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@Toxic_Persephone group

I feel like I have no friends anymore. I used to have a decent sized friend group but we all sort of split apart. I used to be really close to one friend in particular. we used to always facetime like every day. But then things changed. it was really my fault. she came to me about real problems and I didn't have an answer. Plus I was being pretty annoying at the time by ranting about random stuff which was what we used to do. I found out she was complaining about me with out other friends. that's when I stopped enjoying face timing her. we used to be able to face time for hours and not say a word but the comfortable silents turned awkward. or at least it did for me. so I would answer her face times talk for a few minutes and then make up some excuse to hang up. she confronted me about this and I just basically said sorry and told her that it just felt awkward and different now for no reason. She was the only friend I had who I could actually talk to. I haven't talked to her in months but every time I feel the need to rant or I feel upset my immediate instinct is to call her but I cant. I only really have a few friends left and I can't talk about anything personal with them. it either comes out awkward or I'm scared they'll just make fun of me or take it as a joke.

It’s alright… that’s what I went through too. Trust me when I say eventually it’ll get better and you’ll find the one or two friends that work the best with you. I may have pushed people away but I did find good friends who stubbornly refuse to let me be alone and push them away.

@hollow-boned

Ya done good!

thank you! is the bitter offering bit distracting from the action? cuz i'm not gna keep it if it takes away from the action

I think it is alright though a bit of revising might be best just so it fits the mood/tone better.

any specific pointers?

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

people change. sometimes you become incompatible with others as you grow up, and you gotta split. that's alright, it happens. you'll make new friends, trust me.

^^^^^^^
Also, I know how that feels, fam, and YK up here is right. Sometimes you grow and your tastes change.

@Toxic_Persephone group

Ya done good!

thank you! is the bitter offering bit distracting from the action? cuz i'm not gna keep it if it takes away from the action

I think it is alright though a bit of revising might be best just so it fits the mood/tone better.

any specific pointers?

I’d say go through and change the wording just a bit. Do you know how to turn passive voice into active voice?

@hollow-boned

Ya done good!

thank you! is the bitter offering bit distracting from the action? cuz i'm not gna keep it if it takes away from the action

I think it is alright though a bit of revising might be best just so it fits the mood/tone better.

any specific pointers?

I’d say go through and change the wording just a bit. Do you know how to turn passive voice into active voice?

oh, yeah
thanks!

@Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

I posted this on the Happiness chat but whatevs!

CHAPTER 1: An Interrupted Picnic

Watan stood, patiently waiting, atop the knoll where he and his best friend would often sit, a small basket, woven from reeds, and very full, in his hand.
His other hand, lay lazily on his hip, a small blanket snug in the crook of his elbow. He sighed, exasperated, shifting his weight to his other leg.
He looked over the port-town of Fawrs, his home ever since he was little.
Small, bustling, full of crop-rich farms, trim stables, workshops, stores, and many a street-stand.
A hangar for the aircraft, with sliding sheetmetal doors, and steel-plated roof lay to the East, and a secure-looking, lsvish marina to the North, for the watercraft. To the South, right before him, were the aforementioned farms. A few watchtowers dotted the outskirts, mostly to the West. It smelled of rich, warm, damp soil and mortar.
He let out another sigh, as his name was called, by a sensitive, slightly whiny voice.
“H-how long have you been here?” Siegfried inquired, loudly, making his way up the knoll.
“Thirty minutes.” Watan pretend-deadpanned.
“I'm… So sorry, the Headmage held me back for extra lessons.” Siegfried stammered, coming in for a hug.
He wrapped his arms around the other boy. He had Siegfried beat by half a head in height, maybe a stone in weight. Siegfried buried his head in the other's neck.
“It's not like you to fall behind, especially in magecraft.” Watan pointed out. They broke apart.
“N-not behind… Ahead.” The smaller boy replied. “And, uhm how are you doing with technology classes?” He asked, shyly, averting the other's eyes.
“I, well, didn't go.” Watan acknowledged, waiting for tge other's reaction. Siegfried looked as if he were going to extend a hand, but withdrew it.
“Watan, you should've gone.” He chided, huffing with exasperation.
“I know, but I'm also ahead, so why not take a day off?” He set the basket down, waving Siegfried to the side to lay out the blanket.
He patted it down, and set the basket in the middle, before sprawling out on part of the blanket, feet crossed, and hands behind his head.
“T-that mentality might just be the death of you.” Siegfried responded, crawling onto the blanket and took a seat, neatly.
“Still here, aren't I?” The taller boy retorted, playfully.
Silence, save for tge sound of tge breeze whipping through the thick grass.
Siegfried digressed.
“So what's in your basket?” He peered at it, oddly.
“Oh.” Watan flicked it open, revealing thick, supple slices of bread, and some drippings, as well as two small white packages, and a bundle of leeks.
He reached for a piece of bread, as did the other, and they smeared the drippings on them, in silence.
Two pairs of blue eyes, Watan's like gas-flames, and Siegfried's like the sky, or sea, or maybe crystals.
“So um?” The smaller boy stammered.
“Go on.” Watan nudges.
“Those two packages?”
“Open one and see!”
Silence.
Siegfried hesitantly reaches, and opens one up, the white paper crinkles as he sets it into the basket.
“Honey tarts!?!” Siegfried joyfully collapses on Watan. “You sly fiend!” He takes a small bite, relishing the sweet, savory taste.
“I figured they were your favorite!” Watan flicks him lightly on the forehead.
“You figured well!” Siegfried said, starting to drop his meek demeanor.
A whirring sound caught their attention, and they glanced off towards one of Fawrs's outer roads.
It was a jeep, much like the one the Vulkyrian military issued Watan's father. With long, sturdy military-grade axels, large tires, and a sturdy, low-to-the ground body. Poking out from it's back end, was a long, clunky turret, with a purple lense at the end. The driver could hardly if at all be seen. The turret was un-manned, as the jeep was in the vicinity of the town.
“Mercenaries?” The boys said, in unison, looking at each other once more. Puzzled.

