forum Elementals Chapter 4: Celestial Tides (OPEN)
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( i was left at the hotel. and being new to this its really hard to keep up when i go offline xd, so i basicaly apparated there next to noel and have no idea what to put for a large drawback )

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(XD felt that sorry for llate relpy reading gay stuff. just to help with some romances because thats hiro's sexuality XD)

@Tired-but-passionate

(Ok. So first, like @Story_Creator said, magic isn’t an element, so you might want to change your wording. Now, I’m not entirely sure what op imagined for ‘magic’ to mean in this context, but I imagine, since we already have space and time as elements, you wouldn’t be able to teleport/apparate at all. At least, not at will, with no consequences. You could take inspiration from Harry Potter, and have him need certain ingredients to accomplish a magical feat. Maybe something like blood, or hair, whether from him, someone else, or an animal. Kali seems to be the only one he’s been close to, so if anything, he should’ve teleported to her)

@Tired-but-passionate

(I’m just following the logic that since Hiro got close to Kali, he may found a hair strand from her or smth and used it to teleport to her. Sorry I didn’t clarify. You might want to describe him using the hair strand)

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( okay like i said im noobs of noobs and only on book 3 of harry potter xd)

@imJUSTasillylittleguy group

Ignis tried his best to keep the water back, taking more power then he realized. Ignis quickly gabbed Kali, before the spell broke. He closed his eyes tight and teleported the two out of the temple. Ignis felt incredibly weak and could barely move. His breath short and his muscles strained.

"ignis!" She made sure to catch him incase they might fall to the ground. If they weren't already on the ground she would lay him gently laid his head on her lap.She closed her eyes and breathed steading her breathe. She was trying to heal him, like she did with Amara but then again it was different back then. She would have less strong powers. She concentrated harder, and nothing would work. why isn't it working?! Why now do my powers decide to leave me?! She felt a tugging, but it was as if her flow of powers had been blocked. calm down, focus. She continued to focus, and eventually got the smallest bits of darkness, she focused it soley on helping ignis. At least making sure he could breathe normally now.

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hiro came running out the temple , he looked at the few people there " and nobody tells the mage that where at a temple…"