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He kind of reminds me of my boy Niko? Just a little. What's he look like?
He kind of reminds me of my boy Niko? Just a little. What's he look like?
I love how chill he is like goes into a hospital, tells them hes been shot, shes like mkay then
(Also his character profile is under Characters right now and no one has replied so…yeah. If you want to check him out, go ahead. Y'all don't even need to give critique.)
Did I succeed at not having it come off as comical?? I'm sort of the type of person who is unintentionally comical and I'm scared of it carrying over into my writing…..
I love how chill he is like goes into a hospital, tells them hes been shot, shes like mkay then
He's a private eye dealing with a major CEO and trying to stop people from undermining Roge's business so like…this isn't the first time he's been to the ER at midnight and it won't be the last.
It's just the right amount of comical imo. Listen, getting shot in the butt can't be not funny. He's obviously in pain, and it's not made light of at all, but just how his character works with it, how he's so chill- it all adds just a touch of humor, but you kind of feel bad for him.
Thats fair XD the story line sounds so interesting!
Honestly I think he's more torn up about not getting to be in Shakespeare's Julius Caesar than about BEING HECKING SHOT.
XD
I mean, come on! It's not even HAMLET!!
Guys we just revived this chat yesterday and look how much it's grown!!! <3
Thats awesome
<3 <3 <3
That's really good
AND WE'RE AT 5 PAGES!!!! EEEEK I'M SO PROUD!!!
If you put on of those ties that goes around a bag of bread in a toaster, it will catch fire and you’ll have to douse it in water from the kitchen sink. The same thing happens when you put it in the microwave.
How do you know this
rEsEaRcH
important research
I see
If you put a muffin tray coated with cold butter for fifteen seconds it will not just quickly melt the butter the microwave will start to spark and the butter will A) get burning hot and burn your hand when you rush to get the tray out of the microwave or B) sizzle until it is a thick rough coating stick to the surface of the pan
Also, when cooking something in a pot, DO NOT UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES USE A METAL SPOON AND LEAVE IT IN THERE!! IT WILL BURN YOU!!
…Yes
It is not fun.
…Yes
I did it again tonight while warming up the best meal on this planet.
Good job
Thanks. It's a……special skill….
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