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Started August 10, 2018 by Deleted user

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Alexander takes the gun. "Gladly." With that he storms out into the invasion, screaming a yell of wrath, pain and fury that would scare the living daylights of any human or alien nearby.

The middle of the city was chaos. The Earth militia had shown up to combat the Hellscape legions in plenty.
Remotely controlled tanks met with Hellscapers mounted on what looked like impossibly large insecticile creatures like a mix of dragonflies and mantises. The angel was far too weak to use any real power, picking up a sawlike weapon from a Hellscaper, and what looked like an MP5 from an orcish Earthling.
He fired off the gun, missing most of the shots, but catching a mantis thing in the appendage and eye, and knocking off it's soldier. Then took cover, dropping the empty gun.

Zhavia watched as they just talked for a bit. Do humans always talk so much on the battlefield? "Let's get this over with!" She charged at the girl, aiming for her neck, she wanted to make this quick and get it over with.

Immediately, Zoe blocked the sword wih her staff. The alien was too predictable since she could literally hear and see each move she was going to make. Zoe quickly checked her phone. "Dude give me a minute will you?" She asked in a false annyance as she twirled her staff in a way the made the alien's sword fly out of her hands before electricuting her and making her fly away again.
"Oh yay more followers!"

The mounted Hellscape soldiers advanced, forcing the angel to pull together a heap of power. He invaded the minds of their mounts. The level of simplicity was shocking, but strangely enough, they were a hive mind.
He worked at their minds, picking out the highest ranking bug, and sending a stabbing wave of pain at it telepathically, causing the others to rush over to it, slowing the advance. Just then he was knocked on his ass by what looked like a wave cannon. He rolled back up to his feet, and charged into the fray with the saw weapon. Being an angel, he had millions of years experience over these pond scum, and the human race alike, although with the blow he'd been given earlier, he was too weak to truly use it.

Zhavia's sword lifted into the air and stabbed the girl in her side. Then another dagger went through her phone braking it. She can knock me down as many times as she wants, but it won't be easy to kill me.
(Don't injure my character to badly because she is the only one I have and there is literally no one on my side to help so..)

Alexander was bleeding… badly. He didn't even notice it as he charged through the alien life forms. He was starting to seem more black and white than color and that wasn't a good thing. His adrenaline rush was starting to fail and he was becoming weaker. But he continued to fight. He wasn't giving up easily.

(Oh whoops.)
Zoe whinced before she yanked out the sword and stabbed the alien right back but in the hand before using the dagger and stabbing her in the kneecap and pushing her away before she went to one knee.
"This should work." She hissed as she pulled this gassy cream over her wound and let it start mending at a rapid speed.

Alexander collapses, his fingers practically dissolving. He was so tired. He was surrounded by dead aliens, blood, and gore, but he used up all of his energy to create a shadow blast, which caused a lot of alien deaths. His breathing is heavy and labored. He was going to die out here… alone… and in the shadows. He smiles ruefully at that. A shadow wielder… fading into shadows.

"Aw shit." Zoe cussed as she immediately ran over to the boy's side. "Here this should heal you in a few minutes." Zoe replied as she put the gassy cream on Alexander's wounds.

Zhavia used her ability to steal the cream right out of Zoe's hand. "Thanks." She took a bunch to heal herself. "Ow." Dang this stuff hurts. She smiled. "I'm not as weak as you believe me too be."

"Yeah and did you also know its poisonious to non humans whixh is why we don't recruit angels and such? " She informed her. "Also no offense." Zoe added for Alexander before she grabbed the cream and slammed the alien in the air before slamming her into the ground countless of times.

Zhavia wrapped her legs around Zoe and slammed her into the ground. "Does it look like I'm dying!" She spat then kicked her in the face. "Hey, we need you over here!" Zhavia quickly jumped on a piece of concrete and flew away. "Hope to see you soon!" She waved and lughed as she disappeared from their sight.

"Dang she has issues and is in desperate need of education." Zoe remarked as she sprayed the cream on her face. "Dang this feels nice."

Alex groans. "I'm only a cursed." He says, slowly sitting up in pain. He grabs his scythe, clutching his side.

Zoe sprayed the cream on him "You're welcome."

Jophiel lay there, having slain enough of the enemy to fill a water silo. Aliens, gore and such lie around him. And dead Earth soldiers as well.
Jophiel approached a dying man, scraping together enough power left to heal him, and a few others, before zapping back to the cafė. The medium boy who owned a scythe lay in distress.
"I'll be back to help you, but first I must right the wrongs I have done and heal the people in the cafė which I unintentionally smote in my rage." He walked inside.

(I sprayed cream on him
hes fine.)

He entered the cafė, to see those his angelic essence affected lying unconscious. He placed a hand on each head, restoring their minds and bodies to full life as he had done the soldiers, and walked back outside.
"You two have done well, but I'm afraid we're not done here."

"What was it you need?" Zhavia was upset. Her fight was just getting good and they had to interrupt her. "This?" Tyson pointed to all of their fallen people. "How are so many dead already?" She jumped off her concrete slab and had to step over bodies to examine them. "An Angel." Zhavia kicked a body. "Of course they would have Angel's on their side." This made things a bit more difficult. Zhavia was in no condition to be fighting Angel and even if she was, she wouldn't want to fight them.

Alexander starts when he sees the invasion. "Alex, honey, don't you dare…" Izzy growls. He shakes his head. "I have to. He takes a breath and bolts towards the cafe, summoning his bone scythe. "Watch over Blue and protect him, kay?!" He yells at the ghost. She nods and solidifies, grabbing Blue and hauling him off. Alexander bolts towards the cafe and raises his bone scythe towards the alien. "I wouldn't do that if i were you." He growls lowly, shadows swirling around him.

(Dang… I missed a lot. *mutters Stupid three hour car rides with no wifi)
Blue paled and jumped when a lady appeared out of no where and started dragging him, “W-Wait!” He called as Alexander ran off into the clambered of guns and battle. Blue noticed a moment too late as a bullet flew straight to his head. But it didn’t hit him. No, Blue shifted into his other form on instinct, becoming floating strips of cloth. Adrenaline started fueling Blue as he whirled around to the lady, “Hide,” He hissed and ran. Or, more accurately, he floated, the strips of cloth moving and shifting every time a bullet came his way. Blue knew that the next time he shifted, there would be bruises everywhere a bullet was supposed to hit him, and every injury that didn’t happen would make it harder to stay in this form, but that didn’t matter. He needed to find Alexander.

Alexander stumbles across the rubble, his eyes filled with pain. He glances at his hand. It was almost see through. He couldn't use anymore of his gift. It could literally kill him. The attacks seem to be slowing for the time being, but he was so weak. He wasn't sure if he could make it any further… He sighs softly and sits, using his scythe for support.

Blue spotted Alexander and paled. Why was his hand almost gone? He sprinted towards him and was about to call out, but a cyber weapon from an invader slashed against his chest. Even in his cloth form, he still felt a dull pain. He might have broken a rib in his other form. Blue shook his head, and dredged up his water connection. He hadn’t used it in nearly a year, because of his father, but he brought it up like a muscle memory. He shot down enemies as he made his way to Alexander. Once he finally got there, he was panting, even in his cloth form.
“Alexander, Alexander, are you okay?” Blue got out, sending a wave of water at a group of invaders. It wasn’t entirely effective, it only got them wet and made them stumble, but it was something.

"Stand back." Jophiel yelled, suddenly by Alexander, and a cloth creature that looked like something straight out of Ajin.
"Close your eyes." He finished, light and sound building up inside of him.