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Started November 20, 2018 by Deleted user

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Okay I don’t care WHAT it is

I kinda want it to be an enemy of the ship that your character’s on.

Thats fine. What if the Navy took him in and pirates of course hate the navy and the navy hates us?

Okay sounds neat

Ok I'm gonna write that starter.

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Shadow looked out upon the Navy's largest ship that sailed about a mile in front of The Zodiac. "Shadow!" She heard Captain Jake yell. She jumped down from the netting along the side of the ship and walked over to him. "Yes Cap?" "Man one of the cannons until we get closer to the ship. Remember what to do?" "Wreak havoc and take a few hostages." Jake grabbed Shadow and gave her a noggie. "That's my girl!" Shadow laughed at this. Jake was like a father to her now. "Jake!" "Okay. Sorry." He said holding up hands defensively but in a joking way. "Go man that cannon girl." He said waving her off. "Yes Captian!" She yelled running off to man the cannon. She had a feeling that this raid was going to be fun.

Drew shifted up against the wall. It was wet and moist down in the decks. He heard one of the sailors calling it that, though he wasn’t sure what it was really called. The wet atmosphere pushed on his face and tickled his nose. It must’ve been the salt? Or maybe something else?

"Fire the cannons!" Jake yelled once they got close to the ship. Shadow smiled as she fired the cannon and the other cannons followed suit. "Launch the grappling hooks!" He yelled. The grappling hooks fired latching on to the other causing the navy ship to rock. The grappling hooks reeled in the other ship close. The crew layed down planks across the to ships. "GO!" Jake yelled. The crew started running across screaming a battle cry. Shadow started laughing as she started to run across. "Shadow!" Shadow looked back at Jake who was loading his gun before crossing. "Go get 'em girl!" He yelled. She gave him a nod and then went to wreak havoc.

Drew looked up at what he thought was the ceiling. There was a lot of loud noises going on up there. He liked noise. It broke through awkward times. (Sorry for trash response)

(Its fine. There are always time where you feel like you don't know how to respond to the post.)
Shadow ran on board. Most of the crew was on board already. They were killing off soldiers left and right. "Damn it! I wanted to do that." She thought as she killed a guy who tried to attack her. "Well might as well see if I can get the captain. Or maybe something better." She thought as she ran down the stairs.

Drew heard footsteps and turned his head to the direction of the sound.
“Oh? Is it someone here to give me food?” He asked himself, tilting his head against the wall.

As Shadow headed down the steps she heard someone. He said something about food. She peaked around the corner giggling. (Is he in a cell?)

(No. Just on the ground without any shackles)

Drew heard giggling. The people who kidnapped him didn’t giggle.
“Er…. okay.”

"Oh! Who is the lone boy?" Shadow said clicking her boot as she walked over to him. She squatted in front of him. "Who are you? Got any importance?" She said taking out a dagger and pressing it against his neck. "And don't lie."

(He’s not in shackles)

Drew waved his head when he heard footsteps advancing and an unfamiliar voice. He squeaked and struggled a little when he felt something against his neck. Instead of looking at her, he looked at a point above her head.
“I-I’m I’m the King’s son!”

(Oh! Frick. I'll edit my post.)
Shadow grinned an evil grin. "Ooohhh. Looks like I've hit the jack pot." She said laughing. "The kings son. Now you will fetch a nice price." She said. "Jake will love this. I was going to go find the general but this was so much better."

Drew wiggled on the hard ground, really wishing he could see.
“Er, who are you?”

"Names don't matter at the moment." Shadow said picking Drew up and slinging him over her shoulder. Shadow raced up the stairs. The deck was in a blood bath. "Nice one gang!" Shadow shouted. "Now retreat!" The crew screamed a victory cry and started heading back to The Zodiac Shadow jumped back onto The Zodiac and grabbed all the planks. "Release the hooks!" Jake yelled. Shadow walked over to the side of the ship and set Drew down. "Stay here for a moment unless you want to be killed." she said as she ran off to help with the hooks.

Drew squeaked when he was lifted and run off with. He felt himself get set down in the middle of bustling movements and loud voices. In order to keep still, he sat.

Shadow ran over and hopped back onto the other ship. She ran pulling the grappling hooks off the other ship. She afterwards hoped back onto The Zodiac. She walked back over to Drew and picked him up. "Hey Jake!" Shadow yelled as she walked over to him. "Guess what I found?" She said as she set Drew down.

Drew stumbled around when he was set down. He looked this way and that, feeling around himself to try and grab something to hold on to. The surface he was standing on made him feel very shaky and sick.

"And who is this?" Jake asked looking at Drew as he stumbled around. "The King's son. Or so he claims." She said kicking him over. "O really?" Jake said.

Drew squeaked softly and plopped to the ground, frowning. He really didn’t like where this was going.
“Er… I am the King’s son.”

Jake crouched down next to Drew. He looked at him for a moment. "Yep. That's him. I recognize his face from the papers when we were last docked." He said grinning. "You sure hit the jackpot. Good job!" He said. "We'll be able to get a good ransom off him!"