forum Watermelon

Started July 03, 2018 by @Crisis

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Another muntiny

IT NOT MOOTINY

Hi dad

My Eldest has tried to take over

That classifies as mutiny

Your eldest stepped in as a mother figure when no one else was there to do so. That classifies as caring for children

People go crazy when they can't figure out the time

honestly you're not even wrong
I compulsively check my watch

My Eldest has tried to take over

That classifies as mutiny

NO I'M TRYING TO HELP

Can I have a quick suggestion on how to keep the fact that the android's an android secret for as long as possible without it being ridiculous?

okay fine
I'll be the eldest daughter
I'm still on snack duty tho

Can I have a quick suggestion on how to keep the fact that the android's an android secret for as long as possible without it being ridiculous?

Hmmmmmm well…. they just pulled him out of cryosleep, so they'd prob do a vitals check. But they'd obviously figure it out then, so maybe have him sabotage the med bay tech v subtly so they can't do a vitals check.

Good idea. Thanks!
(That should've been a no-brainer)

It's all good! Don't worry about it.
AND THAT COULD ALSO MEAN HE SHUTS DOWN/INTERFERES WITH LIFE SUPPORT ALL OVER THE SHIP NOT JUST MED BAY SO THAT COULD ALSO TAKE OUT OXYGEN/THE OXYGEN GENERATOR

I can't believe we went from watermelon, to a mutiny-that-wasn't-really-a-mutiny to scifi to "mutiny" revolution back to scifi
what a wild ride
also with some writers block sprinkled in there

GREAT IDEA THAT MAKES THE STAKES HIGHER
Also, half the reason i want the android being an android secret is that you get a shock when he gets killed. Idk, it's just a notion I had.

Yeah I haven't written in a few days

You're right XD

GREAT IDEA THAT MAKES THE STAKES HIGHER
Also, half the reason i want the android being an android secret is that you get a shock when he gets killed. Idk, it's just a notion I had.

like… when he dies, he sends out an electric shock? Or the reader is shocked that an android can die?

Well, I was planning for someone to bash him on the head or somewhere like that, and he dents and starts spewing fluids or something.

Well, I was planning for someone to bash him on the head or somewhere like that, and he dents and starts spewing fluids or something.

okay sounds good I was just clarifying cause I was confused

I need help

With my story, just to clarify. I'm already seeing a therapist

Oh good. I can help with a story.

Alright! So
I have a doctor and a weird redneck dude from the 1920's arguing about where to take a little girl after she was pushed off the top of carriage by her parents drunk friends. I don't know how to write that discussion

It leads to her staying at the weird redneck dude's place

Like what about the discussion are you having a hard time with? Starting it? Getting to the conclusion?