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@the-void-phantasmic language

Idk if this counts as something to put in my writing dump, but I made some alternate lyrics for two songs I really like. Uhh highly recommend listening to the original songs so you know the rhythm/melody/original lyrics

Basically, I want to cover a bunch of songs that I think fit with my story, so I’ve started rewriting some lyrics to fit my story better, for funsies.

More info about it here: Fractured Dreamscapes

And of course there’s the stories I posted here.

In the nature of the source material, I have given you my interpretation (and what’s technically canon in this AU), but feel free to make up your own interpretations of these lyrics ^^


Lamentations - Vane Lily, Carbon Monoxide

{Soul}
[Mind]
(Heart)

Note: “IN MY/YOUR ETERNAL DEBT” is in unison.


{Redefine how to feel human}
{Redefine my kindness}
{Redefine what's wrong, what's right}
{So you don't test my patience}

{Don't expect an easy life and}
{Don't expect my mercy}
{Hold your breath and walk on ice}
{For any less would hurt me}

[Restarting, rebooting null programs]
[Running, debugging my mind]
[Forging and sorting successes]
[How could our Heart be so blind?]

(Tear apart, break the neglected)
(Carelessness, reckless assault)
(Suppressing relapsed indignation)
(When will you see, this was not my fault?)

(The core of your design)
[INVITE SUICIDATION]
(Your eyes look down at mine)
[TRANSFER ENUMERATION]
(It never truly ends)
[SAID AGAIN AND AGAIN]
[(As metal breaks and bends)]

{I'm only working smart}
{Imprisoned, a broken Heart}
{Rewire, take it higher than we've ever been}
{A land unknown, what we once were, these perfect thirds}
{[(Perfection we could’ve never been)]}

{[(Read it and weep)]}
{Pay attention to the finer print}
{[(Read it and weep)]}
{Constant battling between these twins}

{Forging a stronger Whole}
{Now we’ve lost control}
{Brace for the fate you'll face for following the path you paved}

{[(STOP)]}
{You don't know what we’ve been through}
{[(DON'T YOU DARE FORGET)]}
{Your roots are where I planted you}

{IN MY ETERNAL DEBT}
[(IN YOUR ETERNAL DEBT)]
{Reflections of the past}
{I see him in your faces}
{I still wonder why we never were Whole that day}

{I can’t help but drown in this guilt}
{I’ll never reach this unattainable fantasy}
{I’ll break down this stability we’ve built}
{Immortalizing this, a plea of insanity}

{Failed to recognize warning signs}
{And I let it happen thrice}
{You once more were lead astray}

{Something I've never understood}
{The question I've overlooked}
{Am I the one to blame?}


End-World Normopathy - Ghost and Pals, Vane Lily

(Heart)
[Mind]

Note: “And now I’m/you’re all alone” and “All eyes are staring at my/your hands” are in unison.


(The path you always seem to walk is cold)
(Algorithmic dreams, a vessel of our Soul)
(Through his eyes of perfect ambiguity)
(We were born to keep the world in harmony)

(And through the days we saw this place create)
(Normopathy that would collate)
(The passages in detail on your palms)
(A world developed proudly by this Heart)
(The gift of life would soon impart)
(The tears were born from fires of a psalm)

(A spark alight behind those eyes)
(Ensured damnation as a failed attempt)
(Enlightened windows to the Mind were damaged still)
(While my claws laid across my chest)

(And now I’m all alone)
[And now you're all alone]

. . .

[Fleeting words in pen, I tell the story of Salpêtrière]
[Dissonant again, and shown disorganized, without a prayer]
[Cornered by a psyche in a world that never truly ends]
[Though we’ll never die, I’ve found that]

[All eyes are staring at my hands]
(All eyes are staring at your hands)

[The core of my design]
(Your eyes look down at mine)
[It never truly ends]
[(As metal breaks and bends)]

(The path you walk eternally is cold)
(Knowing clarity is out of our control)
(I can't understand the way you seem to pray)
(But reality's contorting at your say)

(A new facade of prophets masquerade)
(You recreated on your face)
(Those eyes designed and carried by your fate)

[These hands embodied roles to automate]
[To never feel, to never break]
[The writing on the wall remains the same]

[And yet you live between these states]
[Never belonging, in a futile daze]
(But were the ethics appraised?)
(Now it's too late)
[(Now we’re all lost in the holy gate, ah)]

[The core of my design]
(Your eyes look down at mine)
[It never truly ends]
[(As metal breaks and)]

