Hey, what stories you working on!!!

You know, there's a video game called Splatoon. I remember it used this weird, almost Japanese or English-looking language, but it was literally untranslatable. Maybe something like that?

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May 23, 2018

My story is a complicated mess.
My story is called Untold Secrets Of The Meadow (Or Usotm for short) Its a trilogy in progress. Book one is Death in the (moonlit) Shadows, two, Betrayal in the Light, three, Shattered at dawn (or dusk, i haven't chosen one yet.)
The story is extremely complex.

Book one is currently a mess but to explain what I can:
Ember, your first protag is shy but likes archery. She finds a box in a meadow and goes home with it. The box has a silver necklace in it, and Ember somehow manages to make it glow. When i glows, a kitten pops out of it. The kitten has color changing eyes and says his name is Spitak Vagr. Vagr says Ember was chosen to wield a power to fight an oncoming evil. Blah blah blah magic stuff.
The next day at school she tripped on a boy's foot, got neglected and ignored by her supposed "Bff" and sat against the wall at lunch.
Incoming protage 2!
Hunter, the boy that tripped Ember by accident, sees her being neglected and invites her to his empty table with his best friend, James.
Blah blah blah, they become friends. Hunter finds the meadow, gets a magic bracelet, Hunter almost gets shot by Ember. In the background, there have been some attacks by the minor antag but let's ignore that for now~.
James doesn't like that Hunter is spending more and more time with Ember. He starts losing his spark and shuts down. Hunter notices this right before it's too late.
James confronts Hunter in a mess of cut wrists and fury. James has suffered from depression his whole life and was just getting better. When Hunter started neglecting him, he lost it. His family had died when he was young and he lived with his older sister, Lilac. Hunter is shocked at his sudden turn of attitude. (He knew his family died)
About this time Audra and Tom join the gang but they're not really important rn.
One night during an attack with the minor antag, a new villain stepped foot on to the battlefield, with a rage against Ember's alter ego. (I'm still working on it.) At this time, Smartypants Hunter had figured out that Ember was the other Amulet owner. James was violent and would disappear alot.
Blah blah blah, they fight. The minor antag, whom I'll call Raven for now, confronts the protags, saying she feeling like she's being used. She teams up with the other two and promised for her loyalty she gives up her amulet after the battle.
The major antag, whom I will call Shadow, rips off Hunter's amulet, which is his bracelet.
I dont want to go to in detail becuz my goodness, this is alot and its only book 1.
Shadow stops, Hunter gets up Raven really doesn't care, Ember's alter ego is like "wow it was him, no wonder i couldn't figure it out."
Shadow has a "coming to God" and falls down (He ded boi) in a sobbing mess. Hunter is extremely confused as he should be until Shadow reveals who he is.
Dun dun dun, guess who it is!
It's James.
Turns out Ember's AE accidentally shot his older sister, Lilac resulting in her death. He swore revenge but once he realized who he was hurting he stopped, DUE TO THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP!!!!!!!!
Raven left at this point, Ember became Ember and they lived happily ever after.
Not.
Few days later at schoolo Audra throws a ring at a gawking Hunter. "Told you i'd keep my word." She said and walks off. Hember is confusion and Hunter gives it back to her.
End.
I'll leave it at this unless you want to hear the rest of this shitty story. I'm so sorry it was so long!! T-T I swear Book 2 is so much intresting.

@Joneathan

May 24, 2018

M story is written like an autobiography following this man, Theodore Lewis Copelan. The thing that makes this interesting is how Theo is. He's a narcissistic psychopath who has a soft spot for small children and his family. He's killed over 7 people that he can name and 13 that he can't he doesn't feel guilt for any of these killing and no one knows he's killed so many people. He even once faked his own death to get attention an not get caught. He blames things on others but is most of the time a really sweet guy. Not only do we see into him but we also get a look on him but we also get a glance at his siblings and a look at the abusive household he was born into before he was there. I know it doesn't sound that interesting but I swear it is.

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May 24, 2018

More interesting than mine, that's for sure.

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May 24, 2018

My story is about a girl who is an extreme foodie/fangirl/binge-watching addict who dies from food (slipping on BBQ and drowns from her cereal). She is then reincarnated into this fantasy world of seemingly hungry giants in overalls that are always trying to kill her. The thing is, she learned from a mirror that she is a chicken…a male chicken at that.
So she's always trying to survive. She/he now starts living in the "haunted forest of supreme death" until the giants stop looking to make chicken nuggets. She/he starts to grow bigger at an alarming rate until she/he realizes that the reason the farmer giants aren't after her/he because she/he's a chicken, it because she is a (baby) dragon, the last dragon they have seen in a long time. And there is a pretty little bounty for capturing mythical beasts. Finally, after being hunted for so long, she/he understanding her/his powers, and it was time for her/him to evolve from the livestock to the farmer.
I call it 'Old McDonalds Reincarnation'.
I have other stories though.

shurikenwolfbadass_13

May 24, 2018

@ConnieTheMediatorOfSilencingSycore Conni
I have something like that.

It's about a character named Baron Conrad, who's on a tourist trip with his father in Tibet before his dad serves another tour with the military. During a tremor, their group falls down a pit, and our hero is stabbed by a blade in the densely packed snow. He digs it out, to reveal that there's a ribbon attached to it, and a book attached to that ribbon. The blade, book and bookmark ribbon, are completely unscathed, despite being in this weather for an indefinite amount of time. He goes through it to see that it's written in a different language, and even the guide confirms that it isn't anything local. Baron keeps it, and at nightfall, he undergoes the transformation into a being, later dubbed an Artificial Superhuman. He discovers his powers, amazed and terrified, thinking that he must've caught something of a fever that was making him go crazy, and lies in bed for fear of hurting anyone, later deciding to keep other's uninvolved in what he seems his own personal scenario. They have to get out of the pit, before it is encased in snow, and Baron not only adjusts incredibly well, but finds out that he can use his powers to come and go as he pleases, and uses them to free his group.

Later, back in America, he notices a man following him, and confronts him. The man explains that he was the creator of that artifact, The only Blade and the Pamphlet that resulted in Baron's change, yada yada yada worldbuilding/magic-science system, all that, and asks for it back. Baron, who isn't dumbass, asks why he needs it, thinking that something that can turn an ordinary man into a badas, vastly superhuman being is better off safe with him, until the magician shows him that the book has an index where the Blade writes the next user's blood and changes them. Baron asks why he didn't use it when he first made it, and the magician tells him that if he'd have done thst, it would have canceled the immortality that he'd gotten from the Elixir of Life. He asks why he would do thst, and possibly burden the world with an army of abhuman beings, and the wizard says that that wouldn't happen since only a single person who can fit the qualifications can be transformed, so that only one Main Artificial Superhuman can exist (this actually isn't the case, as a few things like blood transplants can give humans powers temporarily, but they're fodder compared to an actual Superhuman) and all that. Lastly he asks why. The magician tells him that the Changed One must ward off the Harbingers of Apocalypse, who come and must be defeated roughly every Millennia, and after going against natural disasters, tragedies, street crime, terrorism, a few Malevolent Gods (and befriending a benevolent one), and the Seven Deadly Sins themselves, the time arrives. I mostly covered the origin, but there's much more. He arrives at the first day of his last year of Highschool, and meets a young last who he befriends. There are plot twists there too!
It's awesome. But long.