forum My Immortal (A thread dedicated to The Worst Fanfiction Ever)

Started July 09, 2019 by Deleted user

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Chapter 21 and the AN….I actually can't tell what it says

I'm baaack! Taking a break from reading the fic tho, I still have to recover a little. Sorry, did I say a little? I meant a WHOLE FUCKING TON.

DORIS RUMBRIDGE

I haven't gotten to that part yet but now I really feel tempted to scald my eyes once more.

She seems confused as to what's happening. She keeps repeating stuff, messing up people's names repeatedly (in different ways), and at one point, Darth Valer shows up…

I'm trying to read as fast as I can so I can get to the comments

Darth Valer omg what the actual fuck is this supposed to be Harry Potter or Star Wars?

The names aren't even consistent I don't know who's who or what's happening

blak Volremortserum

You're right I have no idea what that is.

da barke lord

I'm starting to hope that this is fake

It's not. I looked it up. I'm sorry.

Also, apparently author and "Raven" had a fight? The fanfiction's quality is only getting worse now, I honestly hope for the sake of my eyes that this Raven person comes back because at least they could spell somewhat.

I could've sworn Draco killed himself but he's back now…..

ikr??? wtf????

Like, the author didn't even offer an explanation for it. Why?

OH NO!!!! HELP!!!?

great they also use the f slur

eeey y'all it has a wikipedia page

I made it to chapter ten, I need a break before my brain cells start a freaking war.
The writing is not even close to how terrible the A/N are… I can't even. Every time there's an A/N I need to pause for a good three minutes trying to decipher how the alphabet and sounds correlate.

Their summary was better than the actual thing

I still laugh every time I see Volxemortserum

I made it to chapter ten, I need a break before my brain cells start a freaking war.
The writing is not even close to how terrible the A/N are… I can't even. Every time there's an A/N I need to pause for a good three minutes trying to decipher how the alphabet and sounds correlate.

I'm about to start chapter 43 and…. 21 was the worst I've seen, but the rest is still terrible

WHO IS MR. NORRIS
WHY IS HEDWIG A PERSON
WHY DID HEDWIG AND VOLDEMORT HAVE SEX

I NEED MY QUESTIONS ANSWERED

There's a scene where most of the characters have sex together. At the same time. Lupin looked shocked. No shit. I'm actually crying in terror