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(Alright, I gotta get to work, but we'll start after then!)

@Rvan group

(Here’s my new character (I’ll delete the old one) Is he okay?)

Name: Blue Keifer
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Gay
Age: 20
Species: He can control water and has a different form (this other form can come apart and come back together if that makes sense (kind of like the sandman in Spider-Man 3, but he’s made of strips of cloth) :

Background: Develop
Personality: Shy, afraid to speak up, lonely (Develop more if that’s ok? I never stick to these things…)
Appearance: Sandy brown hair, super pale skin and he bruises easily. Crystal blue eyes and is short height.
Gear: Always wears leather gloves (for a mysterious reason, people made rumors that if he touches you with his hands you’d die on the spot (but they’re just rumors, he isn’t too OP like that lol)) and is really good with knives, his main weapon is this:

Other: He’s an insomniac and has a green thumb.

@Rvan group

(Cool, I think they’ll be cute together :) I’m gonna be gone for a bit tho (going on a kayaking trip with my family) but see you all when I’m done, can’t wait to start)

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Name: Zoe Melana
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 16
Species: Is Earth like Multiverse?
Background: TO BE REVEALED!
But she works with the mechanic and tech team that she was recruited for. Not afraid to fight if she needs to.
Personality: She is very smart, creative, and witty. She has Chromosithia, which is a thing where she sees sound waves as color geometrically. So she is really good with a photographic memory and is usually organized. Is outgoing too. She is very loyal and also stubborn. She has the powers of electricity and um she can hear vibrations and convert them into light/electricity so she has to wear these special hearing aid things that block out all sound. She doesn't need to hear because she can see what you're saying.
Appearance: Uneven wavy hair thats black and shoulder length, fair skin thats usually covered in oil, sweat or grim, around 5'7
Gear: Lots of stuff man, lots of stuff, fights with a staff that can turn into a bow an arrow and has this pulser thing she can shoot with.
Other:

(Could your characters be a ship?)

Deleted user

( Isn't your character lesbian?)

(I'm freaking blind I guess. My eyes read bi, but I guess not. Or did you change it?)

Deleted user

(I will.)

Jophiel walks into the all but barren parking lot of the cafė, opened the door, and walked over to the counter.
"One water." He said, looking for his money.
"It's free." The barista said.
"Oh." He stammered awkwardly, before taking his water and heading to the booth.

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( Lol.)
Zoe decided to walk into a cafe and get some tea since she usually had coffee everyday.
"Yeah I'll have a cup of tea please!" She asked the waiter.
He nodded and took down her order before Zoe slung down her backpack and took out her laptop before she started typing things into it, waiting for her order.

@Fantasy-Illy!

All the guards of the palace were lined up ready for the new comer to enter the door. There were whispers about her and not good ones either. It was rare for a girl to join the top military of Hellimore palace, the men believed the women should stay as city guards and nothing more. Zhavia though, she was different, she never let a man tell her what she can and can't do, what she is and isn't. Ever since she was five she has been training harder and more then anyone to get where she is now. The giant doors to the main hall, were opened and Zhavia walked through wearing the signature military outfit. Her face stayed mutual as she ignored the glares and whispers and walked up to where the King sat.

@Vuclan-is-tired

Alexander walks towards the cafe, opening the door with a sigh. He was so tired. His body ached from working long term last night. He needed sleep desperately, he was a dead man walking at the moment. He cracks his back and walks forward. "A black coffee…" he says, yawning softly, tossing the money on the counter.

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Lili hid her wings in the alley way and walked out into the cafe, ordering a white chocolate frappe and grabbing a seat at a booth and taking out her computer and going into her photography folder