@Fraust
Ashpaw's heart started pounding. Who's there? He glanced upwards at the speaker, blinking in the bright sun. He tried to stand again, but was only with white hot pain in his hind leg, causing him to collapse.
Ashpaw's heart started pounding. Who's there? He glanced upwards at the speaker, blinking in the bright sun. He tried to stand again, but was only with white hot pain in his hind leg, causing him to collapse.
“Hurt leg?” The stranger sighed, sniffing it, “Probably twisted, no worry’s, I know Winter will take good care of you.”
(Winter is a rogue female who lived with a large gray tabby named Blizzard, Silverbrooks brother )
"W-Winter? Who's that? Where…. where am I?" Ashpaw looked around, confused. (I have decided that Lynxfur has sneakily taken Ashpaw out of camp before anyone noticed. Or that the cliff was somewhere else idk)
(Cliff is somewhere else because this is Riverclan! There are no cliffs!)
“Your home.” The strange brown tabby said quickly, “Your new home.”
(O yeah)
"Home? Are we in Riverclan? It doesn't look like Riverclan…" He tried again to stand, this time not putting any weight on his injured leg. "What's that smell? Is it… Thunderpaw?" (He smells his dead brother)
"I don't know who you talking about," The cat said quickly, turning away from him and allowing another, fluffy white cat, come in. "Winter will take good care of you."
(Should Leopardpaw be with them?)
(I don't think she's here, at least not yet)
"My brother, Thunderpaw. Is he okay?"Ashpaw looked warily at the new arrival. He had no idea how trustworthy these cats were, who they were, or where they were from.
The brown tom stepped back and let the white she-cat examine Ashpaws leg, "Your brother? The long haired calico? Huu? He's dead."
"W-What? How?! What happened to him?" No… this can't be happening! He can't be dead!
"He was killed, murdered by his own blood…" He said simply, "Now, Ashpaw, I wont tell you my name, and don't worry about asking. Winter will take care of you until the time is right."
"His own blood?" What could that mean? No… it couldn't be… "Did… d-did Leopardpaw kill him?"
"I'm not tattletale," He muttered, "So don't ask."
"This is my brother we're talking about! And my sister! It's incredibly important information!"
"And do you think I care?!" He spat, turning to him sharply.
Ashpaw's eyes stung with tears, and he looked away. He flinched when the she cat touched his leg, but otherwise didn't say anything.
"Ill check up on you at dawn, so go to sleep.. And Winter," He said before padding out the hollow, "Get him some food."
(Time skip?)
(Sure)
Ashpaw woke up in the same place as he had the previous day. He still couldn't move, or do much of anything, and the scent of his brother was still strong. He blinked tears away from his eyes, sort of in shock from Thunderpaw's death.
(Lets say there in the twoleg place)
The leave rustled out side and in came the long-haired tom, with the light of dawn, Ashpaw could make out his muscular fetchers and the deep brown striped on his thick brown pelt.
Ashpaw lay his head back down, pretending to be asleep. He still didn't think he really trusted this tom. His leg seemed to have been bound with something that he couldn't see. Probably reeds and vines, like what's traditional.
"I know your awake." The tom said, sitting right next to Ashpaws head.
"Fine. Do you need something? Are you going to tell me who you are or where I am now?"
"No." He said quickly, getting up again, "Cant you smell where we are? The monsters? the dogs? Have ant ideas?"
(I think this is what Lynxfur looked like, http://www.catster.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/06/600px-chewbacca.jpg !)
"I mean, I haven't gone far out of camp before. But based on your description, I'd say somewhere in the vicinity of twolegs."
"We're at the edge of the twoleg place, in Blizzards camp."
( BLizzard -> http://www.nfhs.ca/gallery/_1prince3.jpg )
"Who's Blizzard? Why did you take me here?"
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