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Yarrow Frost And here, friend, is Yarrow Frost, Anxiety personified.

ooh I'm so excited!

Overview - 93/100
I've always liked the sound of "frost"
I love the name meaning!

Looks - 94/100
the descriptions are so creative!
oh they're so prettyy
I feel you, Yarrow, I feel you
"For the purposes of the story", interesting…

Nature - 92/100
wait wait where did the zombies come from
ok I want to give them a hug
they'd definitely be my friend we have so much in common
"MORGUE WORK" THEY'VE GOT MY HEART
I think I might be quite somewhat a bit maybe a little some probably mesmerized with them

Social - 90/100
why every character who likes cats has a cat allergy why
my heart has been wholesomed
I wonder who, Yarrow or Nate, dies first

I'll be waiting for their backstory! they've really piqued my interest, and they will surely become my favorite character as the story goes on! they somewhat remind me of myself in my younger days, so I can relate to them too much. they're a well-thought character, and I can't wait to read about them more. good luck with writing!
average - 92/100

Yarrow is:
95% likely to be my friend
72% likely to by my lover
50% likely to be my party member
36% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

Anathema Besya rate my bastard boy?

bastard boy? tell me everything

Overview - 87/100
I… I am confused… what… microwave?
woah he's old

Looks - 90/100
a human that old is exceptionally rare
smol
a fake eye, that's neat

Nature - 69/100
I'd like to see more about his personality!
he definitely has more talents!
I advise you to work on this section more! have a conversation with him and try to ask him as many questions as there are needed for him to be more developed. maybe add his body language and gestures in mannerisms? a reason for his prejudices? and definitely more information about his personality!

Social - 85/100
why his job is unspecified?
I'd like to see a reason behind his favorite things!
better give the sweater back to Wilson you thief

History - °_°/100
o h we're jumping right into it
she thought WHAT could be a baller move?

w a i t

w h a t

WAIT ALL THIS STUFF IS BEFORE THE BEGINNING OF THE STORY???
that was beautiful, thank you very much, never again

Nath has a big potential! he's creatively written, he sounds unique, and his existence is shaping up well! even though, he could use some work in his "Nature" section and clearer descriptions (especially in his backstory - but if you can find everything you need now, you don't need to change anything. you're writing these pages for yourself, not others). I'm sure that you'll come up with new ideas about him!
average - 80/100

Nath is:
43% likely to be my friend
8% likely to by my lover
68% likely to be my party member
50% likely to be my enemy

@Tidermelon group

Nath is:
43% likely to be my friend
8% likely to by my lover
68% likely to be my party member
50% likely to be my enemy

oohoohoo this time we have an enemy chance greater than a friend chance, oh my

@tomat brightness_7

I wonder how you do with original species… Here's my most developed character, Oschao! Deal with him as you wish. Oschao

I also wonder how I do with original species

Overview - 90/100
how do you pronounce Oschao?
ooh, his show nickname is neat
how much is a Polygonal year

Looks - 89/100
oh smol
"Trapezon Poyanic". could you give some details about this race?
woah he surely is unique, I've never seen a character like that before, and even more before. he's the first one
I like his mask. I want it

Nature - 97/100
such good descriptions! they're clear and they sound pleasantly to my inner ears
Poyanics, Bandolias, Amarus… I want to know more about them
I love his talents!
wait so how old is he really
I didn't really expect his personality to turn out like this!

Social/family - 90/100
think about writing a reason behind his favorite things!
"Araneae Pukanius" I NEED EXPLANATIONS
apart from these two, this section is good!

History - 98/100
ooh, a mysterious guy. interesting.
a game? more interesting!
wow those quotes really are something. even though they don't tell the whole story, they definitely say enough to make me want to know e v e r y t h i n g
g i v e m e m o r e

wow, Oschao really surprised me! I thought that he'll be really sketchy with his mask and appearance, but he turned out to be a person that I'd like to meet! I'm already in love with your universe even though it's still a big mystery, and I hope to see more of your characters in the future! some advice I have is: try to explain some of the names and terms. but of course - zero spoilers!
average - 93/100

Oschao is:
93% likely to be my friend
78% likely to by my lover
80% likely to be my party member
45% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

Okay I finished Bane up!!! Bane Steel

finally, Bane. the mains are now complete. I hope

Overview - 91/100
Steel Savior, that's so metal (pun intended)
don't imagine Bane in a bee costume don't imagine Bane in a bee costume… too late…

Name - 99/100
Vendi…
it's funny how children can give a surname to a random person that saved their life. "oh, thank you for rescuing me! from now on your name is Steve Childrensaver."

