forum Pirates in the sky! (Closed for now, but stalking is acceptable)

Started June 15, 2020 by Deleted user

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Also Mosis I don't believe you've posted your character yet, I don't want to rush you I just want to know how soon you will. If you don't know that's fine!

Oh my! Im so sorry! I'll get him in soon!

No dude you're chill, take all the time you need!

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(Unnerfed vozreal would kill every enemy instantly, and take me and @WriteOutofTime's jobs.

Thats not true!

Bit short of a writing sample and I'd prefer if you use the template I provided since yours isn't super detailed and I… need to know things. Also, what position on the crew of the ship would Vozreal be, perhaps?

Template btw:

Name:
Age: (preferably 18 or older, and I was thinking more around the 21+ range, ish.)
Gender/Pronouns:
Sexual/Romantic Orientation:
Personality:
Motivations:
Moral Alignment: (Like, Lawful Evil, Chaotic Neutral, Neutral Good, True Neutral, etc.)
Appearance: (Must give: Body type, eye/hair color, rough height, skin color/race, and three other noticeable features like scars, tattoos, etc.)
Worst Fear:
The Role on the Ship:
Why They Joined and How Long They've Been There:
Brief Backstory:
Other:

That is all.

This is the template btw.

Name: Vozreal
Age: 13.8 billion (chronologically), 23 (looks)
Gender/Pronouns: Technically Genderfluid, but male
Sexual/Romantic Orientation: Asexual, but will make some sex jokes
Personality: Chaotic but Kind, Definition of Chaos for the greater good.
Motivations: Boredom
Moral Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Appearance: Crimson eyes, Black Hair, Tuxedo, 6'
Worst Fear: Bring Forgotten
The Role on the Ship: Co-captain
Why They Joined and How Long They've Been There: a few days
Brief Backstory: Vozreal used to be a bad guy, ut after the regeneration of 2019, he became a good guy.
Other:

Vozreal was the captain of his own airship. He was quite lonely on it. That is, until he found another airship next to his, and the people on it were trying to get his attention.

"What do ya want, broads? A couple of C's?" Vozreal said when he saw their airship next to his. To his surprise, they responded.

There isn't really a role for co-captain other than quartermaster and while I don't wanna gatekeep I'd prefer an author with a bit more detail and depth in their writing. I'm not saying your writing is bad, I'm just explaining where I'm coming from. Also if he's been there a few days he probably wouldn't have the role of co-captain due to not being super close to Lio. It would help if you added some more detail to your template, and as for the backstory I have no idea what's going on there so maybe either clarify or build a backstory to fit the plot. I'm not trying to be mean, this is just some friendly critique you can take or leave as you wish!

Also I don't get what you mean by 'asexual, but will make some sex jokes' because like, no offense meant but I'm hella ace and I make dirty jokes all the time tbh, and it feels a bit patronizing. Again, no offense.

Name: Shawn 'Shaw' Longhook. (Don't question the name XD)
Age: 23
Gender/Pronouns: Male; He/Him pronouns
Sexual/Romantic Orientation: Bisexual, leans toward boy's but will flirt with about anyone.
Personality: He's got a bit of an ego. He's usually a bit irritable, but will force a smile on his face if he has to. Very blunt, which can make him a bit cold sounding. If he ends up liking someone, he can be protective and less snappish. He's honestly quite the tired person on the inside.
Motivations: His love for Technology.
Moral Alignment: (Like, Lawful Evil, Chaotic Neutral, Neutral Good, True Neutral, etc.)Somewhere in between Lawful evil and True neutral. He is mostly a True neutral but when you piss him off he can go all the way up to Lawful evil.
Appearance: He is thin but has muscles. His eyes are light brown (hazel almost?). He has black hair. He is about 5'6. White. He has two scars. One going over his eye and one on his arm. He has a small tattoo of a dragon on his hand.
Worst Fear: His work being destroyed, Not going on a ship, and his father dying
The Role on the Ship: Engineer/Mechanic
Why They Joined and How Long They've Been There: He wasn't on a ship till now but he joined a year ago.
Brief Backstory: When he was younger His father was in a pirate crew. His father was a First mate. His mother always wanted Shawn to be a Medic on the ship but he always said no. He had a thing for making stuff. Eventually, when he was older he started making stuff for his father's crew. They loved it and asked him to join. Of course, he said yes but he wasn't ready to go on a ship. He became a groundworker and Now he'd actually work on a ship. His long life dream.

Also I don't know if you're referencing his age in your canon but again, all of these characters are normal humans with nothing supernatural about them so I think he'd just be 23? I'm honestly having a lot of trouble interpreting your meanings.

I changed the age to 20.

@MosisIsTiredAndHasFinals_PlzHelp interesting!

I love Shawn! Honestly the vibes I get from him is that like, he's just a pretty chill dude who just likes tinkering and living free also Lio would totally just like. Basically adopt him and try to be all father-figure-y and it would annoy the hell out of Shaw as well as just be like grudgingly endearing. Idk if that's the dynamic you want but anyways I. I am love the he.

I love Shawn! Honestly the vibes I get from him is that like, he's just a pretty chill dude who just likes tinkering and living free also Lio would totally just like. Basically adopt him and try to be all father-figure-y and it would annoy the hell out of Shaw as well as just be like grudgingly endearing. Idk if that's the dynamic you want but anyways I. I am love the he.

Thanks! I worked hard on Shaw! (First time I did something like this :P) And yes! I'd love that! Shaw would love that!

Anyways if a few more people join, hopefully a few as crew, then we can begin!

My first time too! This is my 3rd roleplay and none of my other ones had more than 2 other people.

I will explain when we get to it

@knightinadream? Idk might be you're thing dude.

It is getting late. My bedtime is soon so if I disappear, I am sorry.

Whos gonna start?

We're not done. We need like 5-6 more people.

Maybe @Ladybeetle, or @Icefire?

Hmm. I mean Maybe?

Perhaps. I know not of these humans but they seem interesting.