forum Character Critques~ ((Closed))

Started January 17, 2020 by @Rainy_day_artist_classic group

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Of course! No problem!

I have returned with Hinata!!! Hopefully you'll understand more of her character <3

Alright! I’ll take a look once I get back home from the dentist XD

Well, I really can't find anything. I think she looks awesome, but I'd suggest getting a second opinion from someone else!

Ee, thank you!

Sure thing!

Can you do my new baby? :D He's still very rough, there's a lot I don't know about him, but I'd love to hear what you think! ^^

Of course! If it seems harsh I'm sorry, I don't mean it that way in the slightest! I'm just hoping I can help you out!

No worries! xD He's definitely going to need it, I'm sure he's got a lot of problems ^^

Well I'll start taking a look once I finish off a character template!

Would you mind looking at Rynn? Her bio is kind of long so you don't have to, but I would really appreciate it!

I'd love to! Though once I finish the one I'm working on I have to get offline for awhile.

Dylanger Clyde:

• Height/Weight: I see you're unsure still, though I personally see him around like 5'7'' so for weight probably around 135lbs. But it's your character! So of course that's your decision!

• Race: You don't even seem to mention what he is specifically. If he's suppose to be human, than I'd suggest adding his human race. It helps you to expand on his culture.

• Looks overall: They seem great! Though adding detail to the different fields would be great!

• Conditions: Looks good! Especially with background reasoning!

• Personality: Super cute! I love that! Though I'd suggest explaining his take on emotions, like is he very verbal or actionesc with them?

• Social Question: How well does he get along with grownups? You say a few times he gets along with kids, but can he cope with grown up people? Or does he find it difficult because he was bullied by people older than him so he doesn't trust them?

• Favorites Hey~ So, I think I've said this before (Maybe?) But giving reasons why their favorite things are there favorites would be cool, and help develop the character!

• Education: Because I've already used Personality XD but yeah, I wanted to mention that you mentioned he was a try everything kind of guy. You could totally put that with his personality, that he's super willing to try something new!

I think that's all I have for you! Happy developing!

tysm, this is great!!! I'll be use to use this stuff to help him get better! Thanks again!!

If you have time, would you please do Thailah? Thank you! Princess Thailah Reine Aguirre

tysm, this is great!!! I'll be use to use this stuff to help him get better! Thanks again!!

Of course! Seriously any time! If I can’t get it to you quickly, it’s probably because I have some sort of performance or am reallY busy, for future reference!

If you have time, would you please do Thailah? Thank you! Princess Thailah Reine Aguirre

Will do!

Oh, also, feel free to bump this whenever, at least if I've responded to you and haven't gotten the chance to look at your character. I may have forgotten because I was out heh-

ACK I'm so sorry! I got busy, and did indeed forget I had to do someone's character! I'm so sorry @a_selected_lunar

Henloo, mind looking at my snek son? Ty qvq

Sure thing! Once I finish my other one that is- eheh

I'm gonna go ahead and close this, due to the fact I've run out of steam, I will though get done whoever has posted before this comment.

ACK I'm so sorry! I got busy, and did indeed forget I had to do someone's character! I'm so sorry @a_selected_lunar

It's fine! I understand that life is CoMpLeTeLy InSaNe

@a_selected_lunar, here you are finally.

• Race: I'm not gonna ask my typical question actually (what human race she is), but what do you mean by mutated? Mutated part what? Just curious, because it's not completely clear.

• Mannerisms: Those are great, but adding more would be awesome! Does she have a facial tick, maybe like forced blinking, or nose scrunching? Same goes for flaws, deepening them will deepen her!

• Prejudices: So maybe more on the lines of constricting and controlling leaders/dictators.

• Conditions: That's suppose to mean for mental health conditions just an fyi. So does she have any medical stuff? Insomnia, ADHD, or depression? If not, than it's cool. There's plenty of other ones too!

• Favorites: Why are her favorites her favorite? It's something I ask everyone, and I'd love to get to see why!

That's all I have for you! Great job!

@Kinarymo I looked really hard for this stuff, you did an awesome job!

• Conditions: OCD, I feel like that is for sure part of him. You mention a few times about having to be in charge, and his precise actions. You could always look into it more, but I'd say that's part of his character.

• Favorites: You've got it for almost all of them, but adding reasons he likes the things he does! It adds a little detail you can keep for yourself.

Bruh, I legit can't find anything else. I was useless XD
I love his personality, and art, and just basically everything about him! Great job, and happy developing!