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Started December 20, 2019 by @Lupout

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Lysia, a two-faced but well intentioned antihero

The three of these are siblings, so don't ship them lol
Kai (male) 15
Kayla (female) 14
Miriam (female) 13

And here are a few others from a different book (ship all you like here):
Lialye (female) 15
Talin (male) 15
Rin (male) 15
Lonni (female) 17
Evan (male) 17
Umida (male) 36

Sorrel : ASLEEP ALL THE FUCKING TIME and needs a nap still, also super soft and drunk 24/7
Dashan : Hopeless romantic that somehow ends up dating everyone around atleast once
Akira : Slaps everyone, a lot, loves her son, would die for her son, loves roses
Star : Abused as a kid but he's like "whatever floats your boat" about it to his abuser. Literally could care less.

Sorrel: sleep deprived drunk cinnamon roll.
Dashan: way to flirty for their own good.
Akira: the group´s mom, sometimes chill, has a murder mode.
Star: needs therapy
(I hope I got it right…)

Perfect oh my gosh! Thanks!!!

Here's my character: Invalid Character
I was trying to go for the genuine goth who's also a stoner look/type and I need to know if I succeeded. Be as brutally honest as you can

Azrael gives me kid-who-sits-alone-in-the-corner-of-the-cafeteria-because-it’s-closest-to-the-vending-machine vibes, if that makes any sense. Like, she doesn’t try to be a dark loner but ends up doing so out of sheer convenience. Everyone’s like “omg you’re so cool how do you do it” and Azrael’s like “i am afraid that i have absolutely no idea” and stares off dramatically into the distance, her hair blowing in the wind

That describes her more accurately than I thought it would. Thanks

The three of these are siblings, so don't ship them lol
Kai (male) 15
Kayla (female) 14
Miriam (female) 13

And here are a few others from a different book (ship all you like here):
Lialye (female) 15
Talin (male) 15
Rin (male) 15
Lonni (female) 17
Evan (male) 17
Umida (male) 36

You're going to have to describe them a little bit more, it's hard to get any sort of vibe from names and ages alone <3

Als re-posting mine here, bc they got ignored the first time

Titan: Bigg man, science experiment, actual monster, never smiles. Was born to murder, but raised to be soft. Will still murder tho. His mom friend is trying to teach him morals, buuuttt…..they might not have built him with that part of he brain…
He still loves her, her daughter, and the kitten he saved tho, and would protect them no matter what.

Osric: Sassy gay turd. Has met the love of his life, but low-kay is also in love with my mc, and would totally date him. He doesn't try to make good impressions on people because he knows they'll hate him no matter what and has really bad trust issues doesn't care. "This is the way I am, take 'er or leave 'er." Didn't know what the internet was until three months ago, but has already learned everything there is to learn about mEMES

Als re-posting mine here, bc they got ignored the first time

Titan: Bigg man, science experiment, actual monster, never smiles. Was born to murder, but raised to be soft. Will still murder tho. His mom friend is trying to teach him morals, buuuttt…..they might not have built him with that part of he brain…
He still loves her, her daughter, and the kitten he saved tho, and would protect them no matter what.

Osric: Sassy gay turd. Has met the love of his life, but low-kay is also in love with my mc, and would totally date him. He doesn't try to make good impressions on people because he knows they'll hate him no matter what and has really bad trust issues doesn't care. "This is the way I am, take 'er or leave 'er." Didn't know what the internet was until three months ago, but has already learned everything there is to learn about mEMES

Honestly Titan makes me imagine one of those 'Attack on Titan' titans but like, with heart eyes or an apron or something oh my gosh-

Osric reminds me of one of those people that only have a job to supply their internet for memes, and somehow ends up feeling bad after basic conversations, reminds me a lot of myself-