Looks - 98/100
a tol and a smol, I want to see them standing next to Rune
that may not be relevant to my rating but the "Eyes" field doesn't have a period at the end of the sentence

Personality - 100/100
omg I'm going to cry let me hug him
okay I don't want to see him die anymore but he still sounds so killable but don't listen to me don't kill him just don't
because if he dies then Rune will snap and that could be a BIG event and

Nature - 97/100
woah those are some big mannerisms
he reminds me of my other character
oh I want to hug him, I'll say that again
I'm drowning in love

Mannerisms - 100/100
you make him sound so real, like you're describing a real person, someone you've met somewhen, and know for a long time. how do you know everyone so well? your characters' desires, all their nuances and gestures, every little detail. I wish I had the time to think about my children this way

Mannerisms 2 - 100/100
oh no a snorer
sits somewhat normally, good to know
they haVE A HAMMER

Social - 98/100
oh, like dolphins?
aww you make my heart go "aww"
I'm more of a mountain person than a beach person but I'd love to take a stroll with him in the evening

Voice - 90/100
and now I want to hug his voice too. I try to imagine it and it's very gummy bear-like
"Whole face just lights up and" - and? AND??

History - 100/100
💜❤️Raysa❤️💜
yes yes yes perfect

Abilities/powers - 97/100
ok another question dump
if there was a situation where he would normally get a compound fracture, how would his skin react? would it make a mount or something like that? how much can his skin stretch?
does his skin desquamate?
wait so he isn't VACCINATED
so I understand that he's also immune to burns and frostbite
what would happen if someone would just go ham and try to cut him with a chainsaw, would the blades just glance off his body or tickle him

Inventory - 100/100

oh

y e s

THAT MAY BE OFF TOPIC BUT I LOOKED UP "TRAIL MIX" AND NOW I KNOW WHAT IT IS, THIS NAME IS NON-LOGICAL IN MY LANGUAGE AS WELL AND THAT MAKES ME ANGRY
ok now I want to have this hammer too, I'll add it to my list of what my carrier parrots will steal from you

Family - 99/100
power of love!
I want their parents to be my second parents
yeah that's the life of some older siblings, they try to protect the smols from the world but suddenly they are 34 and have children and they don't believe how fast the time has passed, says tomat, the youngest child in the family

Bane still sounds the most killable of all 5, but now I'll protect him with my own body if it's necessary. I've only known Bane for a day and a half, but if anything happened to him I would kill everyone in your universe and then myself. to be honest, I don't really need to give you any advices here at the end of my rating because all your characters are so well-developed that I'm starting to get jealous! oh, and I'd like to say a big thank you for creating your characters - I adore them as much as mine!
average - 98/100

Bane is:
90% likely to be my friend
68% likely to by my lover
99% likely to be my party member
30% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

Could you take a look at Rowan, please? Not entirely completed because I don't have a premium subscription, but its good enough for government work.

This dude's 10th birthday is tomorrow (May 21st!)

oh, happy birthday! I'm quite late, but I hope he doesn't mind! and on a side note, you don't need a premium subscription to create beautiful and fully fleshed out characters!

Overview - 90/100
Rowan is such a pleasantly sounding name
"Book 1", interesting. how old is he in the next books?

Looks - 85/100
this section seems pretty spare. try spicing it up with more descriptions! his eye shape? hair length or texture? facial details? you could describe him with more detail to help visualize him better!

