forum Creativity is a crime rp, anyone?

Started March 16, 2018 by @SabMatt

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The cold hurt. Phoebe screamed as Marci’s Freezing hand touched her back, spasming violently.

(girl or boy?)

Erm… idk

An older guy rushed over to Micah. "I'm a doctor. What's wrong?" Micah sighed. "Oh thank goodness." He dragged the guy over to where Phoebe and Marco were.

Marco stepped back when the doctor walked in.

"I'm Kian." The doctor stated. Micah sat back down, letting out a sigh as he leaned the crutch against the wall. "What seems to be the matter?" Kian asked.

Blood dripped from Phoebe’s lips, and she opened her mouth. “Marco? Tell— tell him everything.”

(DON'T SAY ANYTHING…. I'm writing what happened.)

Okies

Marco sighed. "She was impregnated last year, and her uterus couldn't handle the birth, it was torn. The baby died and Phoebe has been having problems ever since."
(It's not that good.)

Kian frowned, stepping forward and placing a hand on Phoebe’s forehead. They both glowed briefly, and Ohoebe slumped, unconscious but no longer in pain. He then placed a hand on her stomach and froze.

(It’s fine!)

Wait— should O delete mine?)

"What is it?" Micah asked, seeing the shocked expression.

Never mind)

Marco saw the doctor freeze, "what?"

Ayu looked up. "I'm legit burning- oh god what's happening i think its my fault"

Kian swallowed, stepping back. “Her uterus is torn, we can fix that much easily. But…” He took a deep breath. “I May be incorrect, but she seems to be pregnant again.”

(nah yours is better)

Thanks! Yours was a lot more realistic)

"What?!" He yelled. "But..how? Did she…you know…do the do?"

Phoebe paled. “No. That’s not possible. I— I never even looked t someone the wrong way, this isn’t possible.” Her eyes betrayed her terror.

"Er, what? Marco?" Ayu looked right at him.

Marco furrowed his brows and turned back to Ayu, "I did nothing!"