Kai: red and black, oversized jackets, a cracked brick wall, a bloody smile.
Gets into fights like a musician slips into tempo, enthusiastic and makes sure you know it
Kaylee: a blue-green sea overcast by clouds, the swoop of a paintbrush, a lone birdcall, hair blowing in the wind.
The calm before the storm, serenity with the hint of danger
Miriam: wire-frame glasses, sleeves rolled up to the elbow, animal eyes glittering in the dark, the scratch of pen on paper.
Waiting for lightning to strike, curious

Do my character

Thanks

The three of these are siblings, so don't ship them lol
Kai (male) 15
Kayla (female) 14
Miriam (female) 13

And here are a few others from a different book (ship all you like here):
Lialye (female) 15
Talin (male) 15
Rin (male) 15
Lonni (female) 17
Evan (male) 17
Umida (male) 36

You're going to have to describe them a little bit more, it's hard to get any sort of vibe from names and ages alone <3

ahHH okay sorry

The three of these are siblings, so don't ship them
Kai (male) 15 - wizard, black hair, wears cloaks
Kayla (female) 14 - swordfighter, calm, keeps siblings in check
Miriam (female) 13 - if Chaos were a person, it would be her

And here are a few others from a different book (ship all you like here):
Lialye (female) 15 - neutral, kind of quiet unless she knows people
Talin (male) 15 - brooding, fights with Rin
Rin (male) 15 - fights with Talin, happy, snaps after a bit though
Lonni (female) 17 - jumps around, happy, hugs even if you don't like them
Evan (male) 17 - gentle soul, happy, smiles a lot, in the background
Umida (male) 36 - tired, strict, basically the teacher

Kai: red and black, oversized jackets, a cracked brick wall, a bloody smile.
Gets into fights like a musician slips into tempo, enthusiastic and makes sure you know it
Kaylee: a blue-green sea overcast by clouds, the swoop of a paintbrush, a lone birdcall, hair blowing in the wind.
The calm before the storm, serenity with the hint of danger
Miriam: wire-frame glasses, sleeves rolled up to the elbow, animal eyes glittering in the dark, the scratch of pen on paper.
Waiting for lightning to strike, curious

Kayla's is actually really accurate
Nice job !

Here are some of my characters:
Tommy (male) 16: tries to be nice but has a bad temper
Nick (male) 16: edgy on the outside, nervous mess on the inside
Kurtis (male) 16: big goofball, will always cheer you up

@Sorrel, thanks so much for doing my bois, you got them bang on right xDD

Tommy honestly is a lot of my friends. I'd probably be cool with him!
Nick needs a nap and a blanket the poor edgelord
Kurtis sounds adorable! He sounds like a living ball of sunshine… maybe he could cheer up nick?

Sal is a big ol lazy salamander dude who just wants to hang out and chill.

Shawn is a attempted edgy swordsman who got sparkly light powers instead of anything cool. his best friend is a clown, which isn't helping his reputation.

Wendy can't move while someone is watching her, but she's super fast when hidden. She takes care of her blind best friend named buggs.

Universe one:
Loch; Butch lesbian, pretty edgy, would die for her wife and son
Gloam; Soft lesbian, flowers and pink, mom
Jorah; Happy boi, loves everyone, his aesthetic is sun shining through rain clouds
Dream; Shy, has mommy AND daddy issues,
Hearth; Has a spirit higher than a child with ice cream
Mallow; Would definitely be into sci-fi, “would one of you just read a book?”
Luosto; The bro-est of bros, would probably hit a blunt with you, always has your back
Caracal; If resting bitch face was a personality, it would be her
Auk; Edgier than Heathers and DEH combined, was probably born in Russia
Blackflame; Snape.
Vetiver; Little-finger.

