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( Am I allowed to join, if I wasn't in the original rp?)
( Am I allowed to join, if I wasn't in the original rp?)
( I didn't expect many people from the first rp to join, considering half of them are inactive or deleted now, so yes! That is not a restriction. Only the healer role is available, and you'll have to post your form :) )
( Alrightly then.)
CAN I JOIN?? here is my character Approved?
Name: Kamryn Wisp (Kam)
Age: (Ranging from 16-24) 20
Gender: female
Role: (Fighter, Strategist, Healer, Defender. Check character list for available positions) Healer?
Personality: Kamryn is a new character so not much to say. She is a fun person that knows when to take charge. she is a good friend and always does whats best for others. she iws normally friendly, but if you get her mad or if she doesn't trust you, she'll be your worst nightmare.
Short bio: (What brought you to the ocean, what were you doing?) Kamryn love nature. she was out on the beach and decided to go for a swim. she went underwater to look at the coral reef and her foot got caught in something and she drowned.
Appearance: (Include outfit) she has dark red hair, almost brown, and dark blue eyes. she is curvy but skinny? if that makes sense. she like to use inspiration from her favourite movies to plan her outfits. on the day she died she was wearing something similar to this: https://www.pinterest.ca/pin/366199013420888551/
Skills: (Specifically anything that might aid you in battle/survival) has skill has a home doctor and uses home remedies to get better.
Weaknesses: (Emotionally and physically) she has asthma. and prefers to be alone. she doesn't like to hurt people but sometimes has to
Other: Underwater :D
( Great character, accepted! That means we've got everyone on the team and are ready to start! I'll post the starting post in just a bit :) Happy writing! )
Happy writing to you too!
(Woot!!)
(yayyy)
I open the door to see Queen Meredith standing with a handful of confused visitors at either side of her. Just to tease them, I lean on one foot and give Meredith a scolding eye.
"Madame, not again! You know what happened to the last innocent people you tried to recruit." Meredith chuckles and waves me off, leading them into my house. I look them up and down with a smile and greet them.
"Hi, my name is Myst. Don't believe anything Meredith tells you about me. I'm actually wonderful person."
"Myst," Meredith interjects, with a tinge of 'Please Stop, This is Serious' in her voice. "How far have you gotten on the case?" Testing my limits, I fold my arms at the queen.
"Excuse me, I still haven't offered them drinks yet." I turn to the five and smile my satire smile. "Alright, you guys, are you old enough to drink? I can make a killer martini."
"Myst." Meredith snaps at me and I pretend to look ashamed as I quiet down.
"This is Kristine," Meredith points to the man with long black hair. "And this is Tara, James, Lee Ace, and Kam." Meredith points to the respective people as she introduced me. I stand up straight and formal and nod my head at them.
"Nice to meet you all." I begin. "I'm am the leader for the case of the terrorists."
Meredith interrupts me.
"They are not terrorists, they have not committed any mass crimes yet."
"Yet."
"Myst, please behave."
I sigh heavily and continue.
"I'm not too skilled at the field work alone, so I asked the queen to recruit some people that might be able to help me. That's basically it, I guess. Any of you game?"
I look over at them and eagerly await their response.
Tara felt as if this was quite a bit to take in. She had only just died apparently and was already being recruited for some sort of terrorist group? She hummed in thought before giving her response. "What exactly would we be helping you with?" she asked, being cautious of this new stranger.
"Game?" I stutter slightly, looking around the room. I hold my left arm and bite my lip. Really I was terrified and had no idea what was going on. (I got it wrong… I hope not…) I was breathing heavily,"What's going on? What happened?"
(Wait is this all first person only? Should I edit my response?)
(It's whatever you're comfortable with. in fact i might change tenses a lot out of inability to stay consistent, so excuse that, but yeah, i'm not too strict with how you write :) )
James studies the room. Fish palaces aren't half bad. he thought. Looking out the window, he saw a beautiful scene before him. Not bad at all.
(Hey @BBC_Fangirl , the rules state for each post to be at least 4 sentences long excluding dialogue. Please lengthen your post. Describe how James is feeling, something he might be doing out of nervousness or shyness, or body language he might be conveying, as well as more thorough examination of his thoughts! )
(It was four sentences.)
( I see you've edited it, thank you. Make sure to describe the world around you! As well as your own character, it makes it more fun! :) )
(I-I didn't edit anything…. did it not load properly? My notebook is playing up so that might be it?)
( Probably )
Kamryn looked around at the new world. The placate was beautiful shades of blue and green with hints of purple here and there. Fish swam everywhere. A littl fish accidentally bumped into her. Looking it swam happily around her twice then swam back to its family. Waving to it she smiled. She thought about what the girl said and frowned. She only died like 10 minutes ago and now she was under water. She clutched her throat thinking she couldn’t breathe but found that she was breathing fine.
I examined the crowd of strangers amongst the group. Three girls and one boy stood confused while - Myst? Was it? - cheerfully smiled, standing tall and leader-like. Meredith, was more calm, but still sent good vibes. The water was warm, but I didn't feel any pressure from it, strangely. My clothes did not cling either.
"If you don't mind, can I ask a question? What makes you think we are worth recruiting? If these people are like me, I assume we died about, oh, very recently?"
Immediately, they had questions, which causes me to smile even further. That means they're interested.
"What exactly would we be helping you with?" The first girl, Tara, asks. My eyes wander up and around as I think of the various subjects they need to work on.
"Ideally, there won't be any field work. The most would be arresting the culprit. What you'll be working on would be like a game of clue. We gather the evidence that we have and come to a conclusion, but we can't make an arrest until we are absolutely positive who the leader of the organization is and have undeniable proof; Meredith's orders." I grin at Meredith as she playfully rolls her eyes.
"Game?" The next kid, Kristine, stutters, "What's going on? What happened?" My smile fades slightly, as I wonder if she knows where she is.
"Did someone explain what happened to you? I'd hate to repeat it, but you've drowned. But, no worries, this is something you could call the afterlife, or maybe the mid-afterlife. To be honest with you, I'm not sure how it works myself. I've only been here a few years. However, you're being offered a job already! This will have a big reward, in case anyone was wondering that."
I watch the other kids looking around as I await the next question. I hope everyone is interested in joining, and I hope that each of them will contribute wherever necessary.
"If you don't mind, can I ask a question?" One of the boys, Lee Ace I believe it was, spoke up. I nod and smile again. "Ask away."
"What makes you think we are worth recruiting?" I nod my head, realizing how interesting of a question that was. "If these people are like me, I assume we died about, oh, very recently?"
I grin and shrug my shoulders.
"Other than the fact that I believe each of you have plenty of potential, you're also trustworthy. You all just joined, and therefore there is no way in which any of you guys could be part of the organization!" I lean forward and point to my head.
"Pretty smart of us, isn't it?"
Tara seemed quite unsure about all of this. She bit her lip, contemplating if this was the best idea. While there was the promise of a reward, Tara didn't even know if she could consider herself as trustworthy. She had none of her memories after all. "I suppose so…" she replied. The girl now had her arms crossed loosely in front of her, unsure of joining or not.
Kristine looks around the room again, "Potential? Trustworthy? I still dont know where I am. The rest of you look ;ike you do. Care to elaborate?" She snaps, rubbing her arms unconsciously. All of the stuff she learned from Marine Biology seems to come flooding back to her but nothing compared to what she was seeing here in this place
Kamryn look at the other girl. She looked around the room and found some seaweed. Smooshing it in her hands, she made a ring with it and put it on the angry girls head “Chill chica! This seaweed will help cool your mind! Calm down and then speak.”
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