forum Character Critques~ ((Closed))

Started January 17, 2020 by @Rainy_day_artist_classic group

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Is this closed for good, or are you thinking of reopening it again? I have a chara I'd love your opinion on, but if you're not opening again, no worries at all ^^

I might be able to! I’ll just need some time!

Wonderful, tysm! <3 <3 Take your time though, and no pressure, if you don't want to!

I totally do, I had just run out of steam for awhile there with a busy schedule. But if you could drop off your character I’ll get to it once my homework is finished! It should take me twenty minutes, and if not I’ll be on in an hour or so.

Oh, thank-you so much, I really appreciate it!! ^^

It's pretty detailed, so if you need more time, please, take all the time you need ^^

It might have to wait until later tonight, because weekdays (Monday-Thursday) Are hard for me, Friday is my easier day, but almost anytime after five I'm good tonight!

okay, no problem! ^^

@KHS-SunGod, we have a problem, I personally had nothing. I looked through the whole thing, and didn't find anything. Now that's one opinion, but still, for what it's worth, I think you did a great job!

AHHHH REALLY?? :D tysm, that's so amazing to hear! I've been developing and writing him for over a year now, and I'm so glad it's paid off to get him to this point! Thanks again! ^^

Of course! I'm sorry I wasn't able to say or do anything, but I mean that's a good sign right? I wish you good luck!

No, that's fine! ^^ Yeah, I mean, it must be good! xD Ty! :D

Hey all! I'm opening this back up just so I have something to do while I'm stuck at home!
Feel free to drop them by, and I'll get to them soon!

Ooh, Ooh!
Can you do my lad? :D SO glad I hopped back on in time to see this xDD

Hey, if you have time, would you do my character? I've had him critiqued before and I think he's starting to look more developed.

Sure thing! I'll have to get to them in a little bit, or later in the day, but I'll take a look at both!

Hey, could you do Kade once you have the time? I've gotten him critiqued multiple times already, I guess I want a fourth opinion haha…

Sure thing! I’d love to take a look!

Alright, I'm gonna take a look, though I'll be multi tasking here in a couple minutes.

Alright! Sorry it took so long…
@KHS-SunGod-is-on-hiatus-until-the-1st, let's take a look!

Looks: 128 - 156 lbs for the weight, just thought I'd give it to you. Hair For this, is it like salt and pepper style? Race I'd include his nationality, just so you have an idea where he's from. Though that's up to you ahah

Clothing: I like his class~ Lol, looks good!

Personality: That is… really well written. I totally understand his character, it just fits perfectly. You did an excellent job my friend~

Note 1: You know, I find him so likeable, yet at the same time not so much. It's a unique trait to 'care for' and control everyone at once. That's just something I find very interesting.

Note 2: I notice a lot of people have names that go together. Like items or music. Just thought it was cool.

I think that's all I have for now, but I'll go over it again in the morning. I have stuff to do tonight, but I'll let you know if I think of anything else! He looks awesome!
(When you realize your critique is all compliments…)

TYSM!!!
His hair I'm unsure exactly how to describe it, it's like black but starting to turn silver, so I'm not sure if it qualifies as salt and pepper, as it's pretty evenly silvering, not in patches
Definitely will add a nationality! Thanks for reminding me to do that lol

AHHH TYSM I'm so glad he's well-made, I agonized over him all day lol Thanks one last time! xD

Of course hun! Happy to help (Though I did that minimally- ahah)

For the rest of you, I promise I'm getting to you! I've just been crazy busy with school work, and yesterday wasn't a good day. I will get to you!

It's all good, Rainy. Take your time. :)

<33 Thanks hun

@salami011, man I'm sorry it's taking me so long. I'm going to do my best to give you something actually worth your patience (same goes for all of you!)

Looks: So, just because I'm trying to actually do something… for his eyes. How would you describe them? Are they sharp, soft? How would you describe them in better detail? (For e.g., I have a set of siblings, and one of them has "Soft features, all except her rather sharp icy blue eyes." and the other has "Sharp features, but soft ocean blue-green eyes"). For his hair, I've got some idea, but more detail would definitely be lovely! Is it soft, and wavy? Or is it dry, due to the frequent dying? You have "Nick is naturally pale.", which has me wondering if he tans often? Just asking! (And I know this looks like a lot, but clearly I just over explain- ahah)

Mannerisms: These are great! Though I see you were struggling to explain one? What I'm getting is that either A.) he talks himself through a situation, trying to just think straight. Or B.) He just mumbles off in rambles, not really working through anything. Just a noise to distract him from their current situation. If neither, and you're still in need of help, just hmu or ask here!

Flaws: They look great! Though, I have one question, just because one of them fits me. For being indecisive, does he get stressed out when he has to make an on the spot decision? From personal experience, I get stressed out when someone is getting frustrated at my indecisiveness. Eheh-

Fears: That's a good thing to add! Though one thing I'd add, is more in depth about how he would react if he were in such a situation. Does he freeze up? Does he start breathing quicker? And maybe how well he handles/hides his fear.

Andddd I promise to come back! It's taken me way too long to do this- eheh… I'll finish it, I promise you!

Favorites: It looks like you have it for one of them, but just thought I'd say this. For his favorites, give reasons why they're his favorites. Not really with a ton of detail, but just a little bit of reason why he would like what he does.

Julia: So, you seem to have her mentioned yet when looking at it, she doesn't seem to exist? Or maybe she's locked, so I just can't see her. But I was just going to ask, if you think she should be put under friends, or somewhere else. Just so you know the two have a relationship of some kind.

Others: For a few other notes, which you may have written down somewhere, but I'd take the time to find out a couple things. Such as his Hogwarts house (even if you aren't a Harry Potter fan, it's just a fun thing to know.), and/or his Zodiac sign.

That's all I have for you! I hope I was able to help!