forum Any Songwriters?

Started March 13, 2019 by @lemondad

tune

(#^u^#)
All of my songs end in death/suicide.

I think I need to review my mental state…

Agreed…there's more to this one but yeah

White is for innocence lost
For pills and snow and unknown cost
Blue for slow, endless approach
For infinities of calm encroach
Red for chaos, swords and wielding
For scorching tears and words unyielding
Yellow for stubborn denial
For sunny lies and phones undialed
Green for watching all alone
For bright breezes and silky stone
Purple for wild, dancing minds
For marching down walls unconfined
Orange for rough and slimy thoughts
For blood sliding around monsters caught
Gray for drifting in old silence
For ghosts threatening future violence
Pink for pretty, empty sunsets
For smooth perfume and small, unsaid threats
Brown for unreadable eyes
For rotting corpses in disguise

That’s the exact reason I don’t want people knowing about that song because people would be asking questions and I don’t want to have to revisit those memories; I already did it once and that was with my best friend but the way she handled it made it so much easier

being bullied for nearly 2&a-half years almost completely destroyed me and my family has no idea about how far it went

Agreed…there's more to this one but yeah

White is for innocence lost
For pills and snow and unknown cost
Blue for slow, endless approach
For infinities of calm encroach
Red for chaos, swords and wielding
For scorching tears and words unyielding
Yellow for stubborn denial
For sunny lies and phones undialed
Green for watching all alone
For bright breezes and silky stone
Purple for wild, dancing minds
For marching down walls unconfined
Orange for rough and slimy thoughts
For blood sliding around monsters caught
Gray for drifting in old silence
For ghosts threatening future violence
Pink for pretty, empty sunsets
For smooth perfume and small, unsaid threats
Brown for unreadable eyes
For rotting corpses in disguise

oh my god this flows so well! I don't know how to describe it but I just read it aloud and it just rolls of the tongue my god! this is amazing

I have a started thing I'm debating sharing…it's based off an rp I'm tho, like loosely.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
please share

Sksksk a'ight gimme a sec to type it. I wrote it in a notebook so…

Do you remember, who we were that summer?
Remember all the…things we said.
Well I've got file upon file, of broken promises.
And your name, is on almost every one.

My sneakers held together
With ducktape and glue.
And the way that your eyes sparkled
As the summer breeze blew.

It was us against the world
Oh just you and me, and I'd give anything
For us to be

Young again, with the wind in our hair
Young again, when we didn't have a care.
Your hand in mine, chasing the stars
Back before we were both broken hearts

Broken promises, empty picture frames
A locket with our photos, the memories we made.
Capture fireflies in a mason jar
Jumping over sidewalk cracks, thought we'd make it far

That's as far as I've gotten lmao

[Whisper.exe has just crashed. Would you like to reboot?]

[Reboot has failed]

[randomly starts working again. Virus is still in the process of being eliminated.]

I wuv it

low-key wanna post the few lyrics I've written but I'm terrified of won't be good

Please do! I love seeing your guys' stuff. It's so cool to get to see this kind of stuff

Agreed! Also I had the best most amazing tune and lyrics for a song in my head but I forgot it already I'm crying PLEASE TELL ME THIS HAPPENS TO YOU GUYS TOO

IT DOES AND I HATE IT. I DO IT AT NIGHT, I'LL COME UP WITH THEM AND THEN IN THE MORNING THEYRE GONE

ALMOST EVERY TIME!! I have to write it down immediately or I'll forget it. That's why I carry paper everywhere.

YES, all the time, hence i own like 5 notebooks and i stash them everywhere just in case. I also record things on my phone if i can