@Toxic_Persephone group

wait where's the passive voice, i'm not finding it

Ah I just went back and read it and found that I had read it wrong. XD

Jk jk. Good job! It sounds good and coherent. I, on the other hand, am dumb.

@hollow-boned

wait where's the passive voice, i'm not finding it

Ah I just went back and read it and found that I had read it wrong. XD

Jk jk. Good job! It sounds good and coherent. I, on the other hand, am dumb.

oh lmao
thank you, and ur not dumb

@Toxic_Persephone group

wait where's the passive voice, i'm not finding it

Ah I just went back and read it and found that I had read it wrong. XD

Jk jk. Good job! It sounds good and coherent. I, on the other hand, am dumb.

oh lmao
thank you, and ur not dumb

Why thank

@hollow-boned

i got through the nastier part of the story and fuck it turned out good but now i'm not in a good mood at all i wish i wasn't so hyperempathetic

@BrennaKadavsky

Short rant.
This is going to be a super busy month for me, and I'm really behind with school. I'm homeschooled, so it's harder for me to keep track and remember what needs to be done when. Over the last school year, I had six weekend retreats. I somehow managed to fall about 5 weeks behind in Science, and 4 weeks behind geography. These are my hardest subjects, and I can barely get one done per week. They take forever and even longer to go over with my mom. Along with that, I've been behind on a bunch of my other stuff to just because I'm procrastinating. So now I feel like a failure who can't keep up, and just isn't good at stuff. I'm making stupid decisions instead of the ones I know are right, and I don't stop. I'm failing at life.

@Pickles group

Aw, Mama Hen you aren't failing. Sometimes life just gets hectic, but I promise it will calm back down again. This kind of stuff has happened to me, albeit on a much smaller scale, and honestly, I got through it by imagining myself to be one of those gorgeous youtubers that does videos on healthy breakfasts and how to get up early and stuff (cough cough Ellie June). I don't even know why it helped, but I was a lot more productive. You'll be able to do it, bud. <3

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Short rant.
This is going to be a super busy month for me, and I'm really behind with school. I'm homeschooled, so it's harder for me to keep track and remember what needs to be done when. Over the last school year, I had six weekend retreats. I somehow managed to fall about 5 weeks behind in Science, and 4 weeks behind geography. These are my hardest subjects, and I can barely get one done per week. They take forever and even longer to go over with my mom. Along with that, I've been behind on a bunch of my other stuff to just because I'm procrastinating. So now I feel like a failure who can't keep up, and just isn't good at stuff. I'm making stupid decisions instead of the ones I know are right, and I don't stop. I'm failing at life.

As a fellow homeschooler I know the feeling. I used to get months behind in math all the time. All I can really say is keep going, and power through it. Maybe time yourself when you take breaks between work, or constantly switch subjects? Or alternate between schoolwork and chores, that way your brain can rest and your mom can't argue. One way or another I can totally relate to this, so you're not alone…

@BrennaKadavsky

Yeah, I have a friend who's trying to help me set more specific hours aside for school. We'll see if it works, but it should help. Thanks for listening, it means a lot that people have felt similarly and got through it.

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Yeah, I have a friend who's trying to help me set more specific hours aside for school. We'll see if it works, but it should help. Thanks for listening, it means a lot that people have felt similarly and got through it.

That's awesome! And yeah, I know how much of a pain it can be… (I used to live under the threat of doing math all summer cause I had a stack of corrections, cause I had to redo it till I got it right….)

@Knight-Shives group

Quick vent.
I am trying to wear heels and I don't know how girls do it. Like honestly it is hard. So far I have learned that if you want to wear them for long balance on your heel a bit and not just your toes. But also it is definitely hard. For some school events we have to wear a uniform that makes us look like we are from a prep school. Last year I went with a large group to work at one of the biggest fairs near us and we had shifts but later that day (thanks to the jackets) 3 people had heat strokes. then after the event we started leaving to get back to school (a maybe 2 hour drive) we went to use the bathrooms and buy drinks and stuff at cumberland farms and it must have been funny to see like 20 kids walk in who look like they are from a prep school because of the black pants/skirts white shirts and the people who were still wearing their ties and scarves.

@BrennaKadavsky

Heels are literally the worst invention for feet ever. Who even came up with them? I'm scared of having to wear them (I have to wear them on Thursday for a formal thing) and I don't want to trip and hurt anyone.

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