Universe two: (most are shortened names)
Tiger; Jumpy, tragic backstory, uh-oh, you made eye contact with her for three seconds she’s your mom now, oblivious to the world
Rainbow; Stoic, probably a tsundere, another lesbian, fought in a war
Acti; Evil drag queen that’s actually a woman
Peacock; Oh shit, it’s the fashion police, would definitely kill you if you wore socks and sandals
Angel; Baby, has a giant flaming sword, Old Testament Angel
Druzy; Small, cute, will probably cut off your tongue

Be as offensive or random as you want

@Sorrel, thanks so much for doing my bois, you got them bang on right xDD

bows, with this special smile. Only the best for the best~

@Sorrel, thanks so much for doing my bois, you got them bang on right xDD

bows, with this special smile. Only the best for the best~

Aww!! <3 <3

Vibe me bois

Here’s some of my characters, vibe check them or something

Jan: A tired man but also very protective of those he cares for. Tall, but not the tallest of my characters I’m gonna list, he was a former getaway driver. Oh yeah did I mention he did crime (and every now and then does it, but he denies having to do anything with it)

Florin: 6’3 tall man, really intimidating first glance but actually nice otherwise. Can still be very aggro though, like very over the top aggressive. Doesn’t really understand himself that well, doesn’t even understand people that well. He’s used to being referred to as a number as well and doesn’t know what to do when he has no orders.

Enzo: 5’6, smallish, prefers non verbal communication since he can’t really speak due to his vocal injury, unless he pushes himself. Thinker, thinks about stuff a lot of people wouldn’t think of, calm but fear him because he’s really good at aiming with a gun. Despite that he’s pretty timid and would rather flee than fight.

Here’s some of my characters, vibe check them or something

Jan: A tired man but also very protective of those he cares for. Tall, but not the tallest of my characters I’m gonna list, he was a former getaway driver. Oh yeah did I mention he did crime (and every now and then does it, but he denies having to do anything with it)

Florin: 6’3 tall man, really intimidating first glance but actually nice otherwise. Can still be very aggro though, like very over the top aggressive. Doesn’t really understand himself that well, doesn’t even understand people that well. He’s used to being referred to as a number as well and doesn’t know what to do when he has no orders.

Enzo: 5’6, smallish, prefers non verbal communication since he can’t really speak due to his vocal injury, unless he pushes himself. Thinker, thinks about stuff a lot of people wouldn’t think of, calm but fear him because he’s really good at aiming with a gun. Despite that he’s pretty timid and would rather flee than fight.

Jan: Fucking nerd, lives off of coffee and Red Bull, has gotten 3 hours of sleep the past 4 days but it's fine, everything's fine-. Like a walking encyclopedia when it comes to cars, and has all of the brain cells in the group.
Florin: Has ruined a shirt by flexing, has done the stereotypical "smashes ceramics when angry" thing, probably repressing 3 different emotions at any given time, has a pretty lit tattoo
Enzo: Can and has been picked up by Florin, super nimble fingers, has outrun a moving vehicle, prefers long distance fighting than up-close and personal stuff.

Oh, and Enzo is totally blond

Here's more of mine:
Ophelia: Sweetheart but absolutely terrifying when angered, loves flowers
Giana: Has a broken foot, a crutch, and all of the brain cells. Lots of internalized guilt
Vivian: Can be a little loud and obnoxious but also is hella skilled with a bow, ripped
Lucas: Half blind, half Fae, just wants to make everyone proud of him
Iam: Baby boy. Baby. Also the king. Can and has been picked up by Vivian
Esther: Very kind and helpful, just let her be happy, dammit!
Maia: Mute but will still trash talk you in sign language, loves to make an entrance
Cedar: Woodcutter who wants to protect everyone but also cracks jokes at the worst times
Lavinia: Has one hand, no tongue, but a ton of brain cells. Has seen pretty much everything despite being 22.
Oleander: Overdramatic self-and-demon-possessed hoe, hedonistic and always dressed too well

Oh, and Enzo is totally blond

But with like…one tiny stripe of color from when he tried to dye his hair once. He doesn't like to mention it. Please don't mention it.

I’ll check yours if you check mine