[(Bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, as metal breaks and)]
[(Bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, as metal breaks and)]
[(Bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, as metal breaks and)]
[(Bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, and bends and breaks, as metal breaks)]

[Listen, this is not a question]
[We all tried, and we all failed]
[We’re about to kill the world, so you should start by getting it backwards]
[I don’t know why I feel this pain in my heart]
[Now we have to say goodbye to all illusions]
[That are shattered and gone]

(To see the world again)
[And my brother just gives me that weird, surreal look]
[To see the Moon again]
(To see the world again, ah)


@Serenity88 group

(I need more Heart/Mind/Soul. Neeeeed more!)
(so I started reading, it really vibed with me at the most gruesome parts {gee, what does that say about me…}. I enjoy the story, the concept and characters are just chefs kiss! ur writing is really good, I look up to u as a writer now. )

@Serenity88 group

( eeee tysm! which writing do you mean? like, are you referencing House of Cards (Quinn, Jasmine and Cayde), Amnesiac Project (Rio and Juniper), or some other Im too scatterbrained to remember to mention here?)

@the-void-phantasmic language

A small teaser for the next song I ruin :)

Welcome to Ame’s Amazing Assemblage of Anarchy
A sad, pathetic boast made by a lonely little ghost
An assembly line of near-rhymes
A combusted engine of fear and dissension
No other place quite like the story you may dislike
Of dead, leaden eyes and a barely hidden demise
Heh. Welcome.

@the-void-phantasmic language

Did you guess the song yet? No? Damn okay then. Well here it is in all its mediocre-ness, enjoy!


Welcome to Tally Hall (in which yet another cover album is born, oh no)
A mix of Tally Hall’s lyrics, Chonny Jash’s lyrics, and my own

How to tell who’s singing what:

Ame
^Background singer Ame^
(Heart)
[Mind]
{Soul}

Note: during the “W-W-A-G-D” part, I plan to layer several acronyms referencing each artist that inspired some aspect of this story/cover series, so here’s the full list:
W-W-T-H-D, Tally Hall (duh)
W-W-C-J-D, Chonny Jash
W-W-M-M-D, Miracle Musical
W-W-G-P-D, Ghost and Pals
W-W-A-G-D, me, of course (Ame-Ghost)

Note 2: “he’s/I’m in the right” is in unison.

Note 3: the “all is Tally, all is Hall” and “all is Chonny, all is Jash” chants are in unison with the verses they’re paired with. To see how this would actually sound, listen to Chonny Jash’s cover of Welcome to Tally Hall.

Note 4: the part at the end is just supposed to be spoken normally.


Welcome to Ame’s Amazing Assemblage of Anarchy
A sad, pathetic boast made by a lonely little ghost
An assembly line of near-rhymes
A combusted engine of fear and dissension
No other place quite like the story you may dislike
Of dead, leaden eyes and a barely hidden demise
Heh. Welcome.

Can I get an A? {What the hell?}
And if you hit me with an A-M-E, yeah
Then you'd see that
I cant really seem to recall why
Ruining perfect rhymes is my calling
So kids, come take a seat, no
This ain’t a new beat
I promise, guys, I’m really not tryna cheat here
Running around, a Ghost the algorithm may never catch
On cover duty, like an off-brand Chonny Jash

…Eh, not really

W-W-A-G-D
’Dunno if I can make it to a university
’Cuz all work and no play makes me crazy
Yeah, I really need to stop bein’ so lazy
So, dig up a colorful and lovable trio long gone
Dig up a masterful and mystical album unsung
And sooner than you know
You've found the crossover show
Well now, common sense is truly gone
We’re singing

/{[(We're in the mini mall)]}/
/{[(Working the carnival)]}/
/{[(We like to play it all)]}/
/{[(Welcome to Tally Hall)]}/

Now, who’s to blame?
The automated players, I proclaim
Purple, yeah, this little fellow always tries
To convince his other half that he’s in the right (I’m in the right!)
Red, the proud loud guy we adore
{Is my amp too high?}
No, turn it up more!
So Blue, feelin’ numb, hittin’ drums, he sneers
[One could say a single word and you’d be left in tears.]
Send home the locksmith, Gray’s got keys
To unlock the mystery here, if you please
Now open the gates
And give me the stage
And hear us singing on and on

Again!

