forum I'm willing to critique characters and stuff!

Started February 04, 2018 by @childoftheuniverse

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Also thanks for clearing that up

Thank you MeadowOfSilence

Invalid Character I finally figured out that I couldn't send the link because I was pressing the wrong letter. lol

I'll check it out now!

Thanks!

Where did the scar come from?
Elaborate a little more on the background, and the personality is a little bit contradictory, you may have to choose some traits over others. But other than that, she's pretty cool!
Hope I helped! :)

Yes, thank you. I will fix that now.

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@Natasha
Np!

@childoftheuniverse thank you so much for the critique of Alexa, and it's fine! She would TOTALLY use two different colors, like white and black, etc. I'll definitely put mora for her background later. Thanks again!

I think I fixed it.

No problem
also it looks good Natasha!

Thanks

*Happily jumps up and down

I love my family, but none of them are writers and my mom is the only one who actually reads besides me, so it's nice to get some feedback that will actually be genuinely helpful and not just be random suggestions.

My dad loves teasing me about how writing is soooooooo easy.

Mine is the same way!! But no worries I love doing stuff like this…If you need anymore help feel free to ask!

Thanks! :) I have one character that I would love if you critiqued, but she's not done yet.I'll finish her tomorrow and send the link.

Ok!

Thank you!

No problem!