@StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder
(I think we have 5 people)
(I think we have 5 people)
Oh, alright.
(Including me? Or am i able to join?)
(Idk where the owner of this Rp is)
(sorry guys I was busy!! Uhm @_Write_Where_I_Wanna_Be and @Reed , we're already full, sorry!)
(For the ppl who posted character sheets, the world it takes place in is modern, basically ours, so…there aren't any fantasy elements, sorry)
(I'll use Avery but pretend that her mutations are a result of the experimentations)
(Wait, so what kinda stuff would we put? Are talking about telekinesis and the such?)
(okay! Also I might not be on a lot today, I'm super busy. Sorry!)
(yeah telekinesis is fine. Just don't be too overboard :) )
Name (chosen, not number): Veleda Neyeres
Nicknames: –
Number: 5
Age: 18
Gender and sexuality: Female, bisexual
Appearance: Veleda is 5'3 and has thick, golden-colored hair that stops at her shoulders. Her build is petite and somewhat fragile-looking, but she's actually quite strong. She has tan(ish) skin tone, and purple/ pink looking eyes. Also, she has lots of Asian features. She likes to wear baggy sweaters and sweatpants or leggings.
Personality: Pretty laid-back. She's not exactly the curious type. She just wants people (including herself) to live in peace and be happy. And she would fight till her very last breath to achieve peace for someone. Old soul, very wise. Thinks things through
Unique markings (tattoos (including the location of Number tattoo), scars, etc): Her number tattoo is located on her left wrist. She has burn scars all over her legs, and other scars all over, even on her tongue. She has a Chinese dragon tattoo on her right arm, and a dying cherry blossom tree with a rotting dragon skull underneath it on her back. Also has a really small heart tattoo on her middle finger.
Backstory (it’s fine if you leave it mostly blank and fill it out as we RP): For now I'll just say it's bad
Powers: Foresight and heightened senses. She can only see certain things with her foresight, and it's not controlled by her. (Usually only sees things if someone's life is in danger)
Other: Uh, she likes reading I guess-
Is she good?
(yeah she's good! Has everyone posted a character?)
Full name: Avery Fern
Nickname (if any): Ave, Fern
Age: 24
Shipping?: hell yeah
Race: mixed, she is part Draconian, part Atmosian
Powers: Avery is able to control things in there liquid state. Her strength is in water and poison, being able to control where it goes, shape it, and freeze it. These are two that she is good at manipulating, she has yet to experiment with other liquids
Personality: Avery is kind of friendly, and outgoing unless it is nighttime or if she doesnt like the look of you. She likes to stay up at night and sleep during the day. She has a tendency to fiddle when she is overly bored.
Appearance: Avery has short dark purple and silver hair that is long on one side and short on the other. She has dark green eyes with flecks of silver, dark sand colored skin, light freckles dotting her nose, two lip piercings. She is around 5'6" and has a curvy but thin body shape.
Eye color: dark green with silver specks
Weight: about 66kgs
Height: 5'6"
Skin tone: dark sand
Distinguishing marks: light freckles dotting her nose, a tattoo of an arrow on her shoulder blade, the skyline of a city on her left calf, a bird in flight on her right forearm, and the words 'To Dream' in fancy lettering under her right ear
Other: she has pointed teeth because of her draconian heritage and her hair and eyes become mainly silver with flecks of other colours when she is exhausted or using her powers too much
Weapon: she is skilled with a bow and arrow and likes to use a bladed staff https://pin.it/zy3pa2eoz26rmp like this but with a longer length and in black and silver
Backstory: Avery was adopted by a lovely couple when they found her in the cloud kingdom, covered in a sticky red substance and wearing rags. She was about 11 at that time. She and her family lived in the land of Crofae, home of the Draconian people. they lived alongside many beautiful creatures such as Cenefy's, small fairy sized horses, Tasfa's, tiger striped faeries that come four times a year to help change the seasons and take back with them small outfits or items that the Draconian's create and leave for them. The land was found by the Draconites who wanted to find a safe haven for their people. But they were betrayed by their most trusted friends. they were killed in battle and from their corpses rose mountains and forests that became home to those with Draconian blood flowing through their veins. Avery and her parents lived in her mother's home land, the beautiful cloud kingdom of the Atmosia Fae. These creature were in charge of clouds and rain. when the Hunters of Del'rai came from the underworld, they destroyed their land and killed as many Atmosian's as they could find. Avery and her family were one of 10 families that managed to escape. They went with Her father to his home, the land of Crofae. their she grew up and studied crime and history. She recieved her Detectives license and started travelling, solving crimes, big and small, in various cities and town all across the land.
