Oliver leaned over, wrinkling his nose at the sight of the blood as he reread the note, not believing the words Madelyn spoke at first. "The Piper…who's the piper? Is he from Wonderland?" He asked, glancing up towards the others in the room in question.
(Another important question: Who’s blood is it?)
//Don't know, it just sounds more ominous
"Also" Thanatos continued, "My father has disappeared from the under-realms, no one has seen him for hours and that is not normal"
"Not Wonderland, Is there anyone from The Forest here?" She asked the room. She is emotionally shut down and not capable of processing the fact that her father was missing as well.
Once Alex got back to Neverland, she had been informed that her father went missing. That made her very suspicious and concerned. In panic, she got her shadow to take her back to Wonderland and manages to make her way to the Carter Residense. "My father is missing." She said as she barged in.
"Sadly, the same pattern has been repeating for multiple people," Oliver sighed, standing up to sit next to Quinn as she slept. If the White Rabbit wasn't home, he didn't know how she would cope.
//I just watched the new Incredible's movie and holy crap it was incredible (No pun intended)
( Yeah, JaxJax was awesome!)
//I just watched the new Incredible's movie and holy crap it was incredible (No pun intended)
(I guess you could say that that pun was
punintentional.)
(Someone please distract me. I put a story up to be critiqued. I'm really proud of it, but because I like it so much I'm worried about what other people are going to say.)
(So it when well, but I had a lot of run on sentences. That I should have caught during my many read throughs.)
(Aw it’s okay.)
(I'm not mad, just disappointed in myself…. no I'm good. I'm just alway nervous that my writing is bad. I normally expect people to hate it, so when I do post things like 'Hats and Fate', 'Maddie's Dream', and short stories I kind start to panic about putting my writing out there.)
(Everyone makes a few grammar mistakes from time to time. Don’t let the fear of the mistake make you panic. •n•
Also, I’m sorry because I’m really bad at comfort and it’s probably not helping.)
(It's, ok , Grammar and spelling are not my strong suit and I know that. So I'm used to getting that kind of feedback. As long as it comes with things like, tugged at the heartstrings, thats deep, etc. the panic is worth it.)
(Have the twins even shown up to Maddie's yet?)
“Mother… is not home?” The Twins said in disbelief, “Impossible.” (Yes I have decided the Cheshire Cat is a female. •-•)
The Twins looked around their house, more specifically, their mother’s favorite spots around the house.
“She’s not on the sofa.” Cade called.
“She’s not underneath the sofa.” Chelsea yelled.
“Not on the roof.”
“Not on the ceiling.”
“No on the chair.”
“Not underneath the chair.”
“Not on the coffee table.”
“Not underneath the coffe table.”
“Not on the cabinets.”
“Not underneath our sanity.”
“Chelsea, this is Wonderland.”
“Oh shush.”
“Not with the cookie jar.”
“Not on the bookshelves.”
“Not in the teacups.”
“Not in the teapot.”
“She’s gone.” The Twins concluded sadly, “How impossible.”
“Let’s head over to Maddie’s, since everyone else is going.” Cade sighed, turning around slowly just to make sure their mother wasn’t hiding behind him.
“Right. And for this situation… I suppose we’re to use the Cheshire motto.” Chelsea sighed.
“We’re always supposed to use the Cheshire motto.” Cade shrugged, “We just always forget.”
“Right.”