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@HighPockets group

(Also his character profile is under Characters right now and no one has replied so…yeah. If you want to check him out, go ahead. Y'all don't even need to give critique.)
Did I succeed at not having it come off as comical?? I'm sort of the type of person who is unintentionally comical and I'm scared of it carrying over into my writing…..

@HighPockets group

I love how chill he is like goes into a hospital, tells them hes been shot, shes like mkay then

He's a private eye dealing with a major CEO and trying to stop people from undermining Roge's business so like…this isn't the first time he's been to the ER at midnight and it won't be the last.

@Becfromthedead group

It's just the right amount of comical imo. Listen, getting shot in the butt can't be not funny. He's obviously in pain, and it's not made light of at all, but just how his character works with it, how he's so chill- it all adds just a touch of humor, but you kind of feel bad for him.

@Crisis

I see
If you put a muffin tray coated with cold butter for fifteen seconds it will not just quickly melt the butter the microwave will start to spark and the butter will A) get burning hot and burn your hand when you rush to get the tray out of the microwave or B) sizzle until it is a thick rough coating stick to the surface of the pan