forum Pirates in the sky! (Closed for now, but stalking is acceptable)
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Hey! If you don't mind, I'd love to join. I have multiple One Piece OCs, and this is perfect for them.

Just make sure that the character you use has no association with the show in this RP and you're cool! Also thanks for recommending that show to me in Introductions, I haven't had much time to watch it but I really love the short dude with the pink hair, Koby, he's super cute! Just give me a writing sample and tell me the role you'd like!

Deleted user

Alright, I'll make sure to incorporate those into the character! I usually make new characters for higher concept rps like this, so it might take me a little while to get the sheet up.

No problem dude!

Deleted user

Sample:
"Hi Rachel, how are you?" Allison bubbled to her sister. Allison and Rachel were sisters, but like yin and yang.
"I'm fine, sis." Rachel hissed. Rachel was in a bad mood. Allison usually could tell when Rachel was in a bad mood.
"What's wrong?"
"Nothing is."
"Don't lie to me."

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(@allthegoodusernamesweretaken okay shes human for this roleplay only! Also shes gonna be a mechanic!)

@SpookyScarySnoteleks group

Hey! If you don't mind, I'd love to join. I have multiple One Piece OCs, and this is perfect for them.

Just make sure that the character you use has no association with the show in this RP and you're cool! Also thanks for recommending that show to me in Introductions, I haven't had much time to watch it but I really love the short dude with the pink hair, Koby, he's super cute! Just give me a writing sample and tell me the role you'd like!

Thanks! I'll make sure that my character's got nothing to do with One Piece.
And omg, Koby is baby
I'd die for him

Deleted user

@allthegoodusernamesweretaken okay shes human for this roleplay only!)

Thank you. Please also change her role.

Deleted user

Hey! If you don't mind, I'd love to join. I have multiple One Piece OCs, and this is perfect for them.

Just make sure that the character you use has no association with the show in this RP and you're cool! Also thanks for recommending that show to me in Introductions, I haven't had much time to watch it but I really love the short dude with the pink hair, Koby, he's super cute! Just give me a writing sample and tell me the role you'd like!

Thanks! I'll make sure that my character's got nothing to do with One Piece.
And omg, Koby is baby
I'd die for him

I know right! I've only seen some of the first episode but. I am in love. I will protect him with my life. He is my son now. But also lets not get off topic lol.

Deleted user

@allthegoodusernamesweretaken done!

I didn't see any changes on her character sheet, that's probably a glitch. What alternate role will you choose for her, there is either basic Crew, or Mechanic to choose from.

Deleted user

(Oh boy, if you'd die for Koby, wait till you meet Sanji)

(Can't wait!)

Deleted user

@allthegoodusernamesweretaken done!

I didn't see any changes on her character sheet, that's probably a glitch. What alternate role will you choose for her, there is either basic Crew, or Mechanic to choose from.

Fixed it

Deleted user

(gtg to sleep. GN!)

Goodnight dude, have good dream!

Deleted user

@allthegoodusernamesweretaken done!

I didn't see any changes on her character sheet, that's probably a glitch. What alternate role will you choose for her, there is either basic Crew, or Mechanic to choose from.

Fixed it

Again noting that you changed nothing about her species. Also the motivation "it looked like fun" isn't really… workable. It could just totally be a greed thing, wanting to get rich, or hopes for a better life, but. Just. H- also three days is a really short time. Like, six months (aka half a year if you can't mathematics like me lol someone save me from online classes-) is fine. Definitely. But three days? Just. Please. I am sorry to keep trying to change stuff or be bitchy but your character, and I mean no offense whatsoever by this, simply feels flat and difficult to work with. At least change those two things, for my sanity.

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(wowww so many more people since i last checked!!! this is gettin good)

I know right?

Deleted user

(Just popping in to say that he got the scar on his hand from an explosion, a failed attempt to make something… new. The eye one was from a fight with a crew member from a random ship. The guy had a hook hand and slice his eye. But he can still see.)

