forum Welcome to Altir City! OOC Chat

Started November 15, 2018 by @InstaOnly

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Sorry for the allergies but good that a new season came out.

I'm working on a post but I just wanted to say my laptop almost corrected "Nysaxiope's" to "Saxophone's" lol

Yes sax's fish!

Has Faraneer forgotten about Aaron tying everyone up back at Sax's Fish Nys Fish when their fighting got him angry?

Luunos is just in the corner like "Wtf is going on?"

Faraneer is the nicer one, Mylnorr is more of a decision maker, and Kidairn is an asshole… they're like the power puff girls! But instead of Kidairn being a lovable asshole like buttercup, he's just an asshole.

Pft, sounds like me and my friends.
But, I'm the asshole.

lol

Lunos is justt chilling in the corner and observing the weird people.

Lunos is what I wound be doing in this situation.

Aaron is sitting in a chair watching over the weird people.

Gotta remember, right now Faraneer is a nervous wreck and trying to figure things out. When he gets control, as mentioned, it is usually to keep watch while the other heads rest
That or with Nirvana who he actually is pretty relaxed with

Kirdairn, can be a complete asshole, only one who really doesn't suffer from his 'asshole nature' is Nirvana

Mylnorr is leader and indeed decision maker. He could be considered the eldest of the heads, with Kirdairn being 'middle child', and finally Faraneer as a 'young' sibling
Over their long years alive, it is always Mylnorr who decides what they are to do

Yeet

I'm crying. I've had this idea for a month now and I just had to write it out. These aren't characters.

I don't believe you can share documents yet, it just makes a new untitled document when you try to click it. You can copy and paste the text to the chat if you still want to share it though.

Oh right! I'll do that.

Dia scanned the battle field for signs of her sister. The battle field was red. Red with fire, red with blood and red with the sun leaving the sky. It would be dark soon. "Claire!" She yelled as she looked around the battle field. She heard a groan near by. Probably a wounded soldier. They would probably die in a few minutes. She pulled her eyes off the field. She had to help them. She searched around. There. A woman was laying under a tree. She rushed over to her. "Are you OK? Where are you hurt?" She asked taking off her mask. As Dia reached into her bag to get some bandages or pain killers she heard a the soldier speak. "D-dia?" The soldier groaned. Dia snapped her head back. "Claire?" She said, her voice wavering slightly. Claire made another groan. She was shot in the chest. Not in the heart. If she had been shot there she would of died in seconds. "No. No. No no no no no." Dia said grabbing on to Claire. Clarie winced as Dia grabbed her. "Y-your alive. G-good." Claire stuttered, smiling. "I'll get help." Dia said standing up to go get a medical team. Claire grabbed Dia's pant leg. "Dia. There not going to be able to help. Please stay." Claire pleaded. "I don't want to be alone, Dia." Dia looked down at her sister. She knew she was right but she didn't want her to go. She knelt back down next to her. "Okay. I'll stay." She said. Claire smiled. "I love you." Claire said looking up at Dia with tears in her eyes. Dia held back a sob. "I love you too." Dia said as Claire closed her eyes.
(I'm not quite done yet but I needed to share this.)

Shoot, that's some good writing right there! I always love a scene that seems like it'll pull on some heart strings in the final product. Some of my characters have to die for the plot, but I still haven't gotten around to actually writing a death….

Oh, I have the opposite problem. I want to kill off all of my characters.

I get way too much enjoyment out of torturing my characters ._.

Same!

lol

Well, I mean, I have fun because it's for my story and I know the big picture. I just haven't gotten around to actually writing the death's down. My story doesn't have 'plot armor' for my heroes, so I have to be careful with how the plot goes to spare some and kill some with out raising questions why the side character died and not the hero right in front of the killer.

There's not much good killing a character would do in my story… perhaps once I develop all the characters and the plot more, I can torture some characters, but until then I don't know why I would kill a character.

Oof. Also now I'm wondering how all of your characters would react to the full trio I have. Because usually I have Aaron, Corru, and Jack but got rid of the other two because Aaron would ignore everyone else unless I were to introduce them later or something.