forum Things You Want LESS Of In Books
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@ElderGod-Icefire

Ryker's mom is MIA and his father is an abusive bastard who literally killed him and then had him brought back to life
Rose's dad is alive, but she isn't allowed to see her mom. Her step-mom is a bitch
Vivian's parents are both alive
Ace and Kai's parents are dead or MIA
Buck's parents are dead
Thae's parents are alive
Jasper's mom died, but his father is alive
Skye, Avani, Tempest, and Ember's parents are all dead (because they were alive one hundred years ago. DUH they're dead now)

So I mean…ig I have a good mix of alive vs dead, but idk

@Starfast group

Yeah, I'm definitely guilty of dead parents. In my main project, I think Kit and Alexis are the only ones who still have parents who are both a) alive, and b) actually good parents.
I find though that I don't really kill off parents as much in things that take place in modern times. I have a project that I'm still planning but all the characters so far still have both parents (although, the MC's parents have recently divorced, and the other two characters are older and have moved out, so their parents aren't really present).

I have another fantasy thing that I'm planning and originally the main character's parents died early on in the story but recently I've been reconsidering. I'm starting to feel like it's a bit unnecessary, but at the same time keeping them alive would significantly lower the stakes for the MC so idk.

Deleted user

Dom's father is alive,

?

That character that I told you about? I haven't changed his name yet. XD

@HighPockets group

………I have many dead parents. Many
Freud may have something to say about that.

Lets see
WTC: rona's parents were killed in a genocide of her people. taran's mom is dead and his father the antagonist.
TTD: both ara's and baz's parents were killed by the antagonist
TOS: Sora's mom dies shortly after she was born, her dad shortly after she was conceived. Tenzo's mom died of an illness when he was a child, his dad gets murdered by the antag
TTK: the triplet's mom died when they were children, dad dies in war
TNU: praetor's are taken from their parents at 5 years old. Alias' parents are alive (<—hey look at that!!!). Tora's parents are dead. The twin's parents could be alive. Im not sure yet.
TM: Rhyece's parents are live!! Fen's are not.
TBT: Cleo's mom died in a car accident, her dad get's murdered by antag. Vian is immortal his parents jut kinda faded into the ether.
SS: no mention of parents soooo they could be alive.
OS: Liam's parents are alive. Helena's parents are alive. Tasha's parents are alive too! (WOOT)
MZ: Everyone's parents are dead.
KOT: Kian's mom is alive, his dad a fae lord so yes he's alive, but not in kian's life. Enyo's parents are hella dead.
D: Sol's parents are dead. Zana isn't human so she doesn't have parents. Tessa's parents are alive. The Twin's mom is alive, dad died in a raid. Dom's father is alive, mom was killed.
DS: Safe to say everyone's parents (accept Jensen's) are dead. But Marus was raised by his grandmama
CF: Everyone's parents are alive, but irrelevant. Except Kira's dad.
BTSATS: Suna's dad is alive, mom dead. Cole's mom is alive, dad dead. Rhea's parents are alive.
ATC: heh spoilers.
ACOS: Mina's mom is dead, dad is–well alive. Elias' parents are alive. The Squad all have parents.

Edit: I am very death happy apparently…

I'm more shocked by your amount of stories
And I thought I had a lot….

Deleted user

I'm more shocked by your amount of stories
And I thought I had a lot….

I have 18 Universes that I'm working on with a total of 156 characters.

@HighPockets group

I'm more shocked by your amount of stories
And I thought I had a lot….

I have 18 Universes that I'm working on with a total of 156 characters.

Jesus Christ.
I have 3 universes, 7 stories, and 92 filled-out profiles.

Deleted user

I'm more shocked by your amount of stories
And I thought I had a lot….

I have 18 Universes that I'm working on with a total of 156 characters.

Jesus Christ.
I have 3 universes, 7 stories, and 92 filled-out profiles.

Oh– I– well each universe has a trilogy associated with it, except for 4 which are single novels….

@Consider-PB_and_the_Jellies

I'm more shocked by your amount of stories
And I thought I had a lot….

I have 18 Universes that I'm working on with a total of 156 characters.

Jesus Christ.
I have 3 universes, 7 stories, and 92 filled-out profiles.

Oh– I– well each universe has a trilogy associated with it, except for 4 which are single novels….

I have too many

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

I'm more shocked by your amount of stories
And I thought I had a lot….

I have 18 Universes that I'm working on with a total of 156 characters.

Jesus Christ.
I have 3 universes, 7 stories, and 92 filled-out profiles.

Oh– I– well each universe has a trilogy associated with it, except for 4 which are single novels….

Holy crap and I though I had a lot.

Deleted user

Dom's father is alive,

?

That character that I told you about? I haven't changed his name yet. XD

Ah yes. I need to get on that. But names are hard. Especially as time goes by.

Is it bad that Dominic works for him though???

@HighPockets group

Dom's father is alive,

?

That character that I told you about? I haven't changed his name yet. XD

Ah yes. I need to get on that. But names are hard. Especially as time goes by.

Is it bad that Dominic works for him though???

Looks like you need to legally change your name, Dom. Maybe Al? Lol

@Pickles group

Dom's father is alive,

?

That character that I told you about? I haven't changed his name yet. XD

Ah yes. I need to get on that. But names are hard. Especially as time goes by.

Is it bad that Dominic works for him though???

Looks like you need to legally change your name, Dom. Maybe Al? Lol

That's what Emi calls him. I couldn't get used to that. Too weird al

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Dom's father is alive,

?

That character that I told you about? I haven't changed his name yet. XD

Ah yes. I need to get on that. But names are hard. Especially as time goes by.

Is it bad that Dominic works for him though???

Does it really? If it does I wouldn’t mind at all. I thought it might work.

Deleted user

Dom's father is alive,

?

That character that I told you about? I haven't changed his name yet. XD

Ah yes. I need to get on that. But names are hard. Especially as time goes by.

Is it bad that Dominic works for him though???

Does it really? If it does I wouldn’t mind at all. I thought it might work.

good because I already wrote scenes with him and I don't want to change it.

@HighPockets group

When an older character is introduced, teaches the main character an Important Life LessonTM, and then dies. I'm not really talking about mentor characters in fantasy and stuff, but of elderly (usually) characters in contemporary books. It's seriously gotten to the point where if an older character is mentioned, I start to guess how long it'll be before they're killed off.

@Pickles group

When the author has clearly done no research about this thing that is very important because Sara Shepard I can only suspend my disbelief so far and let me tell you, it's not as far as this

@cherryred

  • Kids who hate/don't respect their parents because they're cOoL and eDgY
  • Mental illness being romanticized
  • Relationships that are actually toxic/abusive but are portrayed as "artistic" and "passionate"
  • Stereotyped POC characters
  • "Dumb oaf" characters ('stupid' should not be a character's only trait)
  • Shoehorned romance
  • when the guy kisses the girl to shut her up