forum Any Songwriters?

Started March 13, 2019 by @lemondad

tune

I have an audio version of the lyrics if I can find it, it's going through instrumental rn

okay so

"You were introduced in the prologue
Perfect daughter, perfect son
then you blew up at a friend who lied to you
the teacher pulled you two apart
parent conference had to start
and now…"
What is this rhyme scheme?
It's funky and I dig it but the first part
"Prologue" to "son" to "you"
The flow just-
I dunno??? Am I making sense???

Alright, so it goes from kinda indie begining to uhhhh, rock, it goes to really angry alt rock.

Oooh, I like that.

I wasn't able to get the audio but when we finish working it I'll send y'all the link

For some reason, I added "everything falls apart."

But that's just me.

I pride myself on being a pretty low-key but accomplished songwriter. What you have written is great

lmao i write songs sometimes
but like,,,they suck ass
oh well, i got nothing left to lose anyways :3

confusion by ya boi

everything on this earth i've seen before
i can breathe fire and pop popcorn
and the music can be bad, the radio's a bore
i settle for less, i'm afraid of wanting more

error, shutdown activated (x3)

and if i can't be useful, what will become of me?
i'm okay, i swear, but i can tell you don't believe
all these questions i never got around to asking
swirl in my head, but the confusion's everlasting

i never used slope intercept
in school, i'm never interested
they say i was intoxicated
but what if i was just educated

on my own terms, i'll do it on my own terns
i don't know if i'll ever know, heh, figures
cause i'm just a specimen
and i'm a fucking pessimist

WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO BE SUCH A VIBE

is it over? written by yours truly, who is not overly fond of the verses but the chorus is nice

Backs of my eyelids
Wet with tears
I can’t run away
Can’t hide from fear
Is it over yet
Can I let you down
Can I drop my guard
Can I let me drown?

I don’t want to hear the cars
In the dark
I don’t want to count the stars
Anymore
I don’t want to touch the sky
I just want to sleep at night
Is too much to ask
Just to be alright?

I don’t want to fix the tear
In my heart
I don’t want to wake up scared
Anymore
I don’t want to live a lie
I just want to sleep at night
Is it too much to ask
Just to be alright?

Stars burn out
Seasons change
Winter comes
After the rain
People stare
People smile
Wonder what
Makes it worthwhile
Take my hand
Take my heart
Pull me close
Rip me apart
Is it over yet
Can I take a bow
Can I leave the stage
Is it over now?

WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO BE SUCH A VIBE

lmao thanks
that was my old account haha
i literally wrote that on a depresso day

here's a loverboy verse i guess

lilypichu stares at the sunset
god, i’m the master of comp-het
you make me forget the times i felt dead
what are we? i don’t even know yet
dip your toes in and please don’t get me wet
i remember when i was anxious for this bullshit to start
now i’m just anxious that you’re gonna rip out my heart
your words are poison, yet i can’t stand the thought of us apart
everytime i build up confidence you smash it again
and everytime i try to tell you, you look at me like i’m insane

Hi there! I can see it's been a while since someone posted, but I love trying to write songs, but I'm not very good at it. I love music SOOO much, have played piano for like 5+ years, viola for about 2 or 3, and am learning to play chords on guitar (but I'm not very good at guitar :P), and I definitely want to make my own music someday, maybe be in a band if it works out that way. Now I'm trying to write songs, and I've got a few that I like but they definitely need polished. Tbh, I'm not sure why I'm posting here, guess I just want some encouragement and also to just nerd out with fellow aspiring songwriters.

I am song person too