Nature - 70/100
oh, definitely write more mannerisms! how does he behave when he's happy or sad? facial expressions, hand gestures, posture - it's all worth knowing!
is there a reason behind his motivation? how does he want to "make himself happy"?
I'll give you a tip. try writing more flaws by pushing his virtues too far. I always give this example - if your character is brave, make them reckless. his flaws should result from his virtues, so as his weaknesses from his strengths. find some free time in your week and think about his personality more, to make him more relatable and real.
he surely has more talents!
INTJ YAY OUR COMMUNITY IS GROWING

Social - 87/100
WHY WOULD YOU GIVE HIM A KNIFE HE'S A CHILD
I think that his favorite things need a reason behind them! just like you wrote about him liking space in "Favorite color" and decribed the songs in "Favorite song", try elaborating his other favorites as well!

Voice - 98/100
I don't see singing voices often, that's neat that you've described it!
I love his laugh!
some more questions: how exactly is his voice deep? does he speak slowly or quickly?

History - 60/100
there's still so many things to write about his backstory! what was his childhood like? his relationships with his whole family? any events that started his love for space or shaped his personality? it's always good to define a character's backstory so as to understand them better and maybe come up with some new ideas!

Abilities/Magic - 91/100
those sound like some pretty op powers. could you describe their strengths and weaknesses? it would be nice to show that they are balanced, because now they sound too strong.

I advise you to work on him more! he's a creative character with interesting abilities. I can see which direction he's going to, but he needs some polishing, if I can call it like that. keep in mind what I said earlier. I hope that I cleared some stuff up and gave you ideas to help you develop him more!
average - 83/100

Rowan is:
86% likely to be my friend
43% likely to by my lover
99% likely to be my party member
50% likely to be my enemy

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Could you take a look at Rowan, please? Not entirely completed because I don't have a premium subscription, but its good enough for government work.

This dude's 10th birthday is tomorrow (May 21st!)

oh, happy birthday! I'm quite late, but I hope he doesn't mind! and on a side note, you don't need a premium subscription to create beautiful and fully fleshed out characters!

Overview - 90/100
Rowan is such a pleasantly sounding name
"Book 1", interesting. how old is he in the next books?

Looks - 85/100
this section seems pretty spare. try spicing it up with more descriptions! his eye shape? hair length or texture? facial details? you could describe him with more detail to help visualize him better!

Nature - 70/100
oh, definitely write more mannerisms! how does he behave when he's happy or sad? facial expressions, hand gestures, posture - it's all worth knowing!
is there a reason behind his motivation? how does he want to "make himself happy"?
I'll give you a tip. try writing more flaws by pushing his virtues too far. I always give this example - if your character is brave, make them reckless. his flaws should result from his virtues, so as his weaknesses from his strengths. find some free time in your week and think about his personality more, to make him more relatable and real.
he surely has more talents!
INTJ YAY OUR COMMUNITY IS GROWING

Social - 87/100
WHY WOULD YOU GIVE HIM A KNIFE HE'S A CHILD
I think that his favorite things need a reason behind them! just like you wrote about him liking space in "Favorite color" and decribed the songs in "Favorite song", try elaborating his other favorites as well!

Voice - 98/100
I don't see singing voices often, that's neat that you've described it!
I love his laugh!
some more questions: how exactly is his voice deep? does he speak slowly or quickly?

History - 60/100
there's still so many things to write about his backstory! what was his childhood like? his relationships with his whole family? any events that started his love for space or shaped his personality? it's always good to define a character's backstory so as to understand them better and maybe come up with some new ideas!

Abilities/Magic - 91/100
those sound like some pretty op powers. could you describe their strengths and weaknesses? it would be nice to show that they are balanced, because now they sound too strong.

I advise you to work on him more! he's a creative character with interesting abilities. I can see which direction he's going to, but he needs some polishing, if I can call it like that. keep in mind what I said earlier. I hope that I cleared some stuff up and gave you ideas to help you develop him more!
average - 83/100

Rowan is:
86% likely to be my friend
43% likely to by my lover
99% likely to be my party member
50% likely to be my enemy

Thanks for checking him out! He's my first character, so there's definitely work to be done!

