forum Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!
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The Fae?
Didn't we establish that there were going to be evil twins in the Northern Fae?

@CopperQueen

Yeah but I thought the association was more to the west corner of the middle? Pretty far from the northen fae's (even if they are also anti-witch)

@RedTheLoveless

What if it's a large group of humans oppressing the witches? Perhaps a cult that beleives the only true way to practice magic is if one is "blessed" to have powers?

@CopperQueen

I feel like the way it's set up implies the human from the human world is the only human currently in their world, so maybe we should just have it be "Everyone exept the witches and a few peaceful raaces"

@Moxie group

Maybe the fae don’t like the witches? Like idk thinks there unnatural or something?

Also did Kerrigan know the other two witches before they all came together? Cause if not, maybe Terimane met Kerrigan along her way and brought the three of them together?

@CopperQueen

Also did Kerrigan know the other two witches before they all came together? Cause if not, maybe Terimane met Kerrigan along her way and brought the three of them together?

He didn't, wich gives me an

IDEA
What if Kerrigan is actually really lonely and Is Terimane comes along but she sticks to her old friend more than him once they all connect so all they talk about is memories and personal things and he feels so left out

@RedTheLoveless

And since by that time the group should have run into the human so both Kerrigan and the human are just kinda sitting alone and pouting in seprate corners

@CopperQueen

Yes, but consider:

What if there was originally a fourth sibling who was way nicer and hung out with Lunos more, but they died in some kind of accident.
Now, I really want there to be a sense of danger even for the human, so what if there is a ritual/spell that sucks the power out of someone and the twins want to do it to a colorhair (AKA what they think the human is) but the process kills the subject.
The power can be used to do thigns like revive the dead, so it gives the twins hope.
They ask their lil sibling to get the human for them but Lunos (The lil sib) grows attatched and the twins confront him and now he has to choose between the two people he cares for the most for.

@RedTheLoveless

As a reader, that would sincerely tug at my heartstrings and I would want to take Lunos and hug him forever.

As a writer, YES TORTURE THAT POOR BEAN WITH SO MUCH ANGST

@CopperQueen

As a reader, that would sincerely tug at my heartstrings and I would want to take Lunos and hug him forever.
As a writer, YES TORTURE THAT POOR BEAN WITH SO MUCH ANGST

This is torture. I will stare at my screen just like "Lunos you better materialize right now so I can hug you