@blue_topaz
(I'm not good at critiqueing. But she's awesome.)
Thank you! I've been editing and developing her for almost half a year, any feedback or sections that need improvement?
(I'm not good at critiqueing. But she's awesome.)
Thank you! I've been editing and developing her for almost half a year, any feedback or sections that need improvement?
(M'kay. So Sabine is 16, so then Falon is 10.)
(k. My bad!)
(I'm not good at critiqueing. But she's awesome.)
Thank you! I've been editing and developing her for almost half a year, any feedback or sections that need improvement?
(Not really. But may I just say that the baseball bat thing is creepy)
(k. My bad!)
(Don't worry about it XD)
(I'm not good at critiqueing. But she's awesome.)
Thank you! I've been editing and developing her for almost half a year, any feedback or sections that need improvement?
(Not really. But may I just say that the baseball bat thing is creepy)
You may! xD basically when she and Macha ran from the R.A.C., they ended up in New York City (in the other rp it's Seattle, but not in the book). Fae finds an old baseball bat, and practices with it since they have no other weapons.
(Hmm)
Falon nodded. "We surrender!!!!"
He grinned widely, "Awe.. thanks," he hugged her wholly in return.
Macha laughed, setting her down gently and landing lightly.
He grinned widely, "Awe.. thanks," he hugged her wholly in return.
She breathed in his smell for a moment, pulling away to offer him the gift bag shyly. "It's not much.."
Aiden laughed. "Nice meeting you Macha. Well……..we're off." He and Falon scrambled out of the room. "Probably trying to come up with an April Fool's Day prank." Sabine explained. "They do it together every year."
"Oh," he blinked, "Thanks, Fae." He stepped aside to welcome her indoors.
Macha laughed. "Must be nice to have siblings."
(I started my 17th rp cuz why not lol)
"Oh," he blinked, "Thanks, Fae." He stepped aside to welcome her indoors.
Fae stepped inside, a calm but excited smile on her face.
"It is, but…………….they can be a pain sometimes." Sabine agreed. Then she grabbed the remote and turned on the tv, going strait to her Amazon video account full of Disney movies and shows. She turned on The Lion King.
Macha jumped a bit as music started to play. "Whoah.. It's like a video but with drawings!!"
Sabine laughed. "I guess you could put it that way. Come on." She patted to the blanket and pillow pile beside her.
"My uncle's still asleep, so we can watch television or something while we wait. I have cheerios and stuff if you haven't eaten breakfast,"
Sabine laughed. "I guess you could put it that way. Come on." She patted to the blanket and pillow pile beside her.
Macha sat down, spellbound.
"My uncle's still asleep, so we can watch television or something while we wait. I have cheerios and stuff if you haven't eaten breakfast,"
Wait isn’t it 12:00?
Aye, can i just say both cruz and his uncle are lazy and forgot the time? Lol )
(sure! xD)
Fae smiled, slightly sleepy. "TV sounds great right now. And sure, I um… Well I usually forget to eat breakfast when I wake up before my parents."
"Yeah. What time is it?" He asked her. In fact, as he said that, he was still in his pajamas, which was a loosely fitting white t-shirt and shorts.
(lol)
"12 o'clock. Mr. Ponticelli will probably be here soon."
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