Other: she has a pet wolf pup that she found after its mother was killed by hunters. This one hid when they came to take the pups away. She named it Rebel and he has been loyal to her
Hobbies?: she likes music and making new songs, she appreciates art and enjoys sketching once in a while
Likes: music making and listening, painting, playing with Rebel
Dislikes: larger insects, black dogs, tubers
Fears: arachnophobia, slight claustrophobia, and a fear of losing the only family she ever knew
Talents: using her staff, she is able to making killing look like an art with the help of her beautiful staff
Weaknesses: Avery is not able to control one type of liquid, DragonFire poison. Bled from the hearts of the ancient Draconite who sacrificed themselves to create a land for the Draconians. This blood was transformed into black snakes that burrowed beneath the surface. Their poison is deadly to the Draconian people because it was the betrayal of one of them that caused the deaths of the draconites. Any draconian that comes into contact with this poison is paralyzed. The time of paralysis depends on how much poison came into contact with their bodies. She is not able to use her abilities either if she comes until contact with it.
Deepest secret: she was responsible for the death of her family and about 15 others as well
Number: 2
So…after rereading your character, i found some issues that don't exactly fit this RP. Can you please rewrite her using the template provided? Also she's a little old compared to everyone else. And the backstory doesn't fit, either. I'm sorry if this causes you any issues, but she really doesn't fit the RP as-is. Thank you!
Name (chosen, not number): Avery Fern
Nicknames: Ave, Fern
Number: 2
Age: 23
Gender and sexuality: female/Bisexual
Appearance: Avery has short dark purple and silver hair that is long on one side and short on the other. She has dark green eyes with flecks of silver, dark sand colored skin, light freckles dotting her nose, two lip piercings. She is around 5'6" and has a curvy but thin body shape.
Eye color: dark green with silver specks
Weight: about 66kgs
Height: 5'6"
Skin tone: dark sand
Distinguishing marks: light freckles dotting her nose, a tattoo of an arrow on her shoulder blade, the skyline of a city on her left calf, a bird in flight on her right forearm, and the words 'To Dream' in fancy lettering under her right ear
Personality:Avery is kind of friendly, and outgoing unless it is nighttime or if she doesnt like the look of you. She likes to stay up at night and sleep during the day. She has a tendency to fiddle when she is overly bored.
Unique markings (tattoos (including the location of Number tattoo), scars, etc): see above
Backstory (it’s fine if you leave it mostly blank and fill it out as we RP): idk, I've stripped her of everything so she doesnt have a backstory
Powers: Avery is able to control things in there liquid state. Her strength is in water and poison, being able to control where it goes, shape it, and freeze it. These are two that she is good at manipulating, she has yet to experiment with other liquids
Other:
(okay thank you! I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but she just didn't quite fit as she was.)
(Eh, no biggir)
Name: Luna Sanders
Nicknames:
Number: 1
Age: 16
Gender and sexuality: Female and straight
Appearance: Light blonde hair, tan skin, electric blue eyes, thin, but an athletic built body.
Personality: sarcastic, upbeat, intelligent, athletic, (I’ll add more as it goes.)
Unique markings: The location of her number is on her wrist.
Backstory (it’s fine if you leave it mostly blank and fill it out as we RP):
Powers: Telekinesis
Other: She has this locket that her brother gave her when she was like five, and it has a picture of her and her whole family in it. Along with a note from her brother that is hidden, and she hasn’t seen it, yet.
(Oh and uhhh just ignore the stuff i put on for my character, he'll just have uhhhh teleportation powers??)
(i like her!)
(the ice powers are fine if you want to keep them! But otherwise, yeah you can change it if you want)
(Ahhh well uhhh i just wanted to know if my character was acceptable my dude XDD or if changing him to a teleporter would be better? It's all up to you man !)
(i honestly don't mind either way. Hes your character, and the only things that are kinda an issue are his backstory, but I can see how it fits sorta. The powers are fine no matter what you decide! :) )
(Ah okey, i think I'll keep the powers then uwu and i can always say that he was born at the facility if that's okay :>)
(alright! Yup that's totally fine :) has everyone posted a character now?)
(Are we starting?)
(I think so!!!)
(Oh, nice)
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