forum Character Critques~ ((Closed))
Started by @Rainy_day_artist_classic group
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@moss

Thank you! That was really helpful! Also, thanks for the hogwarts house idea. Now I'm gonna have to sort all my characters, lol

@Rainy_day_artist_classic group

I finally got the motivation for this, so I'm doing it now. No distractions.

@CrackpipeDreamer, let's see what I have for you.

Looks: For what you have, that's a very vivid picture. I can picture him quite well. (Even without looking at the gallery.) The only thing I have to say, adding in a height and weight helps that even more. It gives a better impression what exactly his muscle build is. If you say he's 5'5'' (1.6764 meters), and weighs about 120 lbs (54.4311 kg.) he'd be pretty average. (despite being much shorter for his age, of course.) Just a thought, you might want to add that in.

Flaws: That's a cool way of doing it… I like that ahah. But one question, in the major flaws. Where it says he is oblivious to feelings, is he blunt or straightforward when he talks? Does he give it to others just the way it is without sugar coating it? Or is it some other way of being rude and insensitive? Just thought I'd ask for the clear up.

Talents/Hobbies: Those are all good, especially: Kade most commonly decides to slap people with them. though I'd like to ask if he has any other normal or obscure talents? Is he one that knows how to cook quite well, or knows how to play any instruments, or possibly even talking backwards? For the hobbies, again they're great. But is there any little things he enjoys when he's unable to go for walks? He could possibly enjoy writing poetry (maybe not the best at it, but he tries), or maybe he finds a joy in playing chess or checkers.

Personality: That is good, an awesome job right there, leaving me with only one thing to add on. How he handles his emotions. Is he one to just go with it, and suffer the consequences of his actions later? Or does he try and bottle them up, and hide them away until later. Honestly, that's the only thing I can see being hard to figure out without just knowing. Going through, my perspective has changed on and off.

Social: The favourites are all good, and honestly everything you have that's there is good. The only thing, does he have a religion? Is he just born under one because his father told him that's what was right? Maybe after awhile it would fade, but is he "suppose" to believe in something, because his father said so?

After a long time, I finally got this done. I hope I helped you some, at least.

@Anemone eco

(Aha. I had a height and weight but I updated the character form, so I have to add it back lmao. Thank you so much, Rainy! I appreciate it.)