forum Any Songwriters?

Started March 13, 2019 by @lemondad

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Ok, both of those songs hit me right in the soul and iT hUrTs….

Ok, both of those songs hit me right in the soul and iT hUrTs….

who's songs?

sad trash writer noises

SwimwithGamers' and Rainy's

reeeee- i'm finna post some lyrics i wrote eventually when i get the chance

SwimwithGamers' and Rainy's

Aw I'm sorry

reeeee- i'm finna post some lyrics i wrote eventually when i get the chance

Yey! I wanna see!

reeeee- i'm finna post some lyrics i wrote eventually when i get the chance

Yey! I wanna see!

oki oki lmao

they're pretty depressing fyi

Oh, you wrote about my social life?

She had eyes like broken headlights
And a heart filled with gasoline
Words sharper than her teeth
But they tend to cut just as deep

I can't tell if she's wearing a mask
Or Is she that bad underneath?
You know I could tell you the answer
But some secrets we have to keep

But won't you learn
To hold your words?
'Cause if I hear
You're gonna burn!

Why won't you learn
To hold your words?
No-one wants to hear
What you did to her!

I'll sugar you with cyanide
Just for kicks I'll make you cry
Serve you soda with anti-freeze
And hope that the last thing you see
is me

Honey, you're like a clock that
needs to be reset
Do you live for the fame
Or for the regret?
and uh, here's some other drabbles:
I heard
that you had another girl
It's a pity that she's in your life

And you used to say
I'm hopeless and flawed
And I hope to god you're right

'Cause I don't want to be like you
And I don't want to be abused
I don't want to
No I can't seem to
Stop

It seems I'm addicted
To taking pretty things and
Breakin' 'em, fuckin' 'em up

And every night
When I close my eyes
You're hiding in the depths of my mind

they're not great-

Are you kidding? You're joking right? That's flipping awesome!!!

Duuuude. I want to hear those with music. That first one especially. I can’t even really pick a favorite line because they all pack a huge punch and I just-

thank you so much-

I was just- idk, sad- and I started writing.

_{(reads Josh's lyrics and chokes a little)}

_{(reads Josh's lyrics and chokes a little)}

why-

Hi, um, I'm a novice at song writing and just wanted some tips on a song I wrote.I hope that's cool. (Also this is not supposed to be a very religious song it just kind of sounds that way, sorry.)

Come Home

(Verse 1)

The mountains the rivers they call us

Shouting these words from above

Come home,

Come home,

Come home

(Chorus)

It's time to meet our maker

Our glorious creator

He who filled our souls with

Love and passion

Who made our hearts beat

Oh wa oh oh 3x

Made our hearts beat

(Verse 2)

The deer and the fish beckon us

They sing melodies from long ago

That we used to know 2x

(Chorus)

(Last verse 3)

And years later we've made our own lives

We have our own kids watched as they grow

Years later higher they've climbed

but now our time slowly fades

Know they've made us proud

and when they asked why we're not afraid

We will say

(Chorus end)

Made our hearts beat 2x

Who made our hearts beat.

(Please feel free to rip this apart.)

I'm too nervous to put anything out there. Maybe someday. . .