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Kane watched, feeling a little out of place " I think it'll look good on him.
Kane watched, feeling a little out of place " I think it'll look good on him.
Nori looked over at Kane, tilting his head a bit. "Need help picking stuff out?"
" no. I'm fine, really. " He said and raised his hand a bit to throw off the idea
Nori sighed, shaking his head. "Kane, kane kane, you cant just stroll into a designer clothes brand with a guy who is fucking loaded and not at least try anything on." He held up a sheer, open-chested shirt to Kane. "Now this… this is something."
Kane gave a unsure look, his gaze trailed up to nok. Little help? He tried saying with his eyes
Norkhal’rokh chuckled at the interaction between the two, then shrugged at Kane.
“It’s up to you, but Nori does have a point,”he said lightly.
“ fine, I’ll try it, “ he said and pulled his hair back. He took the shirt back and slipped into a changing room. He came back out a minute later, his face flushed
Nori blushed, watching as Kane came forward. “D-d-damn…”
Kane kept his eyes on the ground “ s..sorry not the best at modeling “ he rubbed the back of his neck
Nori shook his head. "Are you kidding?? You look amazing!!"
(Lmao I keep wanting to say Nori "Flapped his wings" or something bc he's actually an avian hybrid in his original story)
( it would be cool to have the mythical parts of your characters come out, though Kane doesn’t have a magical background )
(You could probably come up with one!)
( yeah! Maybe a wolf like habiki or something, if serp is good with it.)
(Ooh yeah!)
(Evil grin. I love the idea. And maybe I could modify Norkhal’rokh’s ‘condition’)
(I actually had it where he’s anemic and needs blood transfusions to keep up with it [he has a specific anemia that doesn’t have to do with his iron levels]. But, I could actually go a step further where, he’ll still be anemic, but it’s also a sort of vampiric virus, and if he misses one or two visits he’ll start turning into a vampire [he actually is a vampire in my stories, and he was actually 27 when he was turned])
(Or, alternatively, he ends up encountering a vampire and is turned, then freaks out about it)
(I’m honestly leaning toward the virus)
( I like the virus!)
( also, what about Kane being a necromancer )
(Shrug. Though, I still want to keep Norkhal’rokh’s condition a mystery, where the other two actually have to ask him about it. Also, if he does end up turning for whatever reason, then he’s permanently a vampire unless killed [That’s just how I write vampires. They don’t get the opportunity of a cure or anything like that, lol])
( lol, well my version on necromancy is they where turned by death themselves but Kane would have to follow the three rules which means he would lose sight speech or hearing. So like I thought we could do it were he got hurt on the job, since he’s a cop, and do it that way. He’ll just blame it on the accident. Plus it’d give nori and not time to get closer. )
(So… he’d basically become either blind, deaf, or a mute? I’m confused. That can happen without the necromancy part [and if you went with the werewolf thing instead, that could carry over into his wolf form. I don’t know, just a thought]. But, how would the necromancy come into play?)
( if Kane was to get hurt one the job, to be brought back by death and I would do one or the other, like either he becomes a werewolf or a necro not both. Though I’d more then likely pick speech )
(Ah, okay. I see where you’re going now)
Norkhal’rokh snickered, then tilted his head slightly, staring at Kane thoughtfully.
“You really do look nice, whether you’re good at modeling or not,”he commented.
Kane chuckled “ fine, I’ll get it,”
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