forum Will critique all characters and draw one (1) of each username - DISCONTINUED

Started March 16, 2018 by Blue Duck

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Can you guys do my character? I feel like she needs more work.

Sorry I forgot to add my email for the picture.
[email protected]
Thank you so much!

Blueduck-
Thank you so much for all of your help, I will be making some changes to him based on y'alls questions and suggestions. There is one thing I wanted to clear up for Tallinn.
Lukas has kids when he is an adult, not now:)

Blue Duck-
Okay, I'm going to respond to each person's critique individually, if thats good.
Brooklynn- Thank you for the compliments, first off, and REALLY thanks for the criticism! I went back and flushed him out completely, taking into account everything you said! Thanks so much for the comment at the end! I take aspects of my personality and others to make my characters as relatable as possible!
Delta- yeah his motivations aren't finished. I will go back and add to that. I have extended everything you commented on and tried to make him seem less dependent on Herne. So yeah. But thanks! All the feedback has been so helpful and the compliments are nice!
Tallinn- I was a bit disappointed in myself to be honest. I poured my heart and soul into Herne and didn't leave much for Asmodeus. So I went back and hopefully corrected that. So yay! And yes, Vamps do come about the same way as VPHs.

Before I post my characters, I gotta ask- can you guys draw animals? Like dogs and such?

@NobleWolf
We can sure try our best!
We can't promise a picasso level drawing, but it won't be terrible either!

-The Blue Duck Team

@NobleWolf
No promises, I'm not the best at drawing animals, but I shall do what I can!
~Tallinn (Artist?)

i was hoping i could get some tips how to make Ramule seem like a well rounded character. He is my favorite OC (used for rping, so his story will be ever changing, thats why its mostly background info) and i dont know how to depict him as fully as i want. i also really want to make sure hes not a mary sue lol. either way, i would really appreciate any feedback you've got!

also my email is [email protected]
Thanks!

I'm really interested in this, I just can't decide which character to choose. I have 9 to pick from(so far, lol) and only a couple and kinda-developed. I'll contact y'all once I decide!

I want her to seem strong but still struggle with day to day activities. Could you draw her as im struggling picturing her. Any feedback will be appreciated.

@Paris
You need to make her public before we are able to critique her! Thanks for submitting!
-The Blue Duck Team

Hello @blue Duck.
So, on May 22 you guys critiqued my character Lucas and I stated that I had email troubles so you guys couldn't send the picture to me. So, you said that you would put it on your website. So, I do not want to come off as rude but, do you think that he will be done soon.
I am sorry if I come off as rude.
Thank you and have a nice day.

Dear @TheMusicalVampire and others with the same concerns,
Hello, it's Tallinn, the resident (?) artist, at the moment, we have four upcoming finals, which as you all should understand, is a lot. Our school does not have an exam break either, which means that all studying has to be done after school. In addition, I am currently practicing two instruments, which means that that takes an extra hour of my day. The minute our school ends, I should be able to mass produce drawings, but until then I sincerely apologize! If you have any additional questions or concerns, please email me at [email protected], with the subject line of Tallinn.

Thanks so much for understanding
~Tallinn

Hi everybody!
Just wanted to remind you all that we have said that if you want a critique and drawing we would ask that you critique our characters, and I believe that most of you have not done that. We as Delta and Tallinn have decided that we won't give you a drawing until you have critiqued our characters.
Thank you
-D, and Tallinn
P.S Brook doesn't support this because she has difficulty with putting people in conflicting situations. However since Tallinn is the artist they get final say and I (D) will support her.

@blue Duck,
I wish you luck on your many finals and I can understand how instruments can take up time, (Speaking as an pianist and cellist.) So I completly understand your time issues. Thank you for acknowledging my concerns also.
Once again, thank you and good luck!

You want us to do all of them?

I would love if you could critique and draw my character Jack. I feel like he is a little cheesy or cliche, so any advice or thoughts is welcomed! Jack stonewell
and if it's easier to email me, my email is [email protected]

@NobleWolf
Yes if you could critique all of the characters that would be preferable!
Thanks of taking time to look at them!
-The Blue Duck Team

how do we do the critiques?

@kirailove
Here the link to a forum where you can critique them. They also have the links to our characters

-The Blue Duck Team

sweet, thank you!

I critiqued the characters! I really like them, especially Lilith.

@kirailove
Thank you much :3 we'll take a look at your character as soon as possible
-Writer of Lilith (D)

Hey guys!
Just wanted to let you know that during the month of July, while reviews will be published, the ones that haven't been done by Delta won't be able to be published. That's the start of summer vacation, so we're all going to be travelling throughout the summer, not always with access to the internet.
However, since we don't have school to deal with the drawings will also be released! Now our artist will have the time to complete the drawings so that's a plus!
Thanks for understanding!
-The Blue Duck Team

Hey. . . I think what you're doing is amazing!
Would you mind drawing Songbird and/or Noel?
They're public characters on my account.

Do you think that perhaps you could draw and critique my characters Ashley and Tony?
Ashley: Ashley Fauntelroy
Tony: Tony Di Litterzi
Ashley wears red sweaters and black leggings, Tony wears plain white t-shirts and jeans
My email is [email protected]