Lillian Nielsen

Female

Lili, preferred

Main character

14

123 lbs (muscle)

5' 6''

Auburn-red, purple glints

Slight but with curves
Her muscle isn't really visible

Pale matt

Caucasian

Bright blue

None

Mid-back; straight; often up in a messy bun

Birth mark on lower back
As of the first book, a scar running all along her right side from bust to waist

As aforementioned, reading, siwimming and running
If her mom works from home, Lili likes to help organize her cases

-Plays with strand of hair (hence the messy bun)
-Looks down and rubs her forehead when mad; it's like a warning to outside people: stay the hell away
-Constantly moving because she's constantly thinking, clenches and unclenches her fists
-Swallows a lot when she's sad but wears the brightest smile to cover it up. The only person able to differentiate her smiles is her cousin Mia

Getting home
Convincing Nathan he isn't a terrible person
Achieving her dreams of a perfect romance, for which she has to heal Nathan

-Incredibly stubborn
-Very defensive because she is terrified of being at fault
-Overprotective of her loved ones (especially Mia who has a facial deformity)
-Lets some things get to her way more then they should

Only the one: anyone with a mullet. She will immediately judge anyone with a mullet. Otherwise she keeps an open mind to everyone (her mom is a social worker so she's seen all the possible situations)

-She has it in her to be the sweetest person you'll ever meet, even if it doesn't come out often, and so is very good at "healing" people, consoling them and making them feel better
-She's an excellent runner and swimmer, she practices often
-She's very good in school, especially English and debating/convinvcing people
-Reading. If she's into a book, she'll finish within an hour

-Most of the time, she's cool-headed and calm.
-She's incredibly open-minded and hungry for knowledge
-Terrible liar. Absolutely terrible. The only thing she can fake is a smile

Pineapple

Dogs

Bow and arrow

Clockwork Angel by Cassandra

Blue

School

Has a complete disregard for politics

Unobservant Catholic

13/11/2003

Canadian; raised in a normal family, younger brother; she was always closer to her father; she always dreamed of the perfect romance.

At the beginning of the story, she's dead and in the Underworld. Her love interest, Nathan Seyrès, is also dead and in the Underworld. Her mistakenly finds himself in the section for Lili's universe, where Lili finds out that she is not actually dead. The story is her trying to get back to the Land of the Living.

https://youtu.be/7aC8W3J6EpI - Theme Song, Anais Mitchell's Flowers

Grade 9

Dog: Kitty, Cockapoo, 4 y/o

Fangirl personified

Okay, I'm actually really impressed by the amount of detail and work that has gone into this. I think that she is really good! Ready for storytelling.
I say this because your character isn't really living until you've put them in their universe/situations/ and what not. She just needs a plot to jump into.

I would say that her motivations are a bit on the underdeveloped side. My favorite question to ask myself while working on this section is "why". Why does she want to go home? Why does she want the perfect romance? Why does she want to protect the ones she loves? etc etc.

It also helps you build on their personality like anyone who wants to protect their loved ones is fierce, strong, dedicated, etc.
Try that out and see how it works!

Her Carrier is Isabella Gray, 16, daughter of a police chief.
Lives in London, England
A Carrier is when you are a lailohenwekwa (see Lihaparu (the Underworld)), a piece of your being is left on your planet. It immediately transfers itself to the person that, broadly speaking, is your soulmate and lodges itself in that person. It's as if you are possessing that person. If the link is activated, you can telepathically talk and see through their eyes and control them if the link is strong enough.