@tomat brightness_7

Could you do my character Jazzy, here's the link; Jocelyn Azalo Safran

sure! let's get into it :3

Overview - 91/100
I love her last name!
the year is 4009, that's the furthest I've ever been

Looks - 90/100
woah she must look beautiful
I'd make this section more descriptive. I know that some features can't be elaborated more, but try to make more comparisons, or write her opinions. just to make this section smoother in reading.

Characteristics - 40/100
there's so little information here! write some examples of her traits. and if you're struggling to define her personality, try filling some questionnaries or talking "face to face" - find some free time in your day to really get to know her. you can also put her in some situations and then take notes of her actions. just know that you need to work here a lot! you could also read others' characters' "Nature" sections to model yourself after them.

Social - 72/100
oh she's a detective! nice!
this section could also use some more description. try writing a reason behind her favorite things!

Voice - 95/100
everything is nice here! but maybe you could describe her laugh as well?

History -98/100
from kindergarten to high school in a blink of an eye. we omitted so many beautiful years
woah, I've never seen a character's backstory done like that! it really helps to put everything in time and see a clear picture! even though the names are a bit confusing, I liked the way her history was written

she's piqued my interest, that's for sure! she obviously needs more work on her personality, because after all, she's your protagonist, so she should be the most developed character of them all! I'm certain that you will make her a good and balanced character. you've got her history defined - that's a big step toward creating her personality. now you can write about how the events shaped her and her worldview. and after that you'll have no problem with her likes, dislikes, strengths and weaknesses!
average - 81/100

Jazzy is:
50% likely to be my friend
25% likely to by my lover
90% likely to be my party member
87% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

wanna take a look at peter?

ah, I've finally arrived! I hope you didn't get impatient. it's nice to see Peter again!

Overview - 93/100
Wynters is such a pretty last name
"Hero turned Villain turned back Hero" what a roller coaster
I really like the way you described his names!

Looks - 95/100
ah, cute <3
I don't like that Madeline forces him to wear them but oh my these contacts must look neat
I appreciate that you stated that the metahuman gene is recessive. maybe it doesn't make that much impact on the story but that's a big part of the worldbuilding that makes the world balanced!

Nature - 89/100
I'm happy that he understood that people deserve to be people
oh I need to know more about his backstory
"He gets really defensive when the truth of his statements gets called into question" why are you suddenly describing me
hmm, I'd like to see his motivations elaborated. maybe combine them with the descriptions of his goals? what exactly is his "personal gain"? what part of Madeline's existence motivates Venom to act? how does his mental health motivate him later?
more flaws would be welcome!
matter manipulation rocks
oooohh I love guitar can I come and sing with him sometime?

Social - 99/100

f r e n c h

f r i e s

ok I love him
ok I love him
just add a reason for his favorite color and possession and this section will be perfect!

History - 98/100
everything is nice here, not too much and not too little. good job!

Style - 100/100
ok I'm just going to sneak awkwardly and steal Venom's clothes ok

Playlist analisys - 100/100
I just admire all the people who do these analyses; like, how do you know all these songs and how do you know that it's the perfect one? I'm unsettlingly thrilled
I want to hug him

you did such a great job! you've described Peter's all personalities clearly, while keeping his real self on the first place. apart from some minor issues I had about his flaws and motivations, he's a great character, and you've really made me interested enough to know everything about his story. I can't express my admiration further in words. I wish you fortunate writing!
average - 96/100

Peter is:
90% likely to be my friend
45% likely to by my lover
96% likely to be my party member
87% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

Would you rate Qili? Please don't be alarmed by the long and badly written history typed up at 3am

okay, I'm here, and I'm excited!

Overview - 96/100
okay okay okay I love her name it's so cute and unique!
the mechanic? now we have one character in common
woah. the story behind the surnames is so cool! I've always liked the idea of changing one's surname, and I like to see it more in other people's works!
what exactly is Qirix system? is it a language or a dialect?

