forum Hey, what stories you working on!!!
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You should include magic and make the weapons really powerful, but like ancient

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Unless you don't want to be cliche and make the technology really advanced aided with magic.

@Lavy-the-Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy

I'm not sure what to do. There'll probably be some powerful weapons that were used by well known figures, but I'm not sure since I don't that to turn OPish. (And now that I think about it, they do have magic cus how else they gonna open a portal, duh)

Tuna Yuna Birb

So the premise of the story is that three gods who created the universe Avalor, Mortis god of death, Magnolia, god of luck and time, and Imperium, god of life and justice. Ten years after creating the universe they realize they need somebody to bring peace between the world. They create Missletainn, the god of peace and prosperity. A few hundred years later, war inevitably breaks out once more. Missletainn loses her spouse Cordelia and ends up being killed while mourning. This results in Mortis resurrecting Missletainn, however, Mortis' magic corrupts Missletainn giving her a dominant split personality, the god of torture and destruction. The main plot takes place a few billion years after this.

Tuna Yuna Birb

This is mainly just something we talk about, however, I do have one WIP about the divine** of Missletainn
Divine means basically the assistant of that god.

Tuna Yuna Birb

Prologue
Unknown date

Valerie was stumbling along, trying to define the blurry objects in front of her, it was honestly quite difficult for her. She walked straight into a woman with cold blue eyes, the pupils so small it was hard to tell if they were even there at all.. The woman cocked her head to the side, intrigued by the girl. Nobody else was around the woman, even through the bustling streets, people seemed to part for her to pass.

“Interesting, you are still alive,” The woman commented, “The name’s Missletainn, God of torture and destruction. Who might you be, little girl.” Missletainn inquired, with a puzzled expression on her face. Missletainn was wearing a dress with sleeves that flared out at the elbow, the bell skirt-esque bottom had lace underneath and a strung corset like thing in the front of the top of her dress. She had fingerless brown leather gloves on her hands. (I don’t remember the colors, so you can imagine whatever colors you’d like, reader) her hair was in a bun that took up some of the mass of hair on her head. The rest hung down, the tips of her hair had a blood red color, fading into auburn brown. Her bangs covered some of her face. Her middle piece of bangs, a brilliant white.

“T-the name is V-valerie Seraphina Dawn, may I help you my God?” Valerie stuttered, her eyes quivered, unable to make eye contact. She had bumped into a God, and not any God either, the God of torture and destruction, one of the four Ruler Gods, and supposedly the most ruthless at that. Val feared for her life, if she made a single mistake she would most likely die.

“I’d like to offer you a job, Valerie. Ugh, that name is too l0onnnnng, I’ll just call you Val. I’d like to make you my divine. To put it bluntly, you aren’t dead even though you touched me. Which means you are either really strong, or you have enormous potential.” Missletainn stated blandly, she looked down at the girl. Her piercing gaze made Valerie flinch.

“I’d love to become your divine, however, I believe I would be a hindrance to you. My vision is terrible, my lady.” Val looked down at her feet. Missletainn rolled her eyes and particles started to connect together. Each individual atom bonding with another. A few moments later a pair of red glasses had formed, Missletainn handed the glasses to Valerie. Valerie put the glasses on her face and everything became crystal clear. The vibrance of the world amazed her. She was able to see her new master’s face with clarity and realized how truly stunning the God appeared. Her face almost perfectly symmetrical, her cheeks natural rosiness adding contrast to her fair skin. “Th-thank you,” Val stuttered.

“Now, I believe we should get you some new cloooothes, those rags look utterly awwfuulll and are probably terrible in combat. Besiiiidess, a pretty girrrlll should always look her best.” Missletainn drawled now acting in a much lazier fashion, as if everything was absurdly boring. Missletainn hovered above the ground, the air around her shifting as if it too were afraid of the God. “Shall we go theerrrre?” Missletainn asked, pointing at a shop filled with armor and weapons that had price tags with a few too many zeroes on the end. Val’s eyes widened in shock.

“Are you sure my lady?” Val’s jaw dropped in disbelief, Missletainn’s eyes narrowed in frustration. She nodded before grabbing onto Val’s arm and dragging her inside before Val could object. Val was amazed by the wide variety of items the shop sold. They ranged from simple healing items to strength enhancing gauntlets and earrings. Val spotted a pair of magically enhanced sandals. The appearance was for fashion but the shoes really were made for training. Each sandal had 10 kilograms of weight added onto it. (For the American reader, that translates to a little over 22 pounds) Val lifted the shoes with a little difficulty and dragged them over to Missletainn. “Uhmm, my lady, I think I’d like to get these for training purposes. They would be a good workout and help increase my strength.” Val looked down awkwardly.

“Two things, one, call me by my name, okaaay? You aren’t my slave. Two, did you even try them on?” Missletainn asked with a cynical expression. She glanced over at Val who dropped the shoes on the floor, making a loud thud. She slipped them on and was surprised by how comfortable they felt. She tried walking around, which was no minor task. Val was able to move around without too much trouble. However, it was definitely difficult to take the first few steps before getting used to it. Val tripped on her own feet and fell face first into the shop floor.

“Are you okay young miss?” The manager of the store approached Val with a look of slight concern. The manager felt a strong sense of unease churning in her stomach. She then realized that the girl wasn't alone. She was accompanied by a rather infamous God. The manager got on one knee. “Hello there, may I be of assistance?” She bowed her head, not in respect, but in fear.

“I would like to purchase this pair of shoooeeess, also, I’d like to go to the back room. I need to find armor for this girl.” Missletainn pursed her lips in a frown. She pointed at Val who was removing the shoes from her feet and wiping dust off of her clothes. Val stood up and stared at the ground awkwardly. She shuffled her feet around twisting them from side to side. The lady nodded and proceeded to show the way to the ‘back’ of the shop. It was actually behind the counter in the front. The manager stomped on the floor under the desk and a door sprung open from the floor. “Thhhaanks,” Missletainn drawled before descending down the staircase. Val followed, watching silently as Missletainn descended.

The two reached the bottom of the staircase, and Val’s eyes sparkled in awe. The wide variety of weaponry and armor was stupefying. Val’s eyes instantly locked onto a set of armor with two mythril gauntlets, matching shin guards and chestplate. She approached the set and looked at the price tag. ‘Holy heck! 3,000,000,000 brunes?!’ Val suddenly felt uneasy, but decided she needed to do it anyways.

“Ummm…My l-I mean, Missletainn, I found something I like, but it’s atrociously expensive.” Missletainn examined the armor for a moment. She grabbed the armor and disregarded the price completely. Missletainn floated over to the weapons section and Val followed suit.

“Piiick one that you liiiiike and memorize it completely.” Missletainn stated, gesturing towards the weapons. Val looked at the different kinds of weaponry and noticed the flails. She found a stray flail with a dull pink handle and a black ball of …. this is where I stopped

@MarDeColores this is not it kids

So. Story thing. Basically, it's a story about these monsters made of shadows. And there's magic and other worlds and things like that. Sarcasm and crazy people galore. And I'm working on a second book. Which is quite difficult, but I'll get through with it. Eventually.