forum The LGBTQ+ Community Chat :)

Started April 21, 2018 by @Tylerrr-M-P

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Hahaha

Oh my god lmao

lol don't encourage him

I am cackling

Yo I need help!

Yo I need help!

Hey! I'm your guy! Wassup?

Ok so I started a short story and I need feed back on the thingy that explains it

Ok so I started a short story and I need feed back on the thingy that explains it

Explain…

I'm here too! I'll help if I can!

Like the part of the book that goes
This is a story about how my life was never normal my name is (name) and I’m 14 bla bla blaba

I can help give feedback too, Lowen!

You know the thingy~~~~

I can help give feedback too, Lowen!

Mk!

I need al the help I can get!

Oh. I don't know the word for it, but yeah.

Oh… Maybe you should start with them waking up… And give an example… Like something abnormal happens… And the character explains themselves…

Haha bec know the thingy

Oh… Maybe you should start with them waking up… And give N example… Like something abnormal happens… And the character explains themselves…

I’ve got it I just don’t know the word…

Exposition?

So it's the year 1800 and every baby born between March 29th and your June 14 have the same looks but different skills. But truthfully there were only 6 kids born then (watch me slowly kill of like 4 of them just to cause you pain) and eventually they all meet at a Cafe named 'The meet up' two of them are 10 row of them are 15 and two of them are 20 (bout to kill the 10-year-olds first) when a crazy scientist who runs the cafe meets them he tells of a place named 'Wendago' and all they have to do is make it to there and give the men a message 'be warned of the future for what it holds, because nothing is made of gold' Then when they make it to 'Wendago' the ten-year-olds are killed (would you like to know how?) and they have to go to another place called 'Count' and relay a message 'be warned of the past, because everything is made of glass' once that message is said the 20-year-olds are killed (wanna know!) and the 15-year-olds have to go to a place called 'Forest' and relay another message 'be warned of now, because no one will bow’
(The motivation is money and this is just to explain what the story’s about!)

Exposition?

Holy shot is that the word

Ah, it's called a "blurb" (I hate that word, but okay)

OHHHHHH THAT MAKES SENSE

Oh… I dunno the word either…

On the topic of dating, well….a girl I really like is going to the Yule Ball with me…but another girl I also like might be too…and they're friends…but idk I'll go and maybe come out to someone there!
I'm going with those two girls, another bi girl I know, and a church friend who's pretty chill about sexuality stuff.

WAIT…… YOURE GOING TO A YULE BALL TOO??? IS IT TONIGHT??? BECAUSE MY SCHOOL IS HAVING A YULE BALL DANCE TONIGHT!!!!!