Deleted user

@allthegoodusernamesweretaken done!

I didn't see any changes on her character sheet, that's probably a glitch. What alternate role will you choose for her, there is either basic Crew, or Mechanic to choose from.

Fixed it

Again noting that you changed nothing about her species. Also the motivation "it looked like fun" isn't really… workable. It could just totally be a greed thing, wanting to get rich, or hopes for a better life, but. Just. H- also three days is a really short time. Like, six months (aka half a year if you can't mathematics like me lol someone save me from online classes-) is fine. Definitely. But three days? Just. Please. I am sorry to keep trying to change stuff or be bitchy but your character, and I mean no offense whatsoever by this, simply feels flat and difficult to work with. At least change those two things, for my sanity.

Fixed

@callycat

(hey @allthegoodusernamesweretaken feel free to critique the backstory a bit since it's got to do with Lio's)

Name: Carson Skye
Age: 36
Gender/Pronouns: Male, he/him
Sexual/Romantic Orientation: Demisexual/Biromantic with a female preference
Personality: Carson was a wild kid but he settled into his "old age" rather gracefully. He's cheerful and sweet, always ready to give advice or lend a helping hand to one of the newbies, and every night he's there to tell stories of the dashing adventures a nearly 20-year long career in piracy gives you in spades. He walks around with easy confidence, like he was made to be part of the ship's crew, and always puts on a self-assured face in front of others. His steadiness and dependability make him a good friend, helped by his fierce loyalty. However, in private, he's plagued by doubts about how much longer he'll last in the open sky. Things are changing around him, and he'd never been quite adaptable enough to change with them, especially not as his old age catches up to him.
Motivations: To get enough money to retire, to prove to himself that he can still be helpful to the people in his life.
Moral Alignment: Neutral good
Appearance: He's tall (I'd say 5'10), well-muscled from years of ship work and tanned from head to toe. Every part of him looks weathered and worn smooth, from the crow's feet around his eyes to the callouses on his palms. His eyes, bright green and twinkling, are the brightest thing about him except his smile and the white prematurely streaked through his rusty red hair. He has thick scars on his palms from his first few years on a pirate airship (engine explosion bby) and a crooked nose from getting into one too many youthful fistfights.
Worst Fear: That his age will get the best of him and he won't be able to do his job/will let down his captain
The Role on the Ship: Quartermaster
Why They Joined and How Long They've Been There: He's been on the crew for as long as there's been a crew to be on as a long time friend (ally? acquaintance? who knows. relationships hard) of Lio's, and joined mainly to get in one last hurrah before his body gives up on him.
Brief Backstory: Carson was, quite literally, born for the sky. His mother and father were both some of the earliest airship pilots to roman the skies, and he was surrounded by the great metal/magic beasts since he could walk. His childhood was spent wandering the halls of the S.S. Andromeda, one of the big military airships that defined the early technology. As he grew, the restrictions of military life began to weigh on him, and the expectation that he would join the military as soon as he came of age never really sat well with him. Being dumb, impulsive, and completely inspired by the stories of pirate airships, he struck out to seek his fortune on the wrong side of the law. For the first few years, things went fine. Then he got word that mommy and daddy were coming to a knocking in the pirate ports to look for their missing son, so he hopped aboard the first crew he could find that was leaving town, and wouldn't you know it? He gets captured. Like immediately. Luckily there's this guy, Lio, on board who managed to help him escape before things get too hectic and the parents caught up. From there it was a lot more bouncing, a few more encounters with Lio on various crews (and even fewer encounters with the law, thank his lucky stars), and eventually, a realization. He was getting older. His body was rather enthusiastic about letting him know this, as past the age of thirty he began to struggle with an illness that left his joins locked stiff and occasionally swelling painfully. When he heard that Lio was putting together a crew he came along, hoping that he could make enough money to safely retire under a captain he knows and trusts
Other: He's got early-onset rheumatoid arthritis.