@Lenered
Rest thy soul well, @Lil-Owl or thou shalt lie awake, thinking about my evil plans for Ace's death. I think about that way too much.
Rest thy soul well, @Lil-Owl or thou shalt lie awake, thinking about my evil plans for Ace's death. I think about that way too much.
(Sorry @Mish I was just thought he would use his powers on the sly to make vegetables for the shop to use and his grandmother thinking he just gardened with all his free time. I can change the part where he tracks down a lead if you would like, I didn't mean to alter your character in any way.)
Pineapple is mildly upset with coconut because Ace deserves to be eternal )
(SKETER)
Macha's breath came in short spurts. "You go first. I'll ask.", she said, voice barely above a whisper. "Truth or Dare?"
(whenever I write Macha outside of this, her personality always comes through to me in the writing, but I feel like that's not the case here. Please be honest, can you guys tell what her personality is? If yes, could you describe it to8 me briefly? I'm always open to feedback and critisism)
Dani led Blake and Niki to the door of the apartment. "Okay. Blake, I need you to keep an open mind, okay? A lot of the people who live with me here, including myself, have been through a lot of pain by R.A.C.'s hand."
(@Topaz, I think that Macha is kind and caring, a little snappy when she is mad, enjoys the company of others, and holds a lot of pain and grief.)
(can't wait to see Blake in action)
(@Natasha, thanks for your input! You're mostly correct, except Macha only enjoys the company of the very few people she holds close to her heart)
(more criticism, anyone?)
Blake took a deep breath and gave Dani a nervous nod. There was no going back now. Putting trust in people is the worst. Blake decided miserably. He had nowhere else to go now. He stared at Dani, anxiety coursing through his veins.
(@Topaz Macha seems very defensive of those she's close to and it's obvious she's a very loyal friend despite the betrayal she's had to deal with. Overall she's a very well rounded character!)
Dani opened the door,letting the three of them in. "Ana! Josh! Are you two still here?"
Blake trailed quietly behind Dani, unsure of what to say or do. He looked to her for orders, but she wasn't paying attention to him. With a shy glance as Niki, he cautiously stepped into the apartment. Blake felt more curious than alarmed at this point, but he kept himself on guard, his muscles taught with tension. He was ready to fight if he had to.
(@TiredOtter, thank you!)
(oh, and my sweet, traumatized infant Macha is an avid reader, and also a huge fan of the HP series! Since she stopped going to school when she and Fae ran from Niagara Falls, she'll occasionally steal books, and when Jason was alive, he and Rhea would bring her their textbooks and extra copies of their homework so that she could keep learning, and Rhea would bring her books from the library. Any other potterheads here?)
(Absolutely! HP is the best!)
(yasssssssssssssssssssssssssss what house are you in? I'm a Hufflepuff [don't you dare insult us we are not the effin' potato house])
(I'm a Gryffindor, but all my friends are Hufflepuffs so I'd never insult it! Do you know your Ilvermorny House? I'm in Horned Serpent)
(SAME!!!!!!!!!!!!! JKR has only revealed 7 of the 11 wizarding schools around the world, unfortunately, but she says there will be more content soon!!!)
(do you ship Luna and Neville, or is that just me?)
(No I totally thought Neville and Luna would end up together, but I like how Luna ended up with a Scamander!)
I'm a Ravenclaw, and a horned serpent.
(I guess, but I ship Longgood more ;)
(what about Ramione?)
"Truth, it's easier." Ace slid his hand on top of hers.
(hi again! Macha's waiting ;)
Ramione is cute
(I'm a Harry Potter fan!!! I'm a mix between Hufflepuff/Gryffindor.)
I've already said this, but I'm a Ravenclaw. Am I the only one here?
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