Looks - 90/100
I wonder how long her hair is
that's my first encounter with the term "leaf-shaped"
a constant sad mouth, I know something about it
a prosthesis! another similarity to my other character. now I think that I'm not as creative as I thought I was
A BLASTER HOLSTER

Nature - 94/100
what the french fries her mannerisms are almost the same as mine
OH what a motivation
you're telling me that she has a sister and in the next sentence she dies?? how dare you
I like her as a character already
I relate… is it good or bad…
Omega Force. I need to know more.
I like her now as a person
wait so Qirix is a planet?
but what even is xirium qolide? and Dawn's uprising? I have to read her story

Social - 93/100
ok so Qirix is a planet
wait it's S t a r W a r s now everything makes sense and doesn't at the same time. because I know nothing about Star Wars. well, there are memes, but…
just realized that one of her tags is "Star Wars"
and she has a brother! don't tell me he's dead too
B R E A D
okay I think everything is fine here!

History - 98/100
history, finally. when I read it I'll have no questions or a hundred more
wow I love the way you've written it, it's so simple yet so concise imo
it's a whole story, not just a block of text, I love it
now everyone's dead. that's okay, I didn't need my happiness anyway
you made me feel the same as she did. I don't really know if it's good or not. but I love her backstory, and I'd like to see more of it someday

Family - 96/100
man not even one member of her family survived? make her have a pet that she can confide in. tortoises live long. let her have a tortoise.

good character. honestly, I have no additions to her personality, nor ideas for improvements of it. either you made her well-balanced or I have set my character expectations a little bit lower than ususal. overall - great job! she seems like a perfect protagonist, is she one? I guess she is. I don't quite approve of her gloomy backstory, but well, I have no control over it. but. just give her a tortoise.
average - 94,5/100

Qili is:
72% likely to be my friend
45% likely to by my lover
80% likely to be my party member
75% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

hi! so this is the last character, let's wrap it up!

Overview - 85/100
oh, I've always loved the name Nicholas. his last name is cool, too!
there's little information here, maybe you could add a history behind his other names or who uses them, or explain his role in more detail?

Looks - 87/100
WOAH that's a lot of information in one go. I like it
well, the fields here aren't that descriptive, so there's little I can comment on. in the future, don't hesitate to spice his page up by adding more details!

Nature - 96/100
such well-written mannerisms!
why does he want to get rich? is it because of some past experiences? maybe you could add a reason behind his motivations
and well-written flaws!
"if Nich is panicking, everyone should be panicking" oh okay I'll keep that in mind
ah, I know his type. I can't stand this kind of people irl, but they can be pretty interesting as characters. so I both like them and don't; my mind is full of contradictions

Social - 98/100
I must see this pocket watch. and maybe you could add a areason why it's his favorite posession?
is it really so "naturally" that his favorite animal is a fox?
woah, I love the way you described his relationships! it gives me a clear picture of other characters' place in the story, and says more about Nich himself, too! everything is so detailed here, their behavior, attitude, history. great job!

History - 100/100
oh that's a turbulent backstory. it's really interesting
I have nothing to say! everything is fine here, no worries, you don't need to change anything! now that I know his story I've grown some kind of appreciation for his existence.

Nich is an interesting character. I especially love his design and backstory. he doesn't seem like a person I'd like to hang out with, but in a novel I'd surely have more positive feelings toward him. I hope that I'll be able to see him in action one day!
average - 93/100

Nich is:
43% likely to be my friend
18% likely to by my lover
79% likely to be my party member
68% likely to be my enemy

@tomat brightness_7

I'd like to thank everyone for giving me their character for me to rate! it was fun, and I hope you enjoyed it too! you've given me so many inspirations and new ideas, and while I tried to help you with your characters, I've developed mine as well. thank you once again for making such a precious memory! ^-^

@Tidermelon group

aww, there goes the last rating! I’ve been following this thread for a long time, and I’d like to thank YOU for being so incredible to pull off all of these ratings so thoroughly. I think everyone who’s been on here and gotten a rating from you can agree that you deserve a round of applause.

@squiddicus language

I definitely have to agree with @Tidermelon ! Every time this thread pops up in my online topics I get so excited to read one of your ratings - they're so fun to read, as well as being honest but not harsh, kind but never patronising. So thanks so much for creating this thread - and I loved reading your rating for Qili this morning. It honestly made me so happy and I'm glad you like her!
(and don't worry I'm going to give her a droid or a tortoise)