forum Get a Character Vibe Check

Started December 20, 2019 by @Lupout

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Vibe check my babies?
Nathan: A ghost who wants vengeance on his ex for killing him
Madeline (Madi): Nathan's former BFF, Valerie's current BFF. Had a crush on Nathan.
Valerie: Nathan's ex. Doesn't think she ever did anything wrong, ever.
Haydn: A theatre kid. Disaster gay. Abused by Valerie.
Nadia: Nathan's twin. Driven insane by her brother's death. Abused in a mental asylum. Murders almost every character.

Here I go with this one, hahaha.
Nathan : Got no chill when it comes to love- honestly he needs a replacement lover, maybe some ice cream instead of a vengeful feeling.
Madeline : Soft lover. Dwells in the past but literally doesn't care. Move on and conquer your own future kinda vibe.
Valerie : "I'm absolutely perfect, what's wrong with me?" Oh dark past. Probably blind to her own errors.
Hadyn : In a singing voice: Hamilton wrote- is this script wrong, the rainbow 51? Honestly just needs a guardian angel and some music CDs.
Nadia : Therapy, get her some therapy. Always knows how to use surroundings as a weapon. The past has her trapped. Feels ultimately sad.

Vibe check my babies?
Nathan: A ghost who wants vengeance on his ex for killing him
Madeline (Madi): Nathan's former BFF, Valerie's current BFF. Had a crush on Nathan.
Valerie: Nathan's ex. Doesn't think she ever did anything wrong, ever.
Haydn: A theatre kid. Disaster gay. Abused by Valerie.
Nadia: Nathan's twin. Driven insane by her brother's death. Abused in a mental asylum. Murders almost every character.

Here I go with this one, hahaha.
Nathan : Got no chill when it comes to love- honestly he needs a replacement lover, maybe some ice cream instead of a vengeful feeling.
Madeline : Soft lover. Dwells in the past but literally doesn't care. Move on and conquer your own future kinda vibe.
Valerie : "I'm absolutely perfect, what's wrong with me?" Oh dark past. Probably blind to her own errors.
Hadyn : In a singing voice: Hamilton wrote- is this script wrong, the rainbow 51? Honestly just needs a guardian angel and some music CDs.
Nadia : Therapy, get her some therapy. Always knows how to use surroundings as a weapon. The past has her trapped. Feels ultimately sad.

How…

How the actual frick did you seriously figure out their entire character arcs? Like, legit Haydn's character description for the actor right now is:
"Goofball
Loveable dork
Drama kid
Accidentally gets the entire class to sing Hamilton"

I don't even have that on his character page. How the heck did you–

Oh I have one:

Marcus Zerack: the antagonist of my stories. Is the source of a virus infection that he is trying to spread. He acts like no one is worth his time but has been shown rarely to spare people in fights, masking it as beneath himself to end them.

Azrael: Angel of Death herself. The Original goth girl. Very distance at times. Nihilistic. Butch lesbian.
Allison: Half-angel, half-human. Very bubbly. Very outgoing. Gullible at times. Badass women who don't need no man, but wouldn't mind having one.
These are my characters
Vibe check them please!

Alright! Here we go, I'm in the mood for this, haha.
Azrael : Cinnamon bun but would actually kill. Black, always. Somehow sees the light but twists it in the worst way.
Allison : I'm single but open to love- Honestly a sucker for all things adorable, I feel that. Needs a man who feels like he wants to be independent too y'know

How is this so accurate?

Accuracy is my favorite thing <3

Can you do another one of my characters?
Chris Copper: He's business in the front, party in the back. Very formal, unless under lots of stress. Badass mofo. Straight-looking gay guy.

I do have another character here, the ones that I did with Jan, Florin and Enzo were pretty accurate as well!

Niko: An literal nervous wreck on the inside; acts pretty stubborn and confident most of the time however. Is the type of guy to get an order to do something, then as soon as the person who gave the order leaves, turn to the nearest person and give them the order instead.

Can you do another one of my characters?
Chris Copper: He's business in the front, party in the back. Very formal, unless under lots of stress. Badass mofo. Straight-looking gay guy.

