forum Shattered Time ( Time Travel Rp , no not Doctor who)
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( I was at the carnival where this ride got me really sick?)

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Marki smiled shyly at Jane, " Yes, in fact we have to start your training right now. Now I want you to tell me your fears, JAne." He asked curiously.

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"Um… ev-ev-everything? Um…. I don't even know wh-what's going on h-h-here."

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"Ok.." He said slowly. This was going to be harder then he thought. "Now I want for you to think of someone you hate."

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"I guess the people who bully me but…. I want them to stop, not be given a taste of their own medicine." she said, touching a small scar on her cheek absentmindedly. Like it was a reflex. (More backstory later.)

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Marki….. well they were having a problem now. "Jane your powers are fear and poison, their must be something…… do you have any family?"

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"No…. foster mum…. well, I dunno. Everyone has family, I never knew mine."

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( Abigail, everyone has someone they would die to protect, or else… well then it's not human, and everyone has someone they hate no matter who they are. )

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( Abigail, everyone has someone they would die to protect, or else… well then it's not human, and everyone has someone they hate no matter who they are. )

(Unless you're a "I don't really hate people because everyone is capable of good and evil" type person)

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( She at least must have SOMEONE she would die to protect thought.)

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( She at least must have SOMEONE she would die to protect thought.)

(She's always being shunted around, so she never gets to know anyone well enough to care.)

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(If not we can get her to die for someone in the group?)

(She's not going to die.)

@Ca1iCa1--Is--Tired

(Hey….uh Abigail? I know that you want to make your character struggle with understanding and accepting her powers, but it is getting to a point where it is stalling the story, not being helpful to her character arc. It almost seems like she is some kind of being without restrictions, echoing what Nerd said. I really want this story to be fun and entertaining for all involved, not having a bunch of people caught up on the same thing over and over. Not trying to be mean in the slightest, just telling you what I think. Please don't take it the wrong way. You chose for you character to have dark powers, not what some would consider good ones. Fear/Poison means Fear/Poison, not Strength/Healing. I am just speaking my mind, and if you ignore this it's fine. I just needed to get this off my chest.)

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(Hey….uh Abigail? I know that you want to make your character struggle with understanding and accepting her powers, but it is getting to a point where it is stalling the story, not being helpful to her character arc. It almost seems like she is some kind of being without restrictions, echoing what Nerd said. I really want this story to be fun and entertaining for all involved, not having a bunch of people caught up on the same thing over and over. Not trying to be mean in the slightest, just telling you what I think. Please don't take it the wrong way. You chose for you character to have dark powers, not what some would consider good ones. Fear/Poison means Fear/Poison, not Strength/Healing. I am just speaking my mind, and if you ignore this it's fine. I just needed to get this off my chest.)

(Yeah don't worry I want to do a lot of character development in general.)

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( Everyone has prejudices and someone they trust a lot.)