldest one, so I'd assume there's visible improvement. Also, there's been more planning ahead behind the scenes, the further along we got. ghfjgh Just like what we're doing right now

Boom. I rated you. (10 equals amazing.)

General quality: 9/10
Plot moving: 8/10
Length: 8/10
Natural dialogue: 8/10

(Just a matter of personal taste.)
Subtlety: 5/10

Obviously I haven’t seen enough of your work to make a proper judgement. But I feel messed up from saying something nice before considering.

I boosted your General after looking to the future. Great stuff.

And Plot.

You really have improved.

Like, a lot. Great job.

ghfjgh I feel like I'm being graded by a teacher

Can I ask what you mean by subtlety?

And thank you!

…Being sneaky in your writing I suppose? I try to do this a lot. It easier to pull things out if they were kept shaded beforehand. It’s not actually necessary though. Just a tool used in specific circumstances.

hm. I'll try to consider that for the future

Well, like I said, it’s a tool. Kind of like slo mo. Great at the right time the right way. By no means to be done all the time.

I saw a movie than ran slo mo all the time. Called Mercy Rule. It was a complete disaster. Would have been like half an hour. Only good thing was that Tim Hawkins was in it.

oh boy. Yeah, not sure if I could utilize that tool very well. Never been very adept at foreshadowing or anything like that.

I'm a little unnerved, alone, and really hungry.. I swear this isn't healthy at 1:13 AM

Eat.

oh boy. Yeah, not sure if I could utilize that tool very well. Never been very adept at foreshadowing or anything like that.

T’s’alright.

Please someone explain to me why, after 5 years, I have decided to go back through the Marble Hornets videos at half past 1 in the morning…

OMG MARBLE HORNETS

I’d forgotten about the videos after the last one was uploaded 5 years ago, but someone who cosplayed Alex reminded me of the videos so here I am watching all 133 of the Marble Hornets/Totheark videos

I'm more of an Ashvlogs girl myself, but Marble Hornets is 10/10

when you gotta craving for tacos–make your own.

Im so proud of myself for not being lazy

has done nothing but lay around all day

Same

mood