Sure!
Chris Copper : Hey now, work comes BefOrE play. Honestly he's got no chill but he has to put up with everything. That "My job comes before my romantic life" kinda guy.

Can you do another one of my characters?
Chris Copper: He's business in the front, party in the back. Very formal, unless under lots of stress. Badass mofo. Straight-looking gay guy.

Sure!
Chris Copper : Hey now, work comes BefOrE play. Honestly he's got no chill but he has to put up with everything. That "My job comes before my romantic life" kinda guy.
by order of me, I command you to stop being so damn accurate

Can you do another one of my characters?
Chris Copper: He's business in the front, party in the back. Very formal, unless under lots of stress. Badass mofo. Straight-looking gay guy.

Sure!
Chris Copper : Hey now, work comes BefOrE play. Honestly he's got no chill but he has to put up with everything. That "My job comes before my romantic life" kinda guy.
by order of me, I command you to stop being so damn accurate

It's against my code, dear. I'll be honest about what I see until I'm dead!

(okay lemme try this)
Janice {Jah-Neese}: Very much the life of the party in any ocasion, wants to help all animals and baking or just being in a kitchen type of person. She is very loving but also very much a "child". –Have fun!

My d&d boy? (+birbs?)

Trust: Not trustworthy, a tricky little shit, friendly most of the time, pretty powerful magic, an intelligence of 1
C-L: Edgy, high wisdom, cunning, will murder you even though he is a birb
Arlo: Scaredy birb, anxiety, must protect, is actually super intelligent, books

Hello! I am in the middle of 3 stories and yay writer's block, I felt I needed to connect to the characters again and see what other people think of them. so here are my many characters and let the vibe check begin

Evangeline: Disaster lesbian, stubborn, sometimes shes a bit insensitive, gets into fights easily, acts like she doesn't care but does, secret soft side, Loves energy drinks, empty city streets, and rainy nights

Avery: soft girl, hopeless romantic, has had a crush of Evan for years, doesn't like fighting unless it's for the better, always quiet, genuinely nice and caring, cinnamon roll, always organized, loves graphic design, coffee, and Lyric (her daughter).

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Jasper: a run of the mill badass, fights for stupid reasons, resting b*tch face, hardcore, smokes, loud idgaf attitude, Loves playing guitar and walking on the beach. acts fake boyfriend for Iris at family occasions because her parents aren't accepting

Iris: gets excited easily and slightly clueless, shes closeted to her family but to her friend's shes extra gay, she acts a little cocky but she will cry if you speak to her in a wrong tone, loves daydreaming, painting, playing ukelele and getting reactions out of people (especially Emii)

Emii: short, quiet queer, troubled past, very mature for her age, keeps to herself most of the time, stays in the library most of the time, reads mostly Shakespeare. loves books, coffee, and thunderstorms,

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Aerin: slightly childish, fast runner, usually never gets caught during explorations, gets angry easily but can't act on it being one of the shortest people in the group loves art, music, and kids

Myles: angsty boi, sad past, pothead, borderline philosopher, will get into a fistfight over anything, likes breaking the rules, being outside/ exploring, and spicy foods

Sage: essentially the "mom" of the group, the oldest (26), the smartest, loves when people rant to her, takes her job as a therapist very seriously, already has done dumb sh*t the others have done, takes care of them, drinks coffee and energy drinks 24/7, chases the others around the city making sure they don't do anything too stupid.

Remi: I might steal your girl and then set fire to the world kind of chaotic, youngest in the group (17), treated like a baby even though she doesn't like it, anger issues, unresolved childhood trauma, loves art and scary movies

Reef: second-oldest, Aerin's older brother, loves tacos and action movies, gets into the most trouble during explorations, loves doing the dumbest stuff while with the group, climbing up walls and trees, the group calls him the spider monkey.

Can you do another one of my characters?
Chris Copper: He's business in the front, party in the back. Very formal, unless under lots of stress. Badass mofo. Straight-looking gay guy.