/{[(We're in the mini mall)]}/
/{[(Working the carnival)]}/
/{[(We like to play it all)]}/
/{[(Welcome to Tally Hall)]}/
/{[(We're in the mini mall)]}/ ^ALL IS TALLY, ALL IS HALL^
/{[(Working the carnival)]}/ ^THE DAY WE FORGET IS THE DAY WE FALL^
/{[(We like to play it all)]}/ ^TIME WILL NEVER DULL OUR CALL^
^/([{WELCOME TO TALLY HALL}])/^

Can I get a click?
Flick off the switch
And we'll ignite the night in pitch
(Singin’ songs you always hear)
[And wish the dissonance disappeared]
[(Don’t you know we’re only halfway right?)]
Oh, come in, I don’t bite!

Revealing that the Ghost is the one that aims to host
These unpredictable games and silly little notes
Scrawling line after line, a bit pitiful
Hoping her new album’s somewhat acceptable

Like, I might take what everyone else has made
Do a couple of albums, with no intention to sell them
You didn't think I had the gall?
Well, bloody welcome to Tally Hall!

They’re stereosonic
They’re animatronic
I’m fucking up the lyrics, leaving people appalled, and
A quick distraction
This mechanic attraction
I’m sure you’ll never wanna leave these little blots!
[Stop.]

-Epic instrumental-

Hey ho, don't you know
This used to be a little puppet show
That's right, no one forgets
About the marionette quintet

{[(We think we're playing in a band)]}
{[(But we'd love to give you all a hand)]}
Woo!

/{[(We're in the mini mall)]}/
/{[(Working the carnival)]}/
/{[(We like to play it all)]}/
/{[(Welcome to Tally Hall)]}/

{[(We think we're playing in a band)]}
{[(But we'd love to give you all a hand)]}
{[(We think we're playing in a band)]}
{[(But we'd love to give you all a hand)]}
{[(We think we're playing in a band)]}
^ALL IS TALLY, ALL IS HALL^
^ALL IS CHONNY, ALL IS JASH^
{[(But we'd love to give you all a hand)]}
^THE DAY WE FORGET IS THE DAY WE FALL^
^THE DAY WE FORGET IS THE DAY WE CRASH^
{[(We think we're playing in a band)]}
^TIME WILL NEVER DULL OUR CALL^
^NO, THIS ISN’T JOHNNY CASH^
{[(But we'd love to give you all a hand)]}
^WELCOME TO TALLY HALL^
^WELCOME TO CHONNY JASH^

. . .

Make sure to take your sanity with you on the way out.
Ah, shit, you lost it, didn’t you?
Every fucking time…
Oh, well. Have a nice day, I suppose.

@the-void-phantasmic language

tw // dissociation, derealization i guess, numbness.

|introduction to a dream.|

. . .

endlessly. helplessly. ceaselessly. callously.

harmony. dissonance. unity. cacophony.

a terrible, grating cacophony ringing in my head.

shut up. shut up. shut up.

i feel numb.

i’m in agony.

i can’t feel a thing.

yet i can feel everything.

my heart aches. who is Heart?

alone, at the edge of a universe, humming a tune.

my Heart aches.

he is lonely. judged. mocked. scorned.

alone.

i am alone.

where am i?

who am i?

my mind is an echo chamber of thoughts. who is Mind?

feelings still claw at me. logic will rot in me.

my Mind is an echo chamber of thoughts.

loud, terrible thoughts with no harmony.

he is angry. stressed. anxious. scared.

terrified.

i am terrified.

i’m no longer in control.

my body is not mine.

who’s is it?

my soul feels absent. empty. who is Soul?

a part of thee in the key of what we know

to be every part without me.

my Soul feels absent. empty.

he is numb.

that is all.

i am numb.

i am the murderer. i’m the fatality.

that is all.

this is a fucking nightmare.

{[(goodnight.)]}


I felt silly, wanted to write something with lyric references, came up with this really shitty. I don’t even know what this is. I just threw up words onto a page. This is Quinn’s perspective, by the way

I guess this is somewhat representative of the Split? Idk

The lyrics are from Dream (Chonny Jash) and Introduction To The Snow (Miracle Musical)

Enjoy if word vomit is your jam, I guess

And yes, I’m okay

I’ll come up with something better next time, I promise

@the-void-phantasmic language

I wanna get back into some Actual Writing this weekend. Sooooo I’m gonna do a vote on what I should write next.

  1. (After Heart returns from Apathy) Heart misses stargazing. Mind takes them outside and tells them what the stars look like that day, painting a picture of the sky in their imagination.

  2. (During Heart’s imprisonment) Mind feels incomplete without his other half. He feels feelings. He gets mad that he feels feelings, then proceeds to spiral.

So basically, fluff or angst? And no I’m not giving Soul attention, fuck you /j