Sure!
Chris Copper : Hey now, work comes BefOrE play. Honestly he's got no chill but he has to put up with everything. That "My job comes before my romantic life" kinda guy.
by order of me, I command you to stop being so damn accurate

It's against my code, dear. I'll be honest about what I see until I'm dead!

Your code is breaking my code. Tries to not laugh from the stupidity of that sentence and fails

Chain got long, so I'm continuing here.

Honestly lol, over half my sentences don't even sound like English.

This kind of died so imma bring it back

Mitch: 17, Nonbinary, likes guys, got disowned once, been crushing on Jared for like ever, chaotic, coffee, art, hairdye and piercings
Jared: 18, Pansexual, Quiet intellectual, soft, an absolute sweety, feels really pressured, all-nighters, movie marathons
Amiee: 17, Lesbian, a 'tough' dude, will punch you, attacked three guys in a mall for being racist, a feminist, camping, theatre
Wynter: 16, Butch lesbian, PARKOUR, dating Amiee, will punch you first, the least chaotic, concerts, strobe lighting
Mecca: 18, Bi, acts tough but actually super not, plays the drums and also the violin and everyone is shocked by it, chocolate milk, secret confessions, dusk
Spice: 10, Amiee's younger sister, will fight you for a caprisun, adored and she knows it, warm cookies, marshmallows in hot chocolate

This kind of died so imma bring it back

Mitch: 17, Nonbinary, likes guys, got disowned once, been crushing on Jared for like ever, chaotic, coffee, art, hairdye and piercings
Jared: 18, Pansexual, Quiet intellectual, soft, an absolute sweety, feels really pressured, all-nighters, movie marathons
Amiee: 17, Lesbian, a 'tough' dude, will punch you, attacked three guys in a mall for being racist, a feminist, camping, theatre
Wynter: 16, Butch lesbian, PARKOUR, dating Amiee, will punch you first, the least chaotic, concerts, strobe lighting
Mecca: 18, Straight, acts tough but actually super not, plays the drums and also the violin and everyone is shocked by it, chocolate milk, secret confessions, dusk
Spice: 10, Amiee's younger sister, will fight you for a caprisun, adored and she knows it, warm cookies, marshmallows in hot chocolate

Amiee and Wynter sound like two soldiers who love each other aggressively and have love battles (I LOVE YOU MORE, NO I LOVE YOU MORE, NO I DO screaming), everyone has their hot chocolates watching them except for Jared who will try not to get involved by studying books but he's scared extremely scared.

This kind of died so imma bring it back

Mitch: 17, Nonbinary, likes guys, got disowned once, been crushing on Jared for like ever, chaotic, coffee, art, hairdye and piercings
Jared: 18, Pansexual, Quiet intellectual, soft, an absolute sweety, feels really pressured, all-nighters, movie marathons
Amiee: 17, Lesbian, a 'tough' dude, will punch you, attacked three guys in a mall for being racist, a feminist, camping, theatre
Wynter: 16, Butch lesbian, PARKOUR, dating Amiee, will punch you first, the least chaotic, concerts, strobe lighting
Mecca: 18, Straight, acts tough but actually super not, plays the drums and also the violin and everyone is shocked by it, chocolate milk, secret confessions, dusk
Spice: 10, Amiee's younger sister, will fight you for a caprisun, adored and she knows it, warm cookies, marshmallows in hot chocolate

Amiee and Wynter sound like two soldiers who love each other aggressively and have love battles (I LOVE YOU MORE, NO I LOVE YOU MORE, NO I DO screaming), everyone has their hot chocolates watching them except for Jared who will try not to get involved by studying books but he's scared extremely scared.

That's literally them! You read my mind.

This kind of died so imma bring it back

Mitch: 17, Nonbinary, likes guys, got disowned once, been crushing on Jared for like ever, chaotic, coffee, art, hairdye and piercings
Jared: 18, Pansexual, Quiet intellectual, soft, an absolute sweety, feels really pressured, all-nighters, movie marathons
Amiee: 17, Lesbian, a 'tough' dude, will punch you, attacked three guys in a mall for being racist, a feminist, camping, theatre
Wynter: 16, Butch lesbian, PARKOUR, dating Amiee, will punch you first, the least chaotic, concerts, strobe lighting
Mecca: 18, Straight, acts tough but actually super not, plays the drums and also the violin and everyone is shocked by it, chocolate milk, secret confessions, dusk
Spice: 10, Amiee's younger sister, will fight you for a caprisun, adored and she knows it, warm cookies, marshmallows in hot chocolate

Amiee and Wynter sound like two soldiers who love each other aggressively and have love battles (I LOVE YOU MORE, NO I LOVE YOU MORE, NO I DO screaming), everyone has their hot chocolates watching them except for Jared who will try not to get involved by studying books but he's scared extremely scared.

That's literally them! You read my mind.

Hahaaaaa Thank youuuuuuuuuu I'm good at this

Torin: Smol aggressive gay bean that needs to be loved. Terrible childhood. 22 years old

(okay lemme try this)
Janice {Jah-Neese}: Very much the life of the party in any ocasion, wants to help all animals and baking or just being in a kitchen type of person. She is very loving but also very much a "child". –Have fun!

Janice: Wild, crazy. Probably has dyed hair. Would adopt a cute creature/child in two seconds, very soft heart. Bakes when stressed and probably stress-eats too. Very much a mom figure

Bringing this back again with shitty wizards

Merillion: Grumpy af, dating soft boy Kyia, is mean to everyone except Kyia, has no idea where his magic came from
Kyia: A soft boy, dating Merillion, the 'mom friend', learned his magic through study
Trust: A little shit, secret crush on Knox, a serial killer (he isn't great at it), got his magic from his patron
Knox: Rather quiet, actually really smart, not so secret crush on Trust, born with magic
Moxxee: Annoying chaotic gay, loves glitter, wears eyeliner, not discreet, likes summoning dragons, gained magic through a traumatic event
Darren: Tired, just wants to sleep, totally doesn't have a crush on Moxxee, sarcasm, fell off a cliff once, linked to a runestone
Kwen: A dog/dragon, was a dragon but got turned into a dog by Moxxee, annoying as hell, reckless, likes touching fire to give people heart attacks

(okay lemme try this)
Janice {Jah-Neese}: Very much the life of the party in any ocasion, wants to help all animals and baking or just being in a kitchen type of person. She is very loving but also very much a "child". –Have fun!

Janice: Wild, crazy. Probably has dyed hair. Would adopt a cute creature/child in two seconds, very soft heart. Bakes when stressed and probably stress-eats too. Very much a mom figure

i see that thanks!

More of mine!
Gabriel: Always angry, has too many swords, seriously just take him to anger management. Daddy issues.
Cordelia: Practically perfect in every way, except for the time she killed her uncle and hid his body but we don't need to talk about that-
Christopher: Wannabe alchemist, literally sold his heart to save his little sister's life.
Eleanor: Sweetheart, loves embroidery, broke out of the palace when she was 17 and never came back.
Georgie: Would die for his huge dog, not the brightest but he does his best.

More of mine!
Gabriel: Always angry, has too many swords, seriously just take him to anger management. Daddy issues.
Cordelia: Practically perfect in every way, except for the time she killed her uncle and hid his body but we don't need to talk about that-
Christopher: Wannabe alchemist, literally sold his heart to save his little sister's life.
Eleanor: Sweetheart, loves embroidery, broke out of the palace when she was 17 and never came back.
Georgie: Would die for his huge dog, not the brightest but he does his best.

Gabriel: "what are you talking about? i'm fine" * punches a hole through the wall *, rage aesthetic, has probably murdered someone but feels bad about it
Cordelia: perfect lipstick and eyeliner wings, ballerina mannerisms, probably carries a dozen knives under designer jeans
Christopher: tries super hard at everything, really ambitious, if over-protectiveness was a person
Eleanor: Airy personality, loves people, will probably stab your eyes out with her sewing needle if you come at her.
Georgie: a fiercer version of Lennie from Of Mice and Men, (idk why but) lighthouse aesthetic, forgetful